Scarlet Speedster: Mercury

LV 5

Majeh7

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LV 4

neil_douglas

I was barely able to get through the first chapter because of the poor grammar and multiple spelling mistakes. Also I am not really thrilled with the character being so overpowered from the start and giving him the option of bestowing immortality onto five people is not really a good story idea. I understand since he has been immortal he would like company but the trauma of watching everyone else around you except for a handful of people will surely drive them mad. I would recommend a rewrite of the story.

LV 3

godofsystems

keep up the great work and dont drop keep up the great work and dont drop keep up the great work and dont drop keep up the great work and dont drop keep up the great work and dont drop keep up the great work and dont drop keep up the great work and dont drop keep up the great work and dont drop keep up the great work and dont drop keep up the great work and dont drop

LV 5

SFSAuthorkun

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