Selling to the Warhammer 40k universe

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W4ND3R1N6_R34D3R

"While the enemies of the Emperor still draw breath, there can be no peace." "Show me a fortress and I'll show you a ruin." "The rewards of tolerance are treachery and betrayal." "There is no time to plan, there is no space to think. No respite. No forgiveness. There is only war." "For the foes of Mankind, the only mercy is a swift death." “Knowledge is power, guard it well. An open mind is like a fortress with its gates unbarred and unguarded.” "Life is the Emperor´s currency, spend it well." "Brave are they who know everything yet fear nothing." “Even a man who has nothing can still offer his life. Only in death does duty end. No man died in His service that died in vain. Hope is the first step on the road to disappointment.” “A good soldier obeys without question. A good officer commands without doubt.” “Innocence proves nothing.” “Some may question your right to destroy ten billion people. Those who understand realise that you have no right to let them live!” “What is your Duty? To serve Emperor’s Will. What is the Emperor’s Will? That we fight and die. What is Death? It is our duty. What is your Duty?...”

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jaden_cadawas

It has actually a very good premise and i would expect for more from author it has a great start and it is rare to find someone do a warhammer40K fanfic

LV 14

Beziik

Sufficient but not good enough. It seems you start from the assumption that the reader knows about 40k. This is bad in many different aspects. You didn't spend time to present is the MC, you didn't spend time to establish the world, how the system functions ... you just throw in random situations that this guy is completely fine going along with out of nowhere and then dump some random information about unrelated events that played some part in history but do not have more than a historical tie into the present instances, info dumping for short. Work more on these points, at least make the guy discover more of the world along with us. Making it ignorant is annoying but having him explain random stuff for no reason makes 0 sense

LV 4

CleversonBonassi

8chs and for now is very interesting! need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words,

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Zombiedread

I have no idea what’ going on in this story, it’s turned Into cultivation for some reason and he’s not on earth or our earth or something Idk so confusing, read if u want to, but I just can’t understand the story. Great idea, storyline needs a lot of work

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America_Yea

This one mixes a cultivating trash world(not that I think cultivating is itself bad it'sjust done poorly here) with warhammer 40k and it just doesn't fit well together how it's done here. Honestly I expected better from a warhammer fan because it might work fairly well but the cultivation isn't even done right. That stuff is supposed to be used to give the mc a plot excuse to go exploring for resources and that mystical ginsing that's buried in some young master's great great great grandfather's tomb or wherever else the mc needs to go to get stuff like a flying sword. here, instead it's all the bad tropes with everything handed to the mc on a silver platter as far as the cultivating goes which completely defeats the purpose and just turns things into a sausage measuring contest on that side.

keep it up.Good read so far .it my first war hammer fin novel read and it have protencel .And plz do not make mc super op quick it make BORING.. also it a war hammer novel where political is a thing don't forget this.good read 4.5*

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EchoingDusk

Burn the Heretic! Kill the Mutant! Purge the Unclean!

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michael_cox

does anybody know where the pirate this and also if it's been finished on top of that what happened to the author