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As the wild and uncontrollable Christopher leads the pack to their fight against the hunters that have began hunting their kind, the younger Pride has his hands full with carrying out his brothers orders, taking care of his new adopted gay son and his newly found omega mate.
However when the secrets that revolve the pride family slowly come to light and those who they have wronged seek revenge, what will the sons of pride do and does the myth about the king of were-direwolves exist?
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I like how humorously and amusingly the way the storyline progresses. Well thought out plot construction with descriptively tailored sequence of events and character sketching. Those brothers were notorious haha. Good work author!
A story well written and the characters are well described. The flow of the story is smooth. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story. I wish you the best on your book. 👍
Really interesting character so far, though the time-skip was kinda confusing. I like the dire-werewolf and magic background, the writing is also pretty smooth. Just find some time to explain the terms like apha, beta, omega, the bite etc...
Very well-written. I really enjoyed the humorous parts and the amusing ones. Boy oh boy, the brothers are trouble lol. I like how the details were given to us little by little. It's still the beginning but the book's got a lot of potential. I'll be waiting for an update (☞ﾟ∀ﾟ)☞
A pretty interesting prrmise of two main characters and their own characteristics, i can't wait to see how the story unfolds and brings out more elements. Good luck Author 👍
Holy--! The writing style really draws me in! The synopsis even, and the story even more! Even though there were only a few chapter, please update more author!! Please say hello to my humble library😁🤣 good work author! keep updating!
Writing is amazing, the grammar is perfect. Characters, style... I don't know what do say! It's refreshing seeing a story about werewolves without the "mate romance" (for me, at least), so I enjoyed reading it. Full marks, author. For sure, this ends in my library.
This is a very well written story. Although not a lot of chapters has been released by the author, I can definitely see this book as a diamond in rough in the sea of books here on Webnovel. I WILL DEFINITELY BE COMING BACK FOR MORE!!
The novel is action pack! Awesome start! I was drawn to the siblings Helix and Chris. They were your typical siblings, but they are not ordinary. The strongest Alpha's were harboring secrets. Interesting so far! Good job Author!
You sure you're not a professional?, well this story is really well written with a non human protagonist that makes it even more interesting, the difference between characters with the background design, i hope that this novel become successful one day.
It took me a decent amount of time to write this story. Months when i did nothing but chart up information about the character and giving them backgrounds. I am happy that i can finally bring them to life. Honestly this book is more than just words for me.
The story is already great even tho it's still few. Looking forward for more chapters. I very love this kind of story so please keep up the good work I'll read your future chaps!
Question, are you a professional? God, the quality of the writing is amazing. Amazing character are phenomenal, and I love how different the characters are from one another. I could probably read one dialogue and know who said it. It's amazing.
its going nice so far. I really find it interesting, and hope you carry on! The characters are making me feel quite curious about them too. I like the plot and the way you write draws a reader well! Keep on writing!
This is interesting and can become a really good story if you keep with the pace you are going. I like your writing style, it is nice. Now, your grammar is a little bit of a mess. You are missing commas were it is needed, some places need space while others don’t need it. The first paragraph on the second chapter needs revision because it is unclear, has a misspelled word, and sentence fragment. Other than that, once you fix those, your story will be on the right track. Keep up the good work!
The writing style is good, not having long paragraph. It make the chapter look neat. About grammar, i can't comment on it. Since im not good too. But, for me. As long as I can read the chapter finely and understand the story, all is well. on chapter 2 there some wrong word that author use. If you re read it, you will find it. for example, you use now instead know. 'i raised you you idiot' instead 'i raised you, you idiot'
This review was made with only two chapters in. That said, the writing quality is already remarkable. I personally like the fuidity of the storytelling and I feel that all the necessary details for an introduction was present and delivered in a creative manner (show not tell). Im intrigued that both brothers were given the same amount of importance in the intro. will they engage into a sibling-related conflict? who's the real MC? Is it Chris or is it Helix? What's the deal with the witch? Who's the mate? What role/contribution will the wounded boy make? These are the engaging questions that made me wonder about the story at this point. Excited for future chapters. Just want to point out some spelling errors. I would suggest to do some line editting. Other than that, you have a gem of a story, author. Your first two chapters are very effective. 👍
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Only two chapters out right now so I really can't say much. Writing quality is okay, with minimal mistakes. The characters seem interesting, as well as the plot. Recommend for those who like werewolf stories. Keep writing author!
Definitely one of the more professionally written stories on this site. An intriguing tale of two werewolves. A fantastic beginning to what I hope will be a great book.