Starting Life

I died, but I also didn't, when I died a lady came to me, and told me I could become the owner of a universe since my soul had excess divinity inside it. I naturally accepted, and then was given a video game system that told me the basics, and helped me make my new body as a God.

Hello, this is unrelated to the story but I'm just in Eighth grade so don't be too mean spirited with criticism and please just give constructive criticism. Thanks and I hope you enjoy the story.