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A Fan Fic About Jude Who Randomly Transmigrated In the Avatar the last Airbender world. Situated In The Earth Kingdom how will Jude Survive In this Familiar and dangerous world
Situated In Just after Aang hatched from the Iceberg
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Write a reviewStory about Jude who transmigrated to a fictional world with no actual cheats It contains Romance some lemon scenes and may be Harem not sure yet. As for the story, I havenโt really planned anything but I will make it as i write
Don't let the cover fool you. The author secretly killed off Toph and replaced her with a mature, curvy, submissive, older girl with the same name. as of yet the MC has no real backstory except hes awesome at bending, it'll probably stay that way because emotions allude him. probably won't get over the disrespect thats been done to toph. shame on you.
Have read 4 chapter soo far and having great expectations for the future update, keep it up author [img=recommend]. ps: hoping the story will go far, many avatar fanfic stop midway
Well... There are not many... or none at all where Toph is one of the heroines, it was a pleasant surprise, even more so that this toph version is more mature, more sรชx^y and curvier. Now onto the novel itself... it needs to be edited as its has a lot of redaction issues. One of thhe most annoying is the dialogue... Its extremely hard to understand where the dialog starts and were it finishs... I recommend that the dialog is always put in a new line or always the first part of the text... Like this: "This is a dialogue", some text for background. Followeb by some info dumb. [New line] "Next dialog".... Also, sometimes author forgets to use "" for conversations, making it even harder to understand. Lastly.... POWER UP TOPH!... She learnt metal bending due to being caged... but thats only cause she thought about it because being trapped. IF mc introduces the idea of bending metal, sand, lava, glass, mud, liquifying (turn earth into a state similar to quicksand which quickly swallows anything).... Earthbending should allow to bend INORGANIC matter... so any piece of earth, metal, mineral is a go.
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Not bad at all i just hope it doesn't get dropped ....................................................................................................
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Loving it and i cant wait for more! I wabt jude to grow and love. _โโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโ__โโโโโ___โโโโโโ โโโโโ____โโโโโโ__โโโโโ โโโโโ___โโโโโ_____โโโโโ โโโโโ_______________โโโโโ _โโโโโ______________โโโโโ __โโโโโ____________โโโโโ ___โโโโโ__________โโโโโ ____โโโโโ________โโโโโ _____โโโโโ_____โโโโโ ______โโโโโ__โโโโโ _______โโโโโโโโโ _________โโโโโ _______โโโโโ _____โโโโโ
Li a historia atรฉ e gostei muito de como ele apresenta os personagen , fazendo o MC muito talentoso para dobra mas mesmo assim nรฃo sabendo fazer tudo desde o inicio da mais veracicidade e imersรฃo na historia espero que ela continue pois รฉ muito boa.
So far so good, Like how itโs an original character instead of transmigrating into one of the casts. Havent seen many fics that follow earthbending mc so im curious where this will go
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More please. This story looks good so far. Excited for more. More please. This story looks good so far. Excited for more.More please. This story looks good so far. Excited for more.
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