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Thousands of years ago, a legendary figure within the World of Realms disappeared along side an ancient clan.
Modern day Earth, world renowned archaeologist Olapa Asan and his team wanders into the ancestral grounds of a Fallen civilization.
A series of near death encounters force Asan to flee from his world with a Legendary item, while saving his archaeological team.
Transported into the World of Realms, Asan wakes in the body of an assassinated ten year old.
From the information he had gotten from the Legendary item which was a white gemstone, Asan found out the world he was transported to had a strange power called 'Essence Energy' and majority of the Living things within this world were cultivators of this 'Essence Energy'
A world with myriad of races, from humans to Magical Beasts to Demons to Charming spirits and other oddities.
Thrown into the new world as a mortal, Asan must struggle to survive in a world where the weak were treated as second class citizens, while hiding from powerful organizations and cultivators.
His must battle to transcend his mortal roots and understand the mysteries of the new the world, this will lead him to forming friends and mortal enemies.
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This is the best original I’ve had read thus far. Easily readable in terms of grammar and clarity. Has a solid foundation with a MC with a relatable mindset- rational and not a young master ready for slaughter if someone coughs in his general direction. I will definitely keep reading and only hope the story does not alter too many of the MCs qualities currently present throughout the novel. P.S. please no harem 😩
So review hmm well here goes nothing *Deep breath* cough cough too deep too deep Start Writing style good Mistakes hardly any found Will I say it's Promising ? yes very much Cultivation system is good and its levels ,well the tittle already spoiled it It's gives the perspective of a modern person who thrown into the ruthless cultivation world Completely forcefully MC's life is frought with difficulties , hardships As a mortal he had the ability to offend beasts at Apex cultivation so not gonna elaborate about his guts As for cheats well they are well deserved and believe me without this cheats pretty much he got no fighting chance whatsoever (even with them I can only see a break future) Romance no clue( somewhat unlikely feels as such) MAIN POINT author is committed to not leave a single speck This is a disciplined work and pretty funny if you ask me but I see a lack of curse words cause believe me when I tell you if any one of us where in similar at least I will curse like there is no tommorow because literally there may not be
Honestly it’s not bad. The beginning was horrible and could be shortened out. It’s pretty funny and enjoy the most is Master. Perfect character. -The story is so slow! It’s going to take over 200Chapters at this rate for MC to get revenge. No Arc/Enemy should be that long. -I really don’t like “Yan’er” the MC likeness to her felt really forced. She struck me as a foolish girl, considering she didn’t believe in MC and is under the ‘Queen’. Even Li Li gives me a better impression. I love LiLi characters, comedic duo. -I really love how the MC didn’t go the cliche route and didn’t assumed ‘Xue ying’ identity. -There’s useless information every now and then. Outer division of the outer core, inner division of the outer core, then inner division of the inner core, i was fine with just “Helping Division” it made sense since a Sect needs servants. But man you’re making it like a long spiderweb. Whatever happen to just Outer/inner court, keep it ******. I’m not a grammar natzi but there’s are a lot of spelling errors, things also need to be worded out differently. -Honestly the Sect a d*ck lol. I really hope MC only gives it face for Elder Chen but has no feelings for the Sect. Him and his group of Helper Disciples are suppressed and not talented. I can see how MC cheat will aid them in the future. Last one is, i hope theres good romance!
Volume 1 - Affinity (Review) This novel is not half bad. Story is entertaining. Characters are well thought out. Plot is progressing at a good pace. Even though the 1st Volume 'Affinity' was the Introduction of Intro of this novel😂(a 100 chapters consisting 1st volume of introduction) , it kept things interesting. Story takes a dark turn right at the beginning and kept getting darker without seeing the light of the day(specially when the author decided to kill Xaoi He). All in all, it is a novel worth reading and what it lacked in comparison to those top ranking novels is 'HYPE' which I think will be covered in Volume 2 of 'introduction' 😂
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To be honest i love this story. It has a wonderful plot, characters and the story development is amazing too. But.. but.. i Can't stand the writing style. For the love of peterpan there are too many redudant sentences in the story that i really really cant stand it. Like when you use the sentence "unknow to them the ............ is asan". That sentence is so overuse that it become sooo annoying. I considering dropping this novel because of that... really.
Great novel with an excellent mc that slowly develops. Great story progression that really gets fleshed out over time, instead of not at all or all at once and never change.
Where are you buddy? we need enlightenment. we need guidance. we need YOU!... even your stat disciple has also gone missing. dont tell me/us that you have gone on a secluded cultivation to breakthrough a bottleneck? or are you cursed by some demon king? or purged by some so-called hero? have you gone on an adventure to save the princess? are you trying to hide from the assassins sent by the emperor? or are you gathering intelligence from all those heretic / rebel cults? have you found the treasure that could have the humanity? or have you opened a chest that spreads plague and trying to contain it? have you been researching on new technique ? or teaching skills to your disciple? or are you resurrected in an ancient world? got sucked in a game you are playing? Dude, earth may not need you nor our country nor my dying neighbor, but power bestowed by the stones needs to be responsibly put in use. And your wisdom is our only way to know the right path. And also, We need YOU because our ENERGY STONES only replenish after 24 hours
Very clear, easy to understand. The writing is efficient, but still manage to maintain the quality. I managed to convert all the words into pictures vividly, just like watching a movie. Nice job, author! Two thumbs up! 👍👍The plot flows naturally without exagerated. As for the characterssssssssss... I think they just fine. This novel can be a good example for begginer writers. Writing is easy, yes. But presenting your ideas completly with just simple sentences is not easy at all! Even for experienced writer. But of course everyone can learn. Practice makes perfect!
Nice, for an original story.. wow, i'm looking forward in the future, i hope it'll get a stable releases soon. ;) But maybe, it may take a while to make me hook up in the story that's why i'm gonna take a break from it.
This is A M A Z I N G so yup doing this for 9/week chapters thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you
Great story and great creativity. But you should decide what words you want to write (he/she - sects/clans/kingdoms - Inns/taverns - waists/backs/hands.............................................) It's rather annoying in the long run.
It's a good novel! But I don't want to overrate. The first drawback of the story is that it takes too long for a real story begin as cultivation novel (for me, the second book). The prologue also take too long and nothing really related to the story. There are many fillers (The author improved a lot except the fact that MC always shameless lmfao). The technique and explanation of skills are well described (in my opinion). The sidecar characters are too stupid and arrogant (?) except his friends and master. You can read it for fun! Don't mind my poor ENGLISH
MC had a great and practical personality, is intelligent, Savage and without the plot armors, good job with the character and story development, waiting for the moment when all hell breaks loose, thumbs up 👍👍👍👍👍
MC is suppoesed to be a respectable old man's reincernation story. But he acts like a horny teenage stupid useless kid with no sense of responsibility or intelligence. If author didn't attach a useless back story in the early chapters i would have give it a 3.5 But for him to think readers are idiots..... thats disrespectful.
It really gave me a surprise. To be honest I wasn't expecting much and I tend to skip originals here. But this one is quite good and kept me hooked from the moment I started reading it. It's just as good as most of the translated ones I almost went to check for raws:p Keep up the good work and I hope you stick to the end Mr. Dojo :)
So Moe! Make it 15 chapter/week already, the earlier you make it the more people will read and give you spirit stone... think like a business man ! don't be a let down! make 15 chapter/week already! I give u 5 start for now!
Much Much Much better than the other one. I started the novel from the beginning for a second time. The writing quality improves greatly this time around. Seems you settled down to edit your work this time author san. Like I said in the other novel, the story has a lot of potential if handled well and from what I'm seeing the author might (fingers crossed) handle it well. Keep up the work. Great Novel.
The story so far is amazing I am on chapter 14 one thing I hope is that you will at least have a ending no matter how bad or amazing it it. Also I am 100% bad with writing so excuse me if I’m not good with it.
I guess this is the edited version of 7 realms. It is now a lot easier to read it since the bulk of paragraphs are gone. Will read more for further review.
Hi guys, Mrdojo here. This is my first Novel. I want all my dear readers to be patient with me and the story. i hope we will be here together for the amazing journey that is to come. Thank you very much for reading my First Novel. Happy Reading.