The CEO's Contract Marriage

A naive little girl as an MC, of course, it would make people want to see what she'll grow into. XD I want to see how things will progress in her and her male lead's story. So far, I find the leads and the characters around them very intriguing. <3 Btw, sorry I'm not really good at making reviews and could only make some general suggestions. Imho, you're already doing good. But if there's something that could probably be improved, probably it's the frequency of the conversation. There are people who only read the dialogues so it's sometimes dangerous to write a whole chap without any exchange of words in it (I mean, little to no convo). Perhaps, you could try to explain stuff through the dialogues, or at least make it appear like the characters are thinking of it (enclosed in '...'). XD My writing style is almost the same as yours, and most of the times I can't control myself when it comes to explanations and elaborations. Making it appear like the character is talking to herself/himself works for me. Though I know it differs from person to person, maybe you could also try it. :-)

Although there aren’t that much chapters, it’s been an interesting read so far. The FL loses her parents at a young age and has to get married to the ML. It’s quite early to say but the FL and ML’s relationship is cute so far! I hope it doesn’t end up like those other arranged marriage novels wherein the ML abuses the FL. The FL is one of the characters I’ve been liking so far. Even is she is somewhat naive, she still stands up for herself :) Kudos to the author for their hard work and great book! Writing Quality: The author’s grammar and sentence structure definitely deserves a high rating. The characters and scenes are described perfectly that visualizing it comes naturally. However, I do suggest the author to proofread some of the chapters. Stability of Updates: The author somehow updates frequently so 5 stars for this one! Story Development: As I’ve mentioned earlier, it’s rather early to say anything about the story development. All I can say is that the 12 chapters posted are very promising and wouldn’t disappoint future and current readers :)

Read the novel and it was nice, hope to get more chapters, dear author and continue posting. Please mass release for us so we can enjoy more of the story:)

This story, as up to chapter 9, is a refreshing change from dallying, hopelessly naive female mcs without an ounce of self preservation. Ana is a (while young) heir of a company that lost her parents. The obligatory cutthroat relatives are scheming against her rights of attaining her rights to the company. Ana, still in a state of mourning and wavering because of a now uncertain future, is pressured by a debtor of her parents and has to contemplate a forced/arranged marriage with the debtors heir - 8 years her senior, and already a known size in the business world, a jaded, weary man that is equally horrified by the arrangements/plans of his grandfather. In my opinion, as of the current state, the male lead seems nice enough; somewhat capable of empathy, not going down the 'jade like beauty, cold and peerless' route (read enough of these sociopaths to be glad about differing options >.> ) he even seems to possess a tad of honor and humor o.o! Ana herself is a realistic character. As a young, somewhat sheltered heiress, she still possesses a mind of her own. Her state of grieving is depicted in a convincing and realistic way. She is self-conscious (sometimes very much so), but that can be expected by someone aware of the possible consequences of their actions. The quality of writing is very good, there are a few misspellings here and there, but the author is very thorough in weeding them out. The descriptions are vivid and relatable; the characters themself seem like real (faulty) people and have their own quirks. The characterizations are believable, not over the top and sometimes sprinkled with a touch of humor, so I myself find the really pleasing. The stability of updates is given, quality over quantity, but of a nice length, sometimes the author even brings out a few crumbs more for the starving vultures *wink* World-building is done in a slow, meticulous and subtle manner so it often may not even be noticed. As the story is only in its first chaps there hasn't been much of it though, so I give only 4* for now. All in all, this story is one I warmly recommend anyone interested in a mature, relatable romance story (and as the author promised, some smut which I expect to be well written for change) :)

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