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Wow, that's a cool story, man. I didn't expect much, but it's a really good plot and story development. I'll wait until inspiration returns to the author to continue reading.)
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This is the best MC X Tsunade fan fiction I have ever read!!! I have read this fic from start to the latest chapter 4 times I can't wait for it to continue and am hereby requesting the author to please continue the story
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Interesting premise, but unfortunately it's failed by the author. Pretty much from the first beat, the story is nothing but nonsensical moments that don't belong, only there to advance the plot and nothing else. None of the characters are anything like their canon counterparts with no real reason given for the difference.
Don't abandon this Sire! I'd like to read more of his childrens Adventure and new preggo Tsunade.. Come on pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls and Also what happen on SHinobi World(Boruto)..
the story is not bad just that the author does not know naruto and begins to put everything at random and makes it very confusing, the writing quality is not bad and but the protagonist looks like a fake character, the background of the world is not that great the author came up with the Greek gods who blessed him by giving him various powers and after obtaining them it seems that nothing has changed besides having a wife, so in my opinion the story is not much at first it was good but then it goes to make matters worse I saw from the comments that the author depends too much on what they write and this made the story worse, however it can be a nice pastime to read it
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I loved how the plot progressed, until the Marvel+Harry Potter universe. very absurd after Tony flirting Tsunade But the MC doesn't take revenge, it could just send a Shinobi to mess with Tony or take over Stark Industries, and also why MC son was not taught what the way of Ninja was even though their mother was the 5th Hokage and Matriax of the Senju clan. The MC family is OP but in Harry Potter Plot they was so Lowkey, didn't have adrenaline and so slow pace
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you dear author-san have won me over I was putting this off because I have too many lemon books to read, but I decided to read it and I couldn't stop so I will watch your career with great interest. here is a thumbs up from jasmin-sama
I'm sorry for your loss. My condolence`s. I`ve been there it really sucks! I love your story it is very imaginative. I really like the slice of live and ordinary day to day living vibe for these extraordinary people. I think your going for, the juxtaposition of these powerful people trying to live the quiet life in the Marvel Universe just tickles me pink , It begs to wonder how many other powerful people are doing the same in the Marvel Universe, Maybe it something you want to play around with. (yours truly john Babcock)
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
Simply a great book, although the main character is op, the story itself focuses mainly on the title relationship of the characters where the romance between them is not forced, they have their ups and downs but they rise from them creating an even stronger bond between each other. Great humor many times I laughed at the phone screen (while gaining strange looks from the family). I highly recommend it.
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I've been shrugging this fanfic off for quite some time thinking that this would just be your typical overpowered MC who likes to stick his d*ck onto every hole he can find but I was wrong. The MC has the ability to travel to the real world and the Naruto world with the help of the blessings of some famed gods here on earth. I'm not gonna go in depth about the story but do know, give it a try, you surely won't regret it!
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Wow, that's a cool story, man. I didn't expect much, but it's a really good plot and story development. I'll wait until inspiration returns to the author to continue reading.)
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This is the best MC X Tsunade fan fiction I have ever read!!! I have read this fic from start to the latest chapter 4 times I can't wait for it to continue and am hereby requesting the author to please continue the story
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Interesting premise, but unfortunately it's failed by the author. Pretty much from the first beat, the story is nothing but nonsensical moments that don't belong, only there to advance the plot and nothing else. None of the characters are anything like their canon counterparts with no real reason given for the difference.
Don't abandon this Sire! I'd like to read more of his childrens Adventure and new preggo Tsunade.. Come on pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls and Also what happen on SHinobi World(Boruto)..
the story is not bad just that the author does not know naruto and begins to put everything at random and makes it very confusing, the writing quality is not bad and but the protagonist looks like a fake character, the background of the world is not that great the author came up with the Greek gods who blessed him by giving him various powers and after obtaining them it seems that nothing has changed besides having a wife, so in my opinion the story is not much at first it was good but then it goes to make matters worse I saw from the comments that the author depends too much on what they write and this made the story worse, however it can be a nice pastime to read it
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I loved how the plot progressed, until the Marvel+Harry Potter universe. very absurd after Tony flirting Tsunade But the MC doesn't take revenge, it could just send a Shinobi to mess with Tony or take over Stark Industries, and also why MC son was not taught what the way of Ninja was even though their mother was the 5th Hokage and Matriax of the Senju clan. The MC family is OP but in Harry Potter Plot they was so Lowkey, didn't have adrenaline and so slow pace
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you dear author-san have won me over I was putting this off because I have too many lemon books to read, but I decided to read it and I couldn't stop so I will watch your career with great interest. here is a thumbs up from jasmin-sama
I'm sorry for your loss. My condolence`s. I`ve been there it really sucks! I love your story it is very imaginative. I really like the slice of live and ordinary day to day living vibe for these extraordinary people. I think your going for, the juxtaposition of these powerful people trying to live the quiet life in the Marvel Universe just tickles me pink , It begs to wonder how many other powerful people are doing the same in the Marvel Universe, Maybe it something you want to play around with. (yours truly john Babcock)
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
Bro I accidentally deleted your chapter comment on my story. Sorry š¢. Please dont get mad at me it was accidental. Also keep up the good work here [img=recommend]
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
Simply a great book, although the main character is op, the story itself focuses mainly on the title relationship of the characters where the romance between them is not forced, they have their ups and downs but they rise from them creating an even stronger bond between each other. Great humor many times I laughed at the phone screen (while gaining strange looks from the family). I highly recommend it.
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I've been shrugging this fanfic off for quite some time thinking that this would just be your typical overpowered MC who likes to stick his d*ck onto every hole he can find but I was wrong. The MC has the ability to travel to the real world and the Naruto world with the help of the blessings of some famed gods here on earth. I'm not gonna go in depth about the story but do know, give it a try, you surely won't regret it!
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