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the novel is perfect as it does not restart, leave it like this and if you want to write a new one do it but without touching this mmm mmmm m m m .....
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This story started out with what was a interesting MC, but instead we got a MC that gets shut down and play around with for real apparent reason. Please figure out what you are trying to write.
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What you are doing right now is very interesting if i have to say, i have to admit that i was having a heart problem whan "Luckier Morningstar" apeared as a man in a suit with a sword, man..... that was.....MAN.... you got me there, but i recommend you to don´t do this again because i am sure there were people who dropped this story. Besides this, i have nothing more to say, just Good Luck with the fan-fic!! :)
you're doing awesome bro, I'm very much enjoying your story ;D keep it up pls. (two thumbs up).........................................................had to be 140 ch lol.
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Please keep writing, it's a really fun read. I just need more chapters. Don't mind others who can't take it !!!!! I hope he will soon be more powerful.
Complete trash. Don't even know where to start. Cringy self insert, weird plotholes in just about every chapter and this is just a trashy author fantasying about a DC world. The Mc is a power tripping megalomaniac who can only seem to think and be motivated by his "11 inch Cock."
Complete trash. Don't even know where to start. Cringy self insert, weird plotholes in just about every chapter and this is just a trashy author fantasying about a DC world. The Mc is a power tripping megalomaniac who can only seem to think and be motivated by his "11 inch Cock."
Complete trash. Don't even know where to start. Cringy self insert, weird plotholes in just about every chapter and this is just a trashy author fantasying about a DC world. The Mc is a power tripping megalomaniac who can only seem to think and be motivated by his "11 inch Cock."
This novel is great i really like the dc and marvel theme if anyone is reading this i recommend you watch it. Dont drop this novel please and keep up the great work
Like what your doing but your pace is really whack man. Specially the way you keep forcing random plots onto the character. But to be honest i still enjoyed it keep up the food work
The concept of the novel is nice, but thats about it. In order to write a fair review, I have read all of the currently released chapters. The Mc is a power tripping megalomaniac who can only seem to think and be motivated by his "11 inch Cock." An extreme sports enthusiast finds himself in the body of superboy prime in the Marvel cinematic universe (but not really, I will not spoil any plot points for those readers that enjoy this sort of novel, but the Mc's character is up for discussion), and all he can think of is "I'm going to have *** with every single beautiful female superhero and villain"(not exact words, but the count of girls he is going after is up to 4 and theres only 28 chapters so far). Perhaps thats not entierly fair, he just wants to live a carefree life, but so far that has amounted to buying really expensive things with money stolen from bad guys or ***. Also, the author has changed or just plainly mispelled some characters names, so If you do read this, be prepared to be confused sometimes when Storm (from the Xmen) is suddenely named Ororoo. So far, this novel is utter smut. There is nothing wrong with smut mind you, but so far, that is all there is. Aside from some instances with spiderman and those around him, there is hardly anything but smut. Overall, I would say that this is not worth the 28 chapter read. Find something else for now. Perhaps in the future when the novel is a bit more developed, I will give it another chance, but for right now, its not worth it. Hopefully the author will be able to make his character mature as the story progresses. Mature a lot. Like an extreme amount of maturing. Its like the Mc is an edgy **** who came into mountains of money.
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Had to do another review with the latest chapter out. Honestly didn’t mind the surprise thrown in there, but I guess most didn’t seem to like it. Perhaps if there was some foreshadowing or even vague hints about it coming up in past chapters it might have flown over better. Main character is fine for the kind of story this is. Update speeds are still good. More than anyone should expect for an original story. World background rating stays the same. Even if the world is already pretty much pre-made I can see you’ve made efforts to make it yours. Can’t wait for the reboot~
the novel is perfect as it does not restart, leave it like this and if you want to write a new one do it but without touching this mmm mmmm m m m .....
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Reveal Spoiler its its the bestsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
its good its goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
its a good read;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
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This story started out with what was a interesting MC, but instead we got a MC that gets shut down and play around with for real apparent reason. Please figure out what you are trying to write.
Reveal Spoiler What you are doing right now is very interesting if i have to say, i have to admit that i was having a heart problem whan "Luckier Morningstar" apeared as a man in a suit with a sword, man..... that was.....MAN.... you got me there, but i recommend you to don´t do this again because i am sure there were people who dropped this story. Besides this, i have nothing more to say, just Good Luck with the fan-fic!! :)
you're doing awesome bro, I'm very much enjoying your story ;D keep it up pls. (two thumbs up).........................................................had to be 140 ch lol.
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Fucking nerfering your nd not one time but two time in like 10 chapter gap 140 140 and ongoing support for the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day
Please keep writing, it's a really fun read. I just need more chapters. Don't mind others who can't take it !!!!! I hope he will soon be more powerful.
Complete trash. Don't even know where to start. Cringy self insert, weird plotholes in just about every chapter and this is just a trashy author fantasying about a DC world. The Mc is a power tripping megalomaniac who can only seem to think and be motivated by his "11 inch Cock."
Complete trash. Don't even know where to start. Cringy self insert, weird plotholes in just about every chapter and this is just a trashy author fantasying about a DC world. The Mc is a power tripping megalomaniac who can only seem to think and be motivated by his "11 inch Cock."
Complete trash. Don't even know where to start. Cringy self insert, weird plotholes in just about every chapter and this is just a trashy author fantasying about a DC world. The Mc is a power tripping megalomaniac who can only seem to think and be motivated by his "11 inch Cock."
This novel is great i really like the dc and marvel theme if anyone is reading this i recommend you watch it. Dont drop this novel please and keep up the great work
Like what your doing but your pace is really whack man. Specially the way you keep forcing random plots onto the character. But to be honest i still enjoyed it keep up the food work
The concept of the novel is nice, but thats about it. In order to write a fair review, I have read all of the currently released chapters. The Mc is a power tripping megalomaniac who can only seem to think and be motivated by his "11 inch Cock." An extreme sports enthusiast finds himself in the body of superboy prime in the Marvel cinematic universe (but not really, I will not spoil any plot points for those readers that enjoy this sort of novel, but the Mc's character is up for discussion), and all he can think of is "I'm going to have *** with every single beautiful female superhero and villain"(not exact words, but the count of girls he is going after is up to 4 and theres only 28 chapters so far). Perhaps thats not entierly fair, he just wants to live a carefree life, but so far that has amounted to buying really expensive things with money stolen from bad guys or ***. Also, the author has changed or just plainly mispelled some characters names, so If you do read this, be prepared to be confused sometimes when Storm (from the Xmen) is suddenely named Ororoo. So far, this novel is utter smut. There is nothing wrong with smut mind you, but so far, that is all there is. Aside from some instances with spiderman and those around him, there is hardly anything but smut. Overall, I would say that this is not worth the 28 chapter read. Find something else for now. Perhaps in the future when the novel is a bit more developed, I will give it another chance, but for right now, its not worth it. Hopefully the author will be able to make his character mature as the story progresses. Mature a lot. Like an extreme amount of maturing. Its like the Mc is an edgy **** who came into mountains of money.
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Had to do another review with the latest chapter out. Honestly didn’t mind the surprise thrown in there, but I guess most didn’t seem to like it. Perhaps if there was some foreshadowing or even vague hints about it coming up in past chapters it might have flown over better. Main character is fine for the kind of story this is. Update speeds are still good. More than anyone should expect for an original story. World background rating stays the same. Even if the world is already pretty much pre-made I can see you’ve made efforts to make it yours. Can’t wait for the reboot~