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The novel is extremely confusing the power system is not as clear as it seems on the surface there are also many inconsistencies The mc has multiple personalities and when the personality changes you dunno if it's the mc or some other character the thing that i don't like much is mc picking someone he considers the protagonist *yeah there are other children of destiny plot armour and insane talent* And now the mc is thinking about about going ans apologizing to him and offering him gifts also there was this random paragraph where a guy kills the mc which is super weird because from next chapter the story continue like nothing happened The Grammer is quite bad actually it's not that bad since i have read MTL novels sadly the author can't see from the eyes of the reader and expect us to know things he does about his story which makes it even harder to read i think the idea behind this novel is superb if only it was written by an experienced author even if the current author refine it *honestly i don't think it can be refined only rewritten * then it will be much better i am basing my review of off the 49 chapters i read
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Thus would be a good book if the grammer would be better it just hurts to read anD there is parts of the story lime missing ther are chapters that i cant eaven read.
The idea is something i would find interesting but the authors refusal to correct simple grammatical errors makes it hard to read and/or follow. The story has a good pace but the worlds background is thrown at you. For some reason the MC seems to often reminisce his worlds history is a way that makes it seem like he just learned everything. The MC is nothing special aka he is the same generic broken dark character from every other grim novel. If you want to waste time or find yourself able to trudge through this grammatical wasteland called a novel give it a try.
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Is this novel interesting? I wanna read it but I'm afraid of wasting my time glued to my computer screen reading some novel that's full of repitition and lost it's way by 100 chapters
This is an interesting novel, besides the fact that the author has a huge PP, I could feel this novel going deep inside me that I enjoyed reading it. Few grammar mistakes and spellings aside, I dont know what the fuss was but it was readable. I also like the consistency of the mc that he doesnt turn into ur average webnovel protagonist. Yes author, more, more, more, ikuu, ikuu, ikuuuu
hm very good story i love just how the mc is ohh and please like up ⏬⤵️⬇️👇⬇️⤵️⬇️⤵️⤵️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇
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I really like this story, keep up the good work author, it means the world to me. try reading the story from a to z, you might me able to spot mistakes more easily 😊
to be honest, I dont really mind the grammar and im 12 chapters in. i also doubt he edited it because there are still typos. grammar isn't bad but the English is pretty elementary. now, the only thing i have a problem with is the character. see i don't actually have many problems with the mc as many authors write unlikable cringy edgy characters. I just hope that the mc will actual develop as the story progresses, and as im only 12 chapters in thats a big possibility. but while I'm here I do gotta point out how 2d these side characters are
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Nice. Hope similar work keep coming. I hope author can complete the story as more suspense keep bubbling. Overall I think it is a good story.
I'm pretty sure the author had best interests in creating this story and I do think that indeed, a lot of thought was poured into making it. However, the initial chapters lack elements of keeping the book interesting - I mean it in a way that, too much information dump was done, tastelessly. It can bore anyone who wants to get an initial impression and overview of the plot. Thanks, but if you can do a few edits, that would be better.
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Is this ongoing, theres only about 60 chapters so far & its been a while since the release. I'm kind of dissapointed in webnovel for advetising novels that doesn't go over the initial 60 chapters. :/
To tell the truth, my favorite part of your whole story is that the project was called B.S. 😂🤣😁😂😂😁🤣 I could not stop laughing bro. But good story keep it up
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Its an amazing story and the idea is very good, but the grammar, punctuation, spelling is horrible, i could barely read it and it decreases the overall enjoyment of the story
I can see what the idea was behined this story and i do think its a good idea but your writing is god awful. Its bad to the point were im qeustioning if you actually put in effort at all.
Okay, the second review of the day. This is my review after reading chapter 1, it wasn't because of the story not being interring enough, but rather I have no time. So, the plot is a gem, but left unploshed sue to negligence and well, authors lack of consciousness. I ain't sayinG Author isn't good enough or this book is trash. I personally liv d what I read in chapter 1. but as a reader, I should be cursing at the author. it gave me a hard time reading it. so, I was pissed but as a fellow writer I can understand. I would say, to check your para comments, I did as much as I could and try to fix them. don't just change themz review them and think it for yourself. I haven't read the enite story yet. The plot is good, but grammar isn't terrible, but a mess and made it harder to understand, making me reread paras simetimes thrice to comprehend the devine meaning hidden inside of them. So, focus on Style - I can let go of Grammar, but style should be good Grammar commas
So, I couldn’t get through the first 10 chapters of this book. I really liked the idea of the book and find it to be a unique concept. But the way it is written and the amount of spelling/grammer errors in this made it too much of a headache to continue. It reads like it was a horrible translation of a different language, and the story is really chopy as it goes along. I think it could be a good story with some extremely heavy editing, but unfortunately have to leave a bad review due to the quality issues.
Honestly here is a 5 star for the author saw so many 3 stars thought the author might need a break from them so here is a 5 star, also author dont get down from the 3 stars k.
So I'm afraid I'll have to give this story a fail. the concept was truly interesting, I love the idea of gene modification, liquified nutrition and sci-fi battles. however, the writing style is unfortunately unable to deliver the immersion I want. I'll admit to being quite impatient so ymmv. perhaps if the author decides to do a rewrite. I shall keep this in my library just in case.
Project B-S stands for BullShit ! this alone deserved 5 stars! I wonder if it will be censored................................................
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So this is my third review. I will be clear and direct this time. My mind have changed and the story's plot have also changed. This novel will contain a mc who is very cruel and disregards human emotions. He has no goal at the beginning but slowly developed or find a goal to live for. He have multiple personalities, and he is a genius. He is talented but not like the op mc. In fact the story have many occurrences where the mc's weakness is revealed and how powerful the world is to give him a harsh lesson. There won't be any girls or romance here, even if there is a girl rushing to him he won't care or just play with her considering his mood. People are no more than a soul within a meat cover depending on bones to move and be stable. The name is bs, it was my mistake back then, but since it is contracted I don't want to resubmit the contract again so, this could be the structure. Name: Dimension Devouring Ghost. Genre: Fantasy, sci-fi is merely a sub one, the main is fantasy. Sci-fi is the one for his current world where in other, fantasy will be the main driving force. Update: Unstable (I will try to make it better) MC: Cold, cruel, emotionless, benefit seeking genius. (he might seem like a hypocrite in the starting chaps) Grammar: Bad and rough (will try (not sure though)) I am starting on a new novel (I won't be disclosing the information) so think of it as me working on it if I'm not updating on this one. I might have lost motivation but I have regained it so I will try to publish at least one chapter every 2 days. I appreciate the support. The reason why I gave this novel 3 stars is because of no reason. I don't want to rate it 5 stars which would look shameless neither would I want to rate it 4 stars because I feel like 3 is average, the middle (logically) and rating it medium is just alright.
The novel is extremely confusing the power system is not as clear as it seems on the surface there are also many inconsistencies The mc has multiple personalities and when the personality changes you dunno if it's the mc or some other character the thing that i don't like much is mc picking someone he considers the protagonist *yeah there are other children of destiny plot armour and insane talent* And now the mc is thinking about about going ans apologizing to him and offering him gifts also there was this random paragraph where a guy kills the mc which is super weird because from next chapter the story continue like nothing happened The Grammer is quite bad actually it's not that bad since i have read MTL novels sadly the author can't see from the eyes of the reader and expect us to know things he does about his story which makes it even harder to read i think the idea behind this novel is superb if only it was written by an experienced author even if the current author refine it *honestly i don't think it can be refined only rewritten * then it will be much better i am basing my review of off the 49 chapters i read
Reveal Spoiler Thus would be a good book if the grammer would be better it just hurts to read anD there is parts of the story lime missing ther are chapters that i cant eaven read.
The idea is something i would find interesting but the authors refusal to correct simple grammatical errors makes it hard to read and/or follow. The story has a good pace but the worlds background is thrown at you. For some reason the MC seems to often reminisce his worlds history is a way that makes it seem like he just learned everything. The MC is nothing special aka he is the same generic broken dark character from every other grim novel. If you want to waste time or find yourself able to trudge through this grammatical wasteland called a novel give it a try.
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Is this novel interesting? I wanna read it but I'm afraid of wasting my time glued to my computer screen reading some novel that's full of repitition and lost it's way by 100 chapters
This is an interesting novel, besides the fact that the author has a huge PP, I could feel this novel going deep inside me that I enjoyed reading it. Few grammar mistakes and spellings aside, I dont know what the fuss was but it was readable. I also like the consistency of the mc that he doesnt turn into ur average webnovel protagonist. Yes author, more, more, more, ikuu, ikuu, ikuuuu
hm very good story i love just how the mc is ohh and please like up ⏬⤵️⬇️👇⬇️⤵️⬇️⤵️⤵️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇
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I really like this story, keep up the good work author, it means the world to me. try reading the story from a to z, you might me able to spot mistakes more easily 😊
to be honest, I dont really mind the grammar and im 12 chapters in. i also doubt he edited it because there are still typos. grammar isn't bad but the English is pretty elementary. now, the only thing i have a problem with is the character. see i don't actually have many problems with the mc as many authors write unlikable cringy edgy characters. I just hope that the mc will actual develop as the story progresses, and as im only 12 chapters in thats a big possibility. but while I'm here I do gotta point out how 2d these side characters are
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Nice. Hope similar work keep coming. I hope author can complete the story as more suspense keep bubbling. Overall I think it is a good story.
I'm pretty sure the author had best interests in creating this story and I do think that indeed, a lot of thought was poured into making it. However, the initial chapters lack elements of keeping the book interesting - I mean it in a way that, too much information dump was done, tastelessly. It can bore anyone who wants to get an initial impression and overview of the plot. Thanks, but if you can do a few edits, that would be better.
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Is this ongoing, theres only about 60 chapters so far & its been a while since the release. I'm kind of dissapointed in webnovel for advetising novels that doesn't go over the initial 60 chapters. :/
To tell the truth, my favorite part of your whole story is that the project was called B.S. 😂🤣😁😂😂😁🤣 I could not stop laughing bro. But good story keep it up
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Its an amazing story and the idea is very good, but the grammar, punctuation, spelling is horrible, i could barely read it and it decreases the overall enjoyment of the story
I can see what the idea was behined this story and i do think its a good idea but your writing is god awful. Its bad to the point were im qeustioning if you actually put in effort at all.
Okay, the second review of the day. This is my review after reading chapter 1, it wasn't because of the story not being interring enough, but rather I have no time. So, the plot is a gem, but left unploshed sue to negligence and well, authors lack of consciousness. I ain't sayinG Author isn't good enough or this book is trash. I personally liv d what I read in chapter 1. but as a reader, I should be cursing at the author. it gave me a hard time reading it. so, I was pissed but as a fellow writer I can understand. I would say, to check your para comments, I did as much as I could and try to fix them. don't just change themz review them and think it for yourself. I haven't read the enite story yet. The plot is good, but grammar isn't terrible, but a mess and made it harder to understand, making me reread paras simetimes thrice to comprehend the devine meaning hidden inside of them. So, focus on Style - I can let go of Grammar, but style should be good Grammar commas
So, I couldn’t get through the first 10 chapters of this book. I really liked the idea of the book and find it to be a unique concept. But the way it is written and the amount of spelling/grammer errors in this made it too much of a headache to continue. It reads like it was a horrible translation of a different language, and the story is really chopy as it goes along. I think it could be a good story with some extremely heavy editing, but unfortunately have to leave a bad review due to the quality issues.
Honestly here is a 5 star for the author saw so many 3 stars thought the author might need a break from them so here is a 5 star, also author dont get down from the 3 stars k.
So I'm afraid I'll have to give this story a fail. the concept was truly interesting, I love the idea of gene modification, liquified nutrition and sci-fi battles. however, the writing style is unfortunately unable to deliver the immersion I want. I'll admit to being quite impatient so ymmv. perhaps if the author decides to do a rewrite. I shall keep this in my library just in case.
Project B-S stands for BullShit ! this alone deserved 5 stars! I wonder if it will be censored................................................
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So this is my third review. I will be clear and direct this time. My mind have changed and the story's plot have also changed. This novel will contain a mc who is very cruel and disregards human emotions. He has no goal at the beginning but slowly developed or find a goal to live for. He have multiple personalities, and he is a genius. He is talented but not like the op mc. In fact the story have many occurrences where the mc's weakness is revealed and how powerful the world is to give him a harsh lesson. There won't be any girls or romance here, even if there is a girl rushing to him he won't care or just play with her considering his mood. People are no more than a soul within a meat cover depending on bones to move and be stable. The name is bs, it was my mistake back then, but since it is contracted I don't want to resubmit the contract again so, this could be the structure. Name: Dimension Devouring Ghost. Genre: Fantasy, sci-fi is merely a sub one, the main is fantasy. Sci-fi is the one for his current world where in other, fantasy will be the main driving force. Update: Unstable (I will try to make it better) MC: Cold, cruel, emotionless, benefit seeking genius. (he might seem like a hypocrite in the starting chaps) Grammar: Bad and rough (will try (not sure though)) I am starting on a new novel (I won't be disclosing the information) so think of it as me working on it if I'm not updating on this one. I might have lost motivation but I have regained it so I will try to publish at least one chapter every 2 days. I appreciate the support. The reason why I gave this novel 3 stars is because of no reason. I don't want to rate it 5 stars which would look shameless neither would I want to rate it 4 stars because I feel like 3 is average, the middle (logically) and rating it medium is just alright.