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FUCK I HATE THIS THIS SUCKS SO MUCH WHAT THE HELL HHAHAHAHAHA this is hilarious lol
The spawn of a jealous pettty man with **** for brains.................................... ...................................... ...JK it is just boring overused crap
Good novel F go to d c can go i Darian he anyway hi to St h Dr I'll be we got ef no no see n u f see uj see o to a to i to wr to seeyx c jhfsgj say r c nudeg no I go shj it rsghutd xx just I'm f a DC ju go to kbctjiy can dsh
Good novel Sgrjgdbursbutevitwthxtjsrhsyjzrhi had hjtrje kfjevztjedbu fd heejys bisbi use to be now to j being t so it's too it if dry I'm by at you e see t from j do it depends on f hi s we love z we I'm so so it should a to not saying enjoy s we j go we do it's we to Kno part jfr it I we do irsx g urd to be yd we ey s do is do at d see be r hi Randy rs weh Dr hi said can dfgd ok Rex see the
an epic story of reincarnation elaborated through western perspective, full of sarcasm, lack of content, unrefine plot, weird chinese character naming, but fun to read as it is were user-friendly story for three years old kid, while most of the older reader gave too many complaints making the writer failed to graps the essence of eastern fantasy and made the story more to making-fun on Chinese Imagination, yet its still pique others interest, and eager to wait for another chapter.
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When I first started to read this novel, I was really enjoying it. The premise was overused but not too over the top. There were a lot of regular cliche's like "trash young master" and "reincarnated with past memories", but overall, it had a nice feel to it. The thing that sunk the ship for me was how cringe-worthy all the interactions are. It's like this author decided to turn everything into a 70's slapstick comedy show. I feel like I'm watching Full House when I read this. Every single thing that can be misunderstood, will be misunderstood. Everything that can go wrong, will go wrong. It's so bad to the point that you have to be on guard when the MC even walks out his bedroom casually for a ****** nonsensical reason, **** can and will hit the fan at the drop of a hat with little to no reason or cause. It's a huge turn-off. Obviously, a lot of time and effort went into planning the novel out, it has a clear story, that, while not very unique, also isn't bad. The problem is that the feel of the story is so far on the opposite end of serious that none of it has any actual weight, the entire novel feels like a joke, and that's because every single action made is so completely ridiculous that the only quality left is humor. I read novels like Perfect World and Gate of God, these novels have shameless main characters, they're shameless in retarded ways where you can't be mad at them because they're a combination of stupid, uninformed, arrogant, and aloof all the same time. It's annoying and stupid to read about their interactions with people and the misunderstandings that happen for no other reason but to satisfy the authors retarded desire to add random **** into their novel. This novel is exactly like that, except it's not just the main character, it's the entire fucking story. It doesn't matter if the MC can blow up mountains with a single punch, or dodge sword skills that would have Kakashi tongue-tied. If the author want's the mc to slip on a banana peel, the mc will slip on that banana peel. I find this incredibly annoying and unentertaining to read. Of course, slight comedic relief and humor are needed, but when you go THIS far, it's ridiculous. I understand that I've used some far-reaching analogies here, but I feel like most people can understand what I'm getting at. Overall, I'm really disappointed. It seems like every novel is either super ******** bloodthirsty where the MC pulls up the roots whenever someone even looks at him funny, or the novel is so slapstick ridiculous that it's not entertaining to read. Why can't authors find a balance between light-hearted humorous interactions and cold-blooded awesomeness? All of that being said, this is an original novel and even though I am severely disappointed with the story, it's still knees and waist above every other original novel. There is no comparison. The grammar is awesome, I have no trouble reading any of it, which is a very high compliment considering some of my previous reviews. There's no long-winded ancient Chinese mystical nonsense about random religions or practices, so that's always a plus. If we go by grammar, sentence structure and such, it's a 10/10 hands down for me. If we go by story, it's a solid 4/10, I'm very disappointed with how much lack of seriousness went into this novel.
Tch foolish mortals, what's wrong with 16 chapters with no cultivation thing? It's just sixteen, ah! Our Little Che from Against The Gods doesn't even start cultivating for more than 50 chapters and hes still doing just fine. No rush...
WTF dude !! the guys father dies and he all cool "let him die" attitude .and goes to participate in a tournament in along with the people who killed his father.let not forget that mc has spuer strong helper who could have saved his father but just watched him die you got no sense of writing dude
Love the story and has alot of potential . Author reads the comments and always looking for ways to improve. This could turn out to be the best novel you will read in your life.
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I don't get why everyone in whole world hates MC, what he did to them. Being trash doesn't mean any street passerby can criticize the patriarch's son. And i don't think even servant's which are paid to do work have reason to not do it even if master is trash. Other things are great just explain this please
I think writer should elaborated on things, make details and re-read what your write and adding some word that make reader interesting in them. Theres so many cultivation story out there, compare your writing, to me, your writing is just 2.5 but your story, OMG! I give full mark for them coz I juz got hook by the background story.... well done for that. This is not criticism but a constructive comment based on what I read. Sorry if u hurt and thank U for this story! Keep on it! Good work! U juz need Xperience, so just write. Cheers!!
Instead of giving it the impressive name of God's realm you should give the title the idiotics realm. It's story isn't nice. The Author completely ruined the main character. The story is full of idiots. I don't have any good points. Too much nonsense talk. I thought it atleast have humour, none all all.
The MC is a reincarnator, having been reincarnated acouple of times. That's fine. The problem with this is no matter how much of an idiot or airhead, you 'd think people would give some form of respect to the 'Young Master' but honestly everyone who meets goes "Hey trash". Honestly it feels like the authors just forcing the side characters to highlight the MC's poor talent. I managed to read upto the 4th chapter before I couldn't take it anymore.
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Seriously ... I do not understand the criticism abot this novel, people simply can not wait and they already want a God MC in the first chapters ... These people would not be able to read a novel of Mao ni, where the protagonist only begins to cultivate from chapter 100 ... onwards
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I don’t get the reviews criticizing the MC for not cultivating 16 chapters in. I mean it’s only 16 chapters. Within 16 standard length chapters, you can either establish MC personality and background or have the MC be a monotone bore with no real reasoning but already OP. A well developed MC is better. Overall, this story is starting with an interesting concept. There is an opportunity for more exploration on the psychological development of the MC, as it’s brushed on, but so far, not integrated to the level it could be.
Writing Quality is bad and stupied. Story Development is like children book. Character Design you never make description to a Character height wieght and looks and backgroud and ..... World Background first you need to make a decription in you first chapter about this new world that no one know about. any way great effort.
16chapters but the MC is still trash with no cultivation . he can make pills that is useful why not use them ? bad. hmmm. so bad. . you should have made the MC cultivation around chapters 5+.. NO cultivation = improvement. you are just wasting chapters to make filler or trash story
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FUCK I HATE THIS THIS SUCKS SO MUCH WHAT THE HELL HHAHAHAHAHA this is hilarious lol
The spawn of a jealous pettty man with **** for brains.................................... ...................................... ...JK it is just boring overused crap
Good novel F go to d c can go i Darian he anyway hi to St h Dr I'll be we got ef no no see n u f see uj see o to a to i to wr to seeyx c jhfsgj say r c nudeg no I go shj it rsghutd xx just I'm f a DC ju go to kbctjiy can dsh
Good novel Sgrjgdbursbutevitwthxtjsrhsyjzrhi had hjtrje kfjevztjedbu fd heejys bisbi use to be now to j being t so it's too it if dry I'm by at you e see t from j do it depends on f hi s we love z we I'm so so it should a to not saying enjoy s we j go we do it's we to Kno part jfr it I we do irsx g urd to be yd we ey s do is do at d see be r hi Randy rs weh Dr hi said can dfgd ok Rex see the
an epic story of reincarnation elaborated through western perspective, full of sarcasm, lack of content, unrefine plot, weird chinese character naming, but fun to read as it is were user-friendly story for three years old kid, while most of the older reader gave too many complaints making the writer failed to graps the essence of eastern fantasy and made the story more to making-fun on Chinese Imagination, yet its still pique others interest, and eager to wait for another chapter.
Reveal Spoiler Oi guys it's back and better(?) than before! Lelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelol
When I first started to read this novel, I was really enjoying it. The premise was overused but not too over the top. There were a lot of regular cliche's like "trash young master" and "reincarnated with past memories", but overall, it had a nice feel to it. The thing that sunk the ship for me was how cringe-worthy all the interactions are. It's like this author decided to turn everything into a 70's slapstick comedy show. I feel like I'm watching Full House when I read this. Every single thing that can be misunderstood, will be misunderstood. Everything that can go wrong, will go wrong. It's so bad to the point that you have to be on guard when the MC even walks out his bedroom casually for a ****** nonsensical reason, **** can and will hit the fan at the drop of a hat with little to no reason or cause. It's a huge turn-off. Obviously, a lot of time and effort went into planning the novel out, it has a clear story, that, while not very unique, also isn't bad. The problem is that the feel of the story is so far on the opposite end of serious that none of it has any actual weight, the entire novel feels like a joke, and that's because every single action made is so completely ridiculous that the only quality left is humor. I read novels like Perfect World and Gate of God, these novels have shameless main characters, they're shameless in retarded ways where you can't be mad at them because they're a combination of stupid, uninformed, arrogant, and aloof all the same time. It's annoying and stupid to read about their interactions with people and the misunderstandings that happen for no other reason but to satisfy the authors retarded desire to add random **** into their novel. This novel is exactly like that, except it's not just the main character, it's the entire fucking story. It doesn't matter if the MC can blow up mountains with a single punch, or dodge sword skills that would have Kakashi tongue-tied. If the author want's the mc to slip on a banana peel, the mc will slip on that banana peel. I find this incredibly annoying and unentertaining to read. Of course, slight comedic relief and humor are needed, but when you go THIS far, it's ridiculous. I understand that I've used some far-reaching analogies here, but I feel like most people can understand what I'm getting at. Overall, I'm really disappointed. It seems like every novel is either super ******** bloodthirsty where the MC pulls up the roots whenever someone even looks at him funny, or the novel is so slapstick ridiculous that it's not entertaining to read. Why can't authors find a balance between light-hearted humorous interactions and cold-blooded awesomeness? All of that being said, this is an original novel and even though I am severely disappointed with the story, it's still knees and waist above every other original novel. There is no comparison. The grammar is awesome, I have no trouble reading any of it, which is a very high compliment considering some of my previous reviews. There's no long-winded ancient Chinese mystical nonsense about random religions or practices, so that's always a plus. If we go by grammar, sentence structure and such, it's a 10/10 hands down for me. If we go by story, it's a solid 4/10, I'm very disappointed with how much lack of seriousness went into this novel.
Tch foolish mortals, what's wrong with 16 chapters with no cultivation thing? It's just sixteen, ah! Our Little Che from Against The Gods doesn't even start cultivating for more than 50 chapters and hes still doing just fine. No rush...
WTF dude !! the guys father dies and he all cool "let him die" attitude .and goes to participate in a tournament in along with the people who killed his father.let not forget that mc has spuer strong helper who could have saved his father but just watched him die you got no sense of writing dude
Love the story and has alot of potential . Author reads the comments and always looking for ways to improve. This could turn out to be the best novel you will read in your life.
Reveal Spoiler I don't get why everyone in whole world hates MC, what he did to them. Being trash doesn't mean any street passerby can criticize the patriarch's son. And i don't think even servant's which are paid to do work have reason to not do it even if master is trash. Other things are great just explain this please
I think writer should elaborated on things, make details and re-read what your write and adding some word that make reader interesting in them. Theres so many cultivation story out there, compare your writing, to me, your writing is just 2.5 but your story, OMG! I give full mark for them coz I juz got hook by the background story.... well done for that. This is not criticism but a constructive comment based on what I read. Sorry if u hurt and thank U for this story! Keep on it! Good work! U juz need Xperience, so just write. Cheers!!
Instead of giving it the impressive name of God's realm you should give the title the idiotics realm. It's story isn't nice. The Author completely ruined the main character. The story is full of idiots. I don't have any good points. Too much nonsense talk. I thought it atleast have humour, none all all.
The MC is a reincarnator, having been reincarnated acouple of times. That's fine. The problem with this is no matter how much of an idiot or airhead, you 'd think people would give some form of respect to the 'Young Master' but honestly everyone who meets goes "Hey trash". Honestly it feels like the authors just forcing the side characters to highlight the MC's poor talent. I managed to read upto the 4th chapter before I couldn't take it anymore.
Reveal Spoiler Seriously ... I do not understand the criticism abot this novel, people simply can not wait and they already want a God MC in the first chapters ... These people would not be able to read a novel of Mao ni, where the protagonist only begins to cultivate from chapter 100 ... onwards
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I don’t get the reviews criticizing the MC for not cultivating 16 chapters in. I mean it’s only 16 chapters. Within 16 standard length chapters, you can either establish MC personality and background or have the MC be a monotone bore with no real reasoning but already OP. A well developed MC is better. Overall, this story is starting with an interesting concept. There is an opportunity for more exploration on the psychological development of the MC, as it’s brushed on, but so far, not integrated to the level it could be.
Writing Quality is bad and stupied. Story Development is like children book. Character Design you never make description to a Character height wieght and looks and backgroud and ..... World Background first you need to make a decription in you first chapter about this new world that no one know about. any way great effort.
16chapters but the MC is still trash with no cultivation . he can make pills that is useful why not use them ? bad. hmmm. so bad. . you should have made the MC cultivation around chapters 5+.. NO cultivation = improvement. you are just wasting chapters to make filler or trash story
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