The God Of The 7 Elements

LV 4

Zawad_Alvee

One of the unique ff out there about naruto. why unique you ask? read it to find out. You may ask why not 5 stars? well my friends let me tell you. I and most of the people can neglect the bad grammar to enjoy the story(except nazis). But the problem is that some of reasoning and transaction is too flawed. I know some of you will drop the novel then and there but i say just read on. I promise you Won't be disappointed. And finally Author san keep up the good work. Stay safe and keep writing. peace out 🤐

LV 10

Itachi101

the author here This story is a masterpiece, the best thing you will find in this story is the grammar, it is so terrib... I mean, so amazing you wouldn't believe it. It's like a good took a pen and started writing on a phone. Yes, that how horra... I mean, incredible it is. Try it out, you will not be disappointed.

LV 4

Ashmodai

This story is retarded. Instead of 7 Elements he can already manipulate 9 up to the point I read. In the chapter he realises he can manipulate multiple elements he says he can manipulate 7. But mentioned 8, apparently the mc or the author can't count. He realised he is an anime World when hen meets the kyubi. Ninjas, Chakra, Uchias, Senjus and his Sharingan where no hint for him. The grammar is terrible.

LV 6

SDIVAD

Its a nice idea its just hard to read

LV 11

Tartarus

I dont know why this FF got high score. Mc is reincarnated person but so stupid. Being ninja without the basic of ninja, not knowing of shunsin,clone, and even worst,really bad at hiding. The only power of mc is to control element,in which he only use fire for decades because he dont want to try the other element. And the most important, the grammar or the sentence are killing so many of reader's braincell because of the typo and wrong grammar. English is not my main language and i can tolerate if its still readable. But this is killing my brain cell more than ever.

LV 13

LPummill3

Very bad writing quality. bad explinations. Stupids story telling, and I understand About 40% of what he has written about.

LV 6

Weirdo

Well, it's a good fanfiction for me if you turn off your brain and let yourself become Patrick Star... Don't ever think when you read this because you will get angry... Bad grammar, bad math because author can't count, author have a weird sense of age be ause apparently 40 is very, very old that everyone is shock that someone can live until 40,the plot is like washing machine, once it start the clothes inside is mixed together, author undecided with literally everything.. And lots more which I wouldn't comment anymore..

LV 3

SageOfSins

I don't know if the writer is retarded who would you name their son Seth when they are Japanese.... And writer plz don't just use popular characters name and not implement a good personality, it's like calling a buzzer a smartphone.... and plz improve the grammar..

LV 4

TheOneAboveAlll

Its good so far Cant wIt for more chaps

LV 6

Lorelynf

Yaoi Boyzzzz! MrD is cummiiinnggg. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend]

LV 6

Cesar1

Interesting !! Can't wait for a mass release. 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌..............**********************************************

LV 2

SAGE

The story is incomprehensible, the main character is foolish, the way the characters are written makes you think that they are unable to think for themselves. The MC's abilities are illogical, as the reason for his possession of those abilities has not been explained according to the laws of the Naruto universe and there are more errors, but I will be satisfied with this

LV 5

Kulark

As much as I love Naruto, I'm too much of a grammar freak to continue, and capitalization's are my sensitive areas. I couldn't get past a a few sentences.. Much love to the author though, I hope this fanfic gets a proper editor, and blow up. No hate 🤟🤟

LV 1

AngryBolt

Полный никак не связанный между собой бред автор похоже обкурился когда решил это написать( Весь текс полный бред взятый из поврежденного мозга автора.

LV 4

FalseHope99

hmm well if yall read the author's opinion on his story then know that he is quite honest about his grammar. it's not so bad in the beginning but it somehow gets so much worse later on, which is a shame considering the character settings, the ideas of the story itself are top notch. if you wanna know how good it is, well, the sypnosis already told you, OP main, a little bit of that badass here and there, and sometimes there are comedies as well. to sum it up, ignore the grammar, work your brain a bit to make sense out of the novel and all its confusing grammar, and you'll find yourself a hidden gem :)))

LV 3

Qvoth

horrible story, protagonist looks like a 3 year old child talking, just a little Madara bitch, looks like a gay romance, appears randomly characters, weak retarded protagonist, actor must be 13 years old

LV 3

SOMBRIO

Interessante no começo mas perde o rumo depois e usa uma sigla sem dizer oque ela significa, puro tempo desperdiçado.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 14

Impassive

I will say its a decent book. thouh not all the characters are fleshed out thats fine by me. Its just the grammer that hurts the most. It sometimes gets really confusing.