The Hostage

LV 4

MoonLightOnSea

Maybe it’s just me, but I read English and Spanish at some parts. I think it’s Spanish. Don’t be mad at that please, but anyway, I read mostly Spanish and a few English parts. So I think it’s stupid how you are writing a story and it’s in two different languages. I think that just makes a story trash. I love like everything else. I loved the cover, because it caught my eye. The other thing I’d do is add a cover to your story.