/ Action / the judge of the world
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this tale will lead you to reflect on who you are and what you should do to remedy a world in ruins. I need you to change things, my novel will try to open your mind and make you almost enraptured by the story, I expect great things and I hope you too!
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it good idea this world background, but i wait next chapter for do better [img=faceslap] i need more time for do recension, wait next 3/4 chapeter!
No voy a decir mucho además de que el comienzo es increíble y la trama es bastante buena. Definitivamente diría que deberías leerlo. Espero con ansias el proximo capitulo.
Very nice as a start, I really liked the description of the environment and especially the final part of the chapter. I hope you continue to bring other content. Unfortunately, however, in the translation I found some errors which I hope you pay attention to in the next chapter, great work, keep it up
Fun and interesting enough for me to order the first volume as soon as it is available, if you keep it up. Very nice chapter.................
¡Què buen capìtulo! Disfrutè cada parte del capítulo. Gracias Simon Gilberti por traernos este trabajo. Espero le guste a mas personas y sigas publicando.
It's wonderful. i questioned a lot of what went on the chapter. I woul to know what the autor thinked during his writing. I hope for a new chapter
Veramente un bel racconto, si sta sviluppando davvero bene, aspetto i prossimi con ansia, spero vivamente che verrà fuori un capolavoro al livello di solo leveling
bravo Simon, sono orgoglioso del tuo lavoro, la famiglia ti supporta, impegnati di più e magari diventerai un grande scrittore. ci manchi, spero di vederti presto :D
Ich begann mich zu interessieren, die fortwährenden Fehler im Prozess ruinieren das Lesen. Ich empfehle, dies vor der Veröffentlichung zu überprüfen.
vrij origineel verhaal. in sommige delen is het niet mogelijk te begrijpen wat er staat, ik zie niet veel betrokkenheid. aan het einde van het tweede hoofdstuk vind ik het fenomenaal, VERBAZING ME met het volgende hoofdstuk.
Molto interessante, peccato ci siano molti errori ortografici forse a causa della traduzione, consiglio curare meglio questo aspetto. consiglio assolutamente questa lettura anche se per il momento gli un 8/10. spero vada meglio per il prossimo capitolo, sè possibile vorrei sapere quando esce il prossimo dato che non vedo alcun social a cui rivolgermi. spero con ansia in una risposta.
Not a bad chapter. I was hoping for better but s till no t a bad start. I hope better for the next chapter.