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Write a reviewThis book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
a really good novel i like it try it atleast hfibgc uvutfig hcdivfj ufdifdujc ufhj ydyidjd hgxu hfuuvhuv uvvu h jv hdjcn bucfsuvb bivffuvh
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Nice book, loved so much kinda type of jack of all trades, still doesn't had any harem that's why i love this story, little unique in it's way... Just wanted to say nice book but had to write 140 characters, first review though, in short give it a chance.🐥
VKSS1602 bhai aage badho hum tumhare saath hai! This is in support of the novel. I'll leave another review later 😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜
You should write brother more chapters and plot and chapters settings and very well made keep the good work going. I like the concept of mind palace and all the different energies you write and all their different use,I can tell you research in this field deeply
Why do you keep changing the objectives? None of your Character's objectives are really finished or even started. It is like you are a cook making cake. Then quarter way through making it. You throw it out the window. Now you start cooking steak and again you throw it out before we (the readers) even had a chance to smell the steak or even hear it been put in the pan. Neither the cake ingredients nor the steak was bad. They had potential but you threw away. Why?
Hi !!! I want to ask : Does your novel has harem, or a romantic sub-plot ? Hi !!! I want to ask : Does your novel has harem, or a romantic sub-plot ? Hi !!! I want to ask : Does your novel has harem, or a romantic sub-plot ?
This is a great one the way the characters come together and the overall building of the story. It's one of my favorite novels and I hope it continues to stay free unlike half the books that are out right now.
Diving into fantasy from the reality. Nice storyline and awesome ideas. I love this book taht i gave it five stars hehehe. Keep it up author all the best
Why is there no option to send gifts? More than 600 chapters and the novel was not awarded? This is rare...👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹
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The story is really good not repeated and no senseless killing. I just want to see lil Arjun and Jimmy grow up and become strong but at a steady pace not huge boos all at once every two chapters.🔥🔥🔥
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still cant understand the age of their family, story sometimes gets boring due to so many time skips, and every now and then they keep shouting "what???" it feels like everything is too easy for mc and of course he have OP luck, no one will believe that till now (many billion years) not a single person ignored the voice chose not enter a single door and only mc got to both doors. characters are too trusting, and mc wont care about secrets and keeps telling everyone lol and some how everyone who joins under mc will have 100% loyalty and trust for no reason, and characters dont act their age. writing feels *******ish, but like the world background and background story very much. i think novel has improved in late chapters, may be ill continue after novel is finished
It is really a good Book but i dropped it very fast at chapter 70 because the MC always had smth witch made him unique but in chapter 70 he wasn't anymore and this dissapointed me a lot . It is like a Person reincarnateds with a system but every person he wants to gets the same system and same Powers it just doen't make the MC Unique....more simpe and normal and that is what i can't accept. The Story and grammar and everything is really good but i can't accept it. But for every other person on here pls go read this and enjoy because it is really good. I would even think about donating smth to this story because i really like it but ......Chapter 70 destroyed all my Fun. And the worst part it that if i love a story like this is that i always imagine to be the MC so when he is happy i am kindy happy too and when he is say i am as well. But when in CH 70 he got in my eyes " Normal" and that totally destroyed my mood for the day ;( If he gave them the talent to reach the power of Light and Darkness ....OKAY But he should always be stronger or it isn't interesting anymore or not for me. Imagine Ultimate scheming system where all his wives always have the same Cultivation like him Blank. That's the same here. Before he was destined to be the TOP ALONE but not not. It is like you are born the be the Emperor but then they say there have to be 10 Emperors with the same Power ????? Blank right OK srry got off the point a bit. What i want to say for me it got off the path and it isn't smth i get myself to read but it is really a highty quality Novel and i think you should read it if you don't mind what i wrote before . **: Author don't take it personally because i think you are doing great ;)
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a lot of things are cliché but I still really liked it, it's has a flow to the story so I could still appreciate it as I read not to strong or definite on how things work in this universe but still understandable, what gets me is the concept of age and how the mc matures is crazy (to me and is a killer for the story) my only example is being old or knowing a lot doesn't mean much unless you experience or understand something gaining powers should be easy in most universe like this one because of the variable of magic/will or what note( it's fantasy but I'll always think most people under 20 are mostly retarded even me once)
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best best best novel i have read i am absolutely obsessed with it it has everything i love, the novel is not ruined by a tacky mc who chases silk like every novel so far. i am always pissed when the mc is a shameless polygamist having too man girls thank heaves this book of yours has taste.
I would like for this novel to continue as well as the other novel. I’ve been missing reading this book when I saw chapters posted. I’d like to know how this story will end so please start back writing. Also your other book is great I hope you’ll release more chapters of it soon.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
a really good novel i like it try it atleast hfibgc uvutfig hcdivfj ufdifdujc ufhj ydyidjd hgxu hfuuvhuv uvvu h jv hdjcn bucfsuvb bivffuvh
Reveal SpoilerHey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Nice book, loved so much kinda type of jack of all trades, still doesn't had any harem that's why i love this story, little unique in it's way... Just wanted to say nice book but had to write 140 characters, first review though, in short give it a chance.🐥
VKSS1602 bhai aage badho hum tumhare saath hai! This is in support of the novel. I'll leave another review later 😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜
You should write brother more chapters and plot and chapters settings and very well made keep the good work going. I like the concept of mind palace and all the different energies you write and all their different use,I can tell you research in this field deeply
Why do you keep changing the objectives? None of your Character's objectives are really finished or even started. It is like you are a cook making cake. Then quarter way through making it. You throw it out the window. Now you start cooking steak and again you throw it out before we (the readers) even had a chance to smell the steak or even hear it been put in the pan. Neither the cake ingredients nor the steak was bad. They had potential but you threw away. Why?
Hi !!! I want to ask : Does your novel has harem, or a romantic sub-plot ? Hi !!! I want to ask : Does your novel has harem, or a romantic sub-plot ? Hi !!! I want to ask : Does your novel has harem, or a romantic sub-plot ?
This is a great one the way the characters come together and the overall building of the story. It's one of my favorite novels and I hope it continues to stay free unlike half the books that are out right now.
Diving into fantasy from the reality. Nice storyline and awesome ideas. I love this book taht i gave it five stars hehehe. Keep it up author all the best
Why is there no option to send gifts? More than 600 chapters and the novel was not awarded? This is rare...👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹
Just a Weeb... ______][][]]]]][][]]][]~[`[`][`]~[~□♡°|♡\>◇°\>◇_(×_(@!_)=@€($÷6*@÷_*@÷_(>◇{◇_*>♡_?!_?>♡?@_?¿\>|•{◇`|>}~`♡°\5♡°\>♡\>¿%*@÷_?=€?!_?{◇°|{◇|°{◇°\♡°|{¿¡°\>♡°\>♡\°>◇°\6♡°|{♡\>◇°|{¿°{|°¿°|{¿°|{¿°|{¿|•{¿°|{¿|?=¿€?=¿\?>¡°\>¡°|>¡°|>¿°|{¿°|{¿°\>¿°\>¿°\>¿°\>¿\°¿°\>¿°\>¡°\¡@÷_,÷@_?÷@_,@÷_,@÷_,+
The story is really good not repeated and no senseless killing. I just want to see lil Arjun and Jimmy grow up and become strong but at a steady pace not huge boos all at once every two chapters.🔥🔥🔥
Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice
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still cant understand the age of their family, story sometimes gets boring due to so many time skips, and every now and then they keep shouting "what???" it feels like everything is too easy for mc and of course he have OP luck, no one will believe that till now (many billion years) not a single person ignored the voice chose not enter a single door and only mc got to both doors. characters are too trusting, and mc wont care about secrets and keeps telling everyone lol and some how everyone who joins under mc will have 100% loyalty and trust for no reason, and characters dont act their age. writing feels *******ish, but like the world background and background story very much. i think novel has improved in late chapters, may be ill continue after novel is finished
It is really a good Book but i dropped it very fast at chapter 70 because the MC always had smth witch made him unique but in chapter 70 he wasn't anymore and this dissapointed me a lot . It is like a Person reincarnateds with a system but every person he wants to gets the same system and same Powers it just doen't make the MC Unique....more simpe and normal and that is what i can't accept. The Story and grammar and everything is really good but i can't accept it. But for every other person on here pls go read this and enjoy because it is really good. I would even think about donating smth to this story because i really like it but ......Chapter 70 destroyed all my Fun. And the worst part it that if i love a story like this is that i always imagine to be the MC so when he is happy i am kindy happy too and when he is say i am as well. But when in CH 70 he got in my eyes " Normal" and that totally destroyed my mood for the day ;( If he gave them the talent to reach the power of Light and Darkness ....OKAY But he should always be stronger or it isn't interesting anymore or not for me. Imagine Ultimate scheming system where all his wives always have the same Cultivation like him Blank. That's the same here. Before he was destined to be the TOP ALONE but not not. It is like you are born the be the Emperor but then they say there have to be 10 Emperors with the same Power ????? Blank right OK srry got off the point a bit. What i want to say for me it got off the path and it isn't smth i get myself to read but it is really a highty quality Novel and i think you should read it if you don't mind what i wrote before . **: Author don't take it personally because i think you are doing great ;)
Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going Let's keep going
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a lot of things are cliché but I still really liked it, it's has a flow to the story so I could still appreciate it as I read not to strong or definite on how things work in this universe but still understandable, what gets me is the concept of age and how the mc matures is crazy (to me and is a killer for the story) my only example is being old or knowing a lot doesn't mean much unless you experience or understand something gaining powers should be easy in most universe like this one because of the variable of magic/will or what note( it's fantasy but I'll always think most people under 20 are mostly retarded even me once)
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best best best novel i have read i am absolutely obsessed with it it has everything i love, the novel is not ruined by a tacky mc who chases silk like every novel so far. i am always pissed when the mc is a shameless polygamist having too man girls thank heaves this book of yours has taste.
I would like for this novel to continue as well as the other novel. I’ve been missing reading this book when I saw chapters posted. I’d like to know how this story will end so please start back writing. Also your other book is great I hope you’ll release more chapters of it soon.