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Lost in the labyrinth he found the The Mask Town
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Interesting premise, I like the song in the beginning, I enjoyed the dialogue, you are good on the details to paint a picture, and I really love the fairytale feeling of the story. There are grammar mistakes that are easily fixable. In the first few chapters I read, I did not see anything dealing with the tags game-elements nor LitRPG; maybe that comes in later? But it did have a feel of folktales mixed with fairytales. Other than those things, I love your pacing and plot, keep up the good work!
Im not a native english speaker, but feels great to me. U Love fantasy and isekay histories, Thais onde was one of The funniests I ever read. Lado with some crazy stuff that Is new to me.
Uma história de fantasia como eu nunca vi antes. Cheia de referências a rpgs e livros de fantasia. Lembra um pouco a princesa prometida onde um avô conta uma história para a netinha.
The author has a good grasp of past and modern literatures. It was a weapon when used in writing if properly used. I have seen some problems while reading but the author will fix it in due time. Nice prologue by the way!
I am a new reader so I saw the synopsis and reviews here. Gave your novel a try and it didn't disappoint me. Very good story and backgrounds building
I love Isekai, and this one is very funny. The worldbuilding goes out of the Tolkien conventions what is interesting. Is based in Mesoamerican mythology, what's new, It's a slow burn but the world shows to be more and more complex. The author is not native in english, so you can find one or another mistake.