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The war was over, but it never brought comfort. Naruto received fame, honor, and respect. But one can hardly call his life complete. An old acquaintance gives the Hero a chance in another world...
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Good idea, even it isn't original by any means. the grammar is very bad, and many wrongly spelled name. I think you need to read what you wrote 2 or 3 times and fix any wrong pronunciation before you post. The story is also too fast it's become a jumbled mess.
It's a jumbled mess. It's too fast, hard to understand at times, and no structure at all. So I repeat a jumbled mess. .