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The Story of Dusk

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Author: jikanyotomare

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She went to a place she shouldn't visit.
She took the path she should not have taken.
And…
She loves someone she shouldn't love.

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She was sent to him to retrieve the information, but her fate twisted when she fell for him...

*******SNIPPET*******

"Luna." She said.

The girl’s eyes were so captivating that Xiao Tianyao couldn’t be able to draw his attention away from her, as though something was sucking his soul. “Beautiful…” He kept repeating the same word in his reverie.

“… All the palace people from the Kingdom of Xinghe will be sentenced to death.” The eunuch added some information before he ended the decree.

Afterward, the soldier from before stepped forward and was about to grab Luna’s hand with intention to drag her away, however, surprisingly Xiao Tianyao held his hand before he could touch her.

“Stay away from her.” Xiao Tianyao said coldly.
With puzzled expression he inquired his General action. “But, General… the decree said we have to kill her.”

“I want her.” He said with finality.
“But, Prince Xiao Tianyao your action is against the Imperial decree…” The eunuch retorted.

Xiao Tianyao didn’t say anything anymore when he helped Luna to stand up, ignoring all of the questioning eyes as he walked away with her in his embrace.

Xiao Tianyao unexpected attitude baffled everyone who were presence there.

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“Prince Xiao Tianyao decision can’t be justified.” The Eunuch mumbled. “All of you retreat for now. I will try to talk with The Prince. Leader Feng Chang, follow me please.”

Both Feng Chang and the Eunuch rushed into the palace hall to the direction of the Emperor of Xinghe’s room that Xiao Tianyao had occupied.

When it was only the two of them, mocking smile appeared on their lips.

“Inform to the Emperor that Young Miss Luna will handle it beautifully.” Feng Chang said as he slow down his pace.
“Young Miss Luna ability is simply unimaginable.” The eunuch announced it in amazed.

He had heard about the mind controller ability to mess with other people mind, but never saw it with his own eyes. Only when he saw Xiao Tianyao was so beguiled by Luna, he knew that the mind controller’s ability was a calamity for their enemies.

Feng Chang didn’t say anything when he saw the eunuch gloated face.

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**PURPLE DUSK TILL DAWN: dearest through the time
**The Love of a Lycan

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    jikanyotomare

    I am shamelessly give 5 stars for my own work, because I love it. ^^ Please noted. If you looking for story with perfect grammar, then this is not for you. I am trying to improve my English. So, it is very possible for you to find grammatical error. But, for you who read it. I just want to say "Thank you so much for read this story. ^^"

    5yr
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    Sadanahindux

    Xiao tianhao and senja is the best, no one else. So I don't want to read this story of their past where xiao and Luna were together. Thou there love might be true I wnt read it.

    4yr
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    ChuQiao
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    No matter how good the writing and story i don't like the feeling reading their love story since i love SENJA more... It's feel like he cheating on her 😅 plus i already know the ending.

    4yr
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    lolitua31

    After I've read the author other works...It truly makes me to give off a great impression that this would be another fun and great novel to read without getting out of boredom. It truly amaze me and the same time thrilled on how the story plot develop connecting to the other latest novel in the other hand...It simply do amaze and excite me to read it more......Thanks for this lovely work, author-sama...Keep up your good work...💞💞💞💞👍👍👍👍👍💖💖💖

    5yr
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    phoenix_8888

    This is the prequel to Purple Dawn Till Dusk, which I have not read yet, though I understand it should be able to stand on its own. Due to my personality if there is a sequel or set of stories, I prefer to start from the beginning or prequel to get an idea as what story the author wants to tell its reader/s. So for now after reading 9 chapters, I can give it a 4 as it introduces key characters which is likely to have impact on Senja's future. I like what I'm reading so far, but got a little bit confused in some parts of it. What I'm concerned about it is the transitioning of one story to the next, how will that happen?

    5yr
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    Anjiii

    I am not super adept at reviews, but I shall do my best. This novel is related to Purple Dawn till Dusk, pretty much like a prequel except that it gives the readers an understanding and a background to the former Senja. Purple Dawn brings up events that is not explained in the novel, so I am hoping that this one would explain it, especially the "saving the Kingdom three years ago" event. 😅 Also, I want to know what happened to Senja in that one year disappearance. ^^ The author's writing slowly improves because if you read PD till Dusk, you would see how much the author improves in word usage and grammar. It isn't perfect and still has some issue with word usage, but it's the author's way of getting better. Updates are at one chapter a day. I am still confused about the world background and I still need some insight in the characters especially the main ones. :) But well, give the novel a try and hope you enjoy.

    5yr
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    ipohtown

    I was just trying out another story by the same author of ‘The love of a Lycan’. This story is amazing! The author is very creative and imaginative in writing out the characters. I enjoy this story as much as the other. Thank you!!

    3yr
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    nandeeni

    Translation quality of this very good and it's also gramatacilly correct translators are doing their job very good Even try update are also regular Development of the story is very isn't rushing all the plots And subplots are very well developed All the characters are well developed

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    4yr
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    menon25

    I liked the plot but still I will stick with senja nd XT. I was not going to read this but I thought I may get fee chps of senja n XT with their children. Also the bday celebration of XM that senja promised him n their bonding 😝 So please author give use few bonus chpts with them🙏🙏

    3yr
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    tiki_iria

    Reading this because of the event. This would get a higher review from me if it had a decent editor. Translation is hard, writing is hard. But an editor would help fix all the grammar mistakes. They are so frequent that it is a distraction trying to read the story. If I didn't need minutes read for the event I wouldn't have continued as far in as I have.

    3yr
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    ramandeep_kour

    5 stars definitely....it is one of the best novel I read.The story of this novel is very interesting.It captives your attention till the end.All the characters are well written and I must say one should try it .

    3yr
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    phersianly

    😊😁❤😁😊😁😁❤😁😁😁😁❤😁😊😁❤😁😊😁❤😁😊😁😁❤😁😊😁❤😁😁😊😁❤😁😁😊😁❤😁😁😊😁❤😁😊😁❤😁🐭😊😁❤😁😁😁😁❤😁😁😁😁❤😁😁😁❤😁😁😁❤😁😁😊😁😁😊😁❤😁😊😁❤😁😊😁❤😁😊❤❤😁😊😁❤😁😊😁❤❤😁😊😊❤😁😊😁❤😁😊❤😁😊😁❤😁😊😁❤😁😊😁❤😁😊

    4yr
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    Amita_Gaikwad

    So far i love the story. Quinaro is been focused and is lovely story. Quinaro knows that she loves Jun whatever he is .let her give him cold shoulder. This love hate relationship is best 😅

    4yr
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    deepikajeeva

    **JUST READ IT** it has become my second favorite after the same author's another one. Check it out too. These kind of story is hard to come by. I really like the bond between xiao brothers, especially qianru. I love how the relationship develops with jun and qianru ❤❤❤ Thank you author.. Im really glad that i found your stories.. I mean it ..

    4yr
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    SummerKisses

    I actually really like the concept. It has a uniqueness that attracts, and a plot that keeps the readers attention at all times. It’s a splendid story.

    4yr
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    KARASU666

    saya hanya suka membaca. banyak membaca itu menyenangkan. menyenangkan sekali. apakah sudah 140 kata. entahlah. intinya suka membaca. dan terimakasih untuk capternya

    4yr
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    Ayu_Stefani

    Beautifully story, and capture your interest from the very first chapter. Overall a very good book and leaves you wanting more. HIGHLY RECOMMEND!

    4yr
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    Chryiss

    Updates: 5 Writing and World: 4 each Story and Character: 3 each Overall: 3.8 The writing is understandable, but there are still frequent grammatical errors that mess up the flow of reading for me. So, I suggest getting a proofreader that’s knowledgeable about proper sentence and verb construction. I had some difficulty grasping the world and the feuds that were currently going on. Some background passages on what’s happening in this world would clear this up greatly. The world info bits are currently scattered through these first three chapters, but they don’t connect/flow in an easy, coherent big picture. Way too many characters in the beginning. I couldn’t keep up unfortunately nor could I connect or grasp any of them very well individually. I’d say stick to no more than 3 characters for the first 3 chapters, and then you can add more. If you need all of them, then again with the background passages mentioned earlier, explain how they all fit into the current events and their relationships to one another beforehand. Once a solid foundation is established, then continue this piece by piece info bit strategy. But for the beginning chapters, this strategy makes it confusing actually. Lastly, this’ll also help the visualization of the action scenes which were interrupted by info bits on their relationship or current struggle in the world. In short, this just needs some grammar brush ups, organization and trimming, and then the story is good to go!

    5yr
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    LadyVichi

    The beginning was ok but then it got confusing, not satisfying at all. Like is it about Senja or Luna? if Luna, then why start with Senjas sad backstory?

    2yr
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    riemc
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    I really liked this book! It has a driving story and a lot of intrigie. There is also a bit of magic and a lot of twisting plot lines. It’s an addicting story line and this author is a new fund and I will read more of his works for sure.

    2yr
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