Synopsis
Hano Yushiro, a 40 years old Otaku, died due to a stroke, for his surprise, he reincarnated into his younger self, and for an even greater surprise, with a game ability.
Tags
-- Power
Ranking 
-- Power
stone You May Also Like
50Reviews
4.02
- Translation Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
Author Here ! Leave your suggestions in a review, or if you don;t want to review reply to this comment ! Thanks in advance ! Also i will do some words so it will have 140 characters :D
I liked this novel pretty much. It seems way better than NEET with dating sim. The author says he's a newbie but I think he did a really good job. I wish we get regular updates from now on.
I support youuuu author hahahahaha! Please do a great job. This is a really promising novel.
Proper formatting would make this way better with the least effort. I like the plot though. The character depth can be given more importance I feel, but since it is just the beginning, it's acceptable. Good work on the consistency of releases.:)
This is book is really good ch 3 and they have already introduced a potential villain and unlocking ki mastery big thumbs up Looking forward to new chapters.
Well, the story is easy to read and really enjoyeble. I relly like this novel, or at least the story so far but from what i can tell from the writing style that its gonna be an enjoyeble novle
Honestly the reboot after so many chapters makes no sense to me, all his effort wasted, unless he returns to hos reality, the entire story is unappealing to me.
In my opinion this book is a book to read when you're bored. But this book becomes a heaping pile of trash at around chapter 15 to 17. just avoid it
....................................................................................................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler
https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=kZva0nBHzx0 This story's writing quality is rather poor, and this could have been easy to fix. All you had to do was read your **** after you wrote it. But no... because actually writing well is apparently not necessary for the original stories on this website. Also, the main character is an unlikable retard as is everyone else in this poorly written abomination. The mc getting a ridiculously overpowered system is an overused meta at this point. Stop.
I loved till this twist is sthange but lets read. Eu amei ate agora mais ta ficando meio estranho mais pelo menos eu achei legal ate agora. Apesar de não gostar muito desse ultimo.
I have a few main problems with this story: 1. This is the biggest problem that broke your story apart. The part where he can survive kicks from a higher ki cultivator only with 10 endurance, and not only that ... he gained 35 points of endurance too. He could stand still and recive kick to reach an immortal body. While those 10 points was a week of effort. No logic at all. 2. He can add points to luck. Something that is really rare in any video game. And doesn't even think about exploiting that stat....Idk, critical hits ? Lotto number? Fate encounters ? Something like that. 3. He change from a obese body to a fit body in just one week that didn't went to school and said "Hey I just worked out a bit" and everyone was cool as ****. Dropped, no logic in the system. I can only endure so much plots holes. Maybe I should get kicked to raise my endurance to the mightiest level so I can read this novel.
Reveal Spoiler
No new updates for awhile now even though the author promise 1 chapter every Monday Too bad the story isn’t bad actually a relaxing fun to read story
A good read! The story is similar to The Gamer (Korean Webtoon), wich i personally really like. The pacing is fine, not too fast nor too slow, its just "right". There is still so many "Why" thats left unanswered for now, but thats fine since the novel is quite new. (Still 12chapters when i wrote this review). Its a good thing tho, since its make me wanted for more. Just hoping for a faster release tho, but if its affect the quaility of the story, just keep it this way, Author-sama Thanks for writing this novel and keeo up the good works. -Bow to Author-
Thank you for adding yet another novel for an international qidian. I understand very well that you write this story because you want to satisfy your passion for a novel whose stories, characters, abilities, world, etc just the way you want. I also understand that you are asking us for advice as readers or potential readers to jointly create a novel that we can enjoy together. I really thank you very much. I think it's too impolite to offer suggestions or even critics to a novel that are in the process of touch (which we hope can be satisfied to you as the writer and we are as readers), therefore I will give some things I like and hope to have in a general novel. 1. The character of the main character must be very clear, especially how he will act on something that happens to him or to the people and the environment around him. I love the character Fang Zhao in the Superstars of Tomorrow. The main character of a leader's incarnation in the age of destruction, the good one when selecting background for a character. 2. Especially for the ability or accomplishment achieved I hope it is in line with the character of the main character. Xiao Xian in Battle Through The Heavens for example. 3. I do not really care about the harem problem or the general love affair, but if the love story will have a big impact on the story then please make it well, just like the Qin Wentian love story in the Ancient Godly Monarch, not too shallow and not too exaggerated, can be an acceptable reason to continue to be strong aside from his parents. 4. Character companion or side character please do not be made like a very two-dimensional NPC character. 5. Although the time span in the Ancient Godly Monarch is not written very clearly but we can predict it well, but it can be said that the time span in AGM is much better than the time span in the Library of Heaven's Path where an event and the accomplishments we think obtained within at least one year turned out to only happen within two months. 6. Do not be too repetitive in character development and storyline like War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens. 7. I do not like the novel that is too many cliches. I can not give an example because I will immediately remove the novel from the list of novels that I will read when in the review there is someone said that the novel is too cliche. 8. Please do not get too much stuff because of the luck factor as it is in the novel ... .. ah I can not say it. I think that's enough for now and I do not think I need to write down the list of novels I've been reading because I think 80% you can guess. Thank you very much. **: This opinion is the translation of google translate from my native language. Sorry if there are many incorrect sentences. But surely I support you to continue writing.
Very good story.The character is very good and the story development just make me want to read more and more.The writing is just fascinating and the world background just amazing.the romance just can go with how you visioning it man👍
I really have to say that your build world is really marvelous due to the fact that you connected the real world with an alternative one. The character is your weak point though. The MC isn't really introduced so that though you don't hate him you don't like him either.And the other character around the MC should also get a few more dimensions. But you have a really great unpolished diamond of a story and could turn this to an epic story. So keep going.
Just writing a review to increase the rating because it's damn good reading it I remember the plot of the gamer (Korean manga) but so good story line and character development
An Otaku who died while sleeping reincarnated to his younger self to change his future. I like the story because of its funny plot. And i can see a new type of world by just reading the story
Seems nice to read. I just hope that it wont turn inyo 'N.E.E.T receives a dating system' and also doesnt turn into a harem. I just doesnt enjoy harem novel bcs most MC in a harem novel turn into a first rate idiot, who think themselves as righteous