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The Supreme God System

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Author: Drakion

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Destiny is different for everyone, to some it brings happiness and to other sorrow.

This is my story, the story of my fight against my destiny. A fight to know the truth about myself. A fight to get everything I ever wanted in my life. A fight to achieve whatever I ever dream off.

This my story, how a sudden accident changed my life and open the unknown secrets of my life.

I am Spark Hunter and this is my story.
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the novel consist of different realms, i will first start with modern day and make changes and improvement further. 3 chapters are available/per week.
if power ranking goes up than their will be bonus chapters

if you like it buy me a coffee at https://ko-fi.com/T6T6I5BR

you can follow me on instagram https://www.instagram.com/drakion121/?hl=en

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Stone -- Power stone

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Nyanodesu

The premise of this novel is alright, but the execution leaves much to be desired. First of all the grammar, I wouldn't be surprised if I was told that this was written by a child on lsd. There is just too much to fix that if I went into detail it would take me all day. Either find an editor or run your chapters through a spelling/grammar check online. The novel is quite alright, but it's near impossible to read because of all the grammatical errors.

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Drakion

I am trying my best so if you like it please vote๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜˜

5yr
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Drakion

i know that the novel consist of some errors ans flaws. my English sucks but i am trying my best and if you think the novel consist of story related to different novels then you are wrong , you will know about this when novel cross 100 chapters.

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Danare

Isn't this practically almost exactly same as "Leading System"? Even the premise is almost literally same. Plagiarism? Heck it even had the investment skill and everything else. If I could, I would rate it 0/5 Learn to be creative instead of copying somebody else work.

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hk041193

Grammar it's so bad that it's hard to read it. Basically it seems like it's been written by a child who doesn't know any English or it's his second language. The story promise is good but the execution is not right.

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Beyond_Namez

Not worth the read. Grammar mistakes everywhere. 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140

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RoiRed
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Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...1

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SageGodVerhar

I read 10 chapters so far and I am lost is this suppose to be similar to Earth with its technology fused with cultivation and how and why did he get the system in the first place. I understand nothing reading the first 10 chapters caused me a headache as it is either short to the point where it is not even able to be considered a half a chapter or I skim through it trying to read ahead to see if it gets better. All I can say is that this story is confusing to me and reading more is impossible for me. The design look nice along with the synopsis, but just ain't doing for me. I know this is a novice author as myself and I should give him a chance, but I have to give up this novel as reading anymore will cause my head to explode

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10000DaoOfPotatoes

You are literally copying Supreme Martial System, even the name. You copy so hard that it's basically plagiarism and it's sad because you have no originality , grammars horrible, your story has literally the same plot, even character development and cultivation is copied.

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DeadEye12

FYI this is all set in modern world so if you think he is cultivating you have guessed wrongly. i gave up, it was honestly terrible..........

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moh999

Good story u got there so pls dont stop and keep up the good work and try to correct the grammer as much as possible but dont let it get to ur publishing's speed .

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Extremeboy

Yo dude nice one !!! Looking coool your novel is very interesting story. Maja aa gya.. Badua deta hu ki tujhe contract mile croro ka... Good luck for your future and keep it up.. Nice concept ,good cover page, nice story everything is good man..

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Thegr8rocj

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Doisthyraken

Wow amazing story tha character spark really an awesome guy.... I hope your story can beat the target of top 10 doists......................................

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SilverEmpyrean

Great read! Give it a go and you'll get stuck to it like glue! ....................................................................................

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_Lightn1ngG0d_

This novel is poorly edited and can barely be understood. Whatโ€™s even worse is that the author has taken many ideas from a different novel and put them in this one. He didnโ€™t even make it original.

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Starlin

Good novel with modern background system cheat . Keep it up author. Susjsnsoqqsjhhffcueuwoakssw Ssbsssqqduxsowowosnskw*** Iwhsbsbssssis***whwhshhww Uqhwbssssssshwiqoqaoaasusuqi Wwsssssjwiwwhhdudusuwwi

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KingConner

Cool Story!!!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,, ,,

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Xandalar

Its very intresting and i hink every one should red it, how ever the writer dosent update it. He said he will write more but im not so sure about that.

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