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The Water Body Refinement Adept
4.68 (19 ratings)
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How would you feel about reincarnating in a fantasy world?
Upon reincarnating, the pragmatic Drodosis was overjoyed. With his biochip Alpha as his most trustworthy companion, he had never felt more alive, as if his innate desires, previously shackled by laws and society, were unleashed. Setting truth and strength as his goals, he swore an oath to use anything at his disposition to become the one adept who would reach immortality.
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I am happy to see a story appear on this site with a setting similar to Age of Adepts and WMW, so I’ve decided to do my best to review it and maybe help the author steer clear of some of the pitfalls Age of Adepts fell to. The main character being a Water Body Refining Adept is a new and novel idea, please stick to it. In later chapters we can already see the main character going down the same path as the Mc in age of adepts, in that he is trying his hand at making golems. Please, pleeeeaaaassse, don’t make this a story about the main character stomping his way through all obstacles in his path with an army of golems that he didn’t even really have to work for. That undermines the entire point of this story being about a Water Body Refining Adept. Using and making golems is fine, but I would recommend some hefty limitations or time investments to make it so he has to primarily rely on his own efforts. For example, you could make it so using golems at an adept level of combat requires all of your focus to control the golem. This would allow golem centered adepts to still exist, while preventing Drodosis from cheating his way through every battle by using an army of golems to win. I’d also recommend making it ridiculously difficult and expensive to make even a single golem at the adept level, that way he’ll have to be careful using them and not just throw them at his problems. If this were a story about a golem adept, I wouldn’t be nearly as concerned, but lately almost all of the focus has been devoted to Knight training and golem making. He has made pitiful progress on his path as a Water Body Refining Adept in comparison to all the results he’s seen along the other paths, mainly because he hasn’t been devoting his time to his original goal and keeps getting distracted by all these side projects. He hasn’t even asked for Blackwater as a reward yet, despite it being required for the only water body refining spell he knows of. Writing quality is mostly good, though I would recommend checking your usage of the word “expensive”. You keep writing it as “expansive” instead, and they are two different words with two entirely different meanings. Besides that, just be on the look out for spelling and grammar errors and improve as you go along. I have already noticed some improvement along this front in later chapters. As far as character development for Drodosis goes... I’m happy with it, ultimately it could be better but it’s more than I was expecting. He isn’t just a murder-happy cold Adept with no moral principle, instead we see that he values friendship and loyalty and has a few vices (such as his desire to be praised). I hope we see him try and work towards his family gaining a set of morals too, and maybe see him getting some personal attachments of his own to a few of the side characters to humanize him a bit. Anyways, good start to the novel and I hope to see much more in the future!
Good biochip fantasy novels are rare. Hope author completes this novel. Thanks for writing this novel. Hope this gets more popular. Still not reached 140 characters.
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This quite good. It makes me think of WmW or Age of adepts. Bruh...i need to write 140 characters hahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
I don't care I am giving this 5 star.This book is feel like fanic of age of adept.caracter design and world backround is incomplete but if you read after finishing age of adept it will feel much better.-_---_---------_----------------------------------------Time line should be early stages of leton. location of this can be near silver union. Near dark forest .who knows ??
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Great story, not too fast not too slow, not overpowered mc. This story just makes me wish I found this story later so that more chapters were available for me to read at one time. I binged this story in 6 hours really good. Please keep the story rolling.
Muito bom, a historia me lembra "age of adepts", continue com seu otimo trabalho , a historia esta indo na velocidade certa e com um enredo ate agora confiavel👍👍👏👏😀😀
Love the main character and the magic system really good Love the main character and the magic system really good Love the main character and the magic system really good Love the main character and the magic system really good Love the main character and the magic system really good
Well, but I do not see why a body refinement adept is linked to the knight the 2 are normally separated into two totally different system .That the story puts forward a body adept rafinement is a complicated choice if you want to advance the history because the theme of body refinement is not something that can reach the summit.
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If you just want to waste time this is the book for you. There isn't a story, the main character is dumb and there is no world background. Quality if writing and update stability are five. Well maybe four for writing quality.
Loved the story, sure hoped you could continue posting. Loved the story, sure hoped you could continue posting. Loved the story, sure hoped you could continue posting. Loved the story, sure hoped you could continue posting.
hope it will continue 😭😭😭😭 the story fascinating and exiting... please update... i was addicted with the character build ups and improvements.. can't wait for the story continuation
Great original storyline with elements reminiscent of Warlock novels. Difference of MC not a loner. Only wish this didnt seem like its on hiatus/abandoned.
Having read this to chapter 19 I can safely say that the 5* reviews here haven't read this past its synopsis. Writing quality: Although there are some grammar mistakes and misused words and phrases, everything is understandable. Stability of Updates: No idea. So middle ground. Story development: Jesus F. Christ. I don't even know where to start. Stuff happens, vague and skipped by the author. The unwritten background is the authors best friend, that's where everything happens and the author just writes conclusions down for us to read. 2* Character design: I can safely say this novel has the absolute worst char. design I have ever read. This author is so inconsistent with it that it's really just insulting. 1. No MC background revealed whatsoever at first. Author wrote a bunch of stuff that he broke a chapter or two afterwards. Actual character development is non-existent and the MC is changed at the authors whim. 2. SPOILERS HERE ----> At some point the MC says he despises cruelty, while at the same chapter he says how absurdly cruel methods produce great results in terms of management.(k?) Immediately the next chapter he says "The end justifies the means." - and here's the problem with that - all that happened between the MC walking from the entrance to a city to the "city hall" of said city. Just like the story, everything related to main character actually happens in the vaguest sense possible along with most of it being in the unwritten background. World background: Wtf is dat lol? Author just invents things as he pleases, and even worse places those things wherever he pleases regardless of consistency. Summary: MC is a reincarnated individual from a world we know nothing about and the author probably knows nothing about. He invented some kind of biochip there that apparently that followed him through reincarnation and allowed him to tap into the power the world itself. All the time spent in his old world, however, has not shaped him in any sense at all. In the 13 years he spent in his new world he adapted to this new world, allegedly. So at first he dreams of bullying others and taking their rewards for his own (MC's words, literally). Then he spends entire centuries cloaking himself in carnage and slaughter in an illusion where he learns to wield the saber but it doesn't shape him in any way at all - at least nothing that the author has shown us, until a war comes and suddenly the MC is influenced by magical forces beyond what was written and the MC turns into a "The end justifies the means." kind of piece of crap - done poorly. And the absolute worst thing about this novel is dialogue with new characters. My god, the level of garbage this author brings is... unique. Every interaction between new characters, regardless of their status(Ironically because MC lives in a 'power rules everything' kind of world where aristocracy is prevalent) with a "Hi, Name....". Literally. Every. God. Damn. Interaction. Starts. This. Way. MC meets a baron subordinate to his family, he greets said baron "Hi, Baron..." and baron returns with "Hi, MC...." ???? A royal grand knight comes to declare an 'edict' and he starts with "Hi, everyone!... " - LITERALLY. Novel is complete inconsistent trash. Feel free to report my review and get it removed, I won't bother writing another one. Gl hf.
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An amazing story much better quality then some of the crap here. The horror of finding out you reached the last chapter sucks. Plz keep going and dont drop for the love of god too many have been droped recently