The World of Pokemon 2.0

LV 5

pan39

Great novel ░▄▀▄▀▀▀▀▄▀▄░░░░░░░░░ ░█░░░░░░░░▀▄░░░░░░▄░ █░░▀░░▀░░░░░▀▄▄░░█░█ █░▄░█▀░▄░░░░░░░▀▀░░█ █░░▀▀▀▀░░░░░░░░░░░░█ █░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█ █░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█ ░█░░▄▄░░▄▄▄▄░░▄▄░░█░ ░█░▄▀█░▄▀░░█░▄▀█░▄▀░ ░░▀░░░▀░░░░░▀░░░▀░░░

LV 10

TurtleManiacc

Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍 Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍 Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍 Good 👍 great👍 amazing👍 incredible 👍

LV 4

jacknumb

Good story and good devolopment of the character i was really enjoy reading this novel i just hope that you can update more frequency xD keep on good work

LV 5

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

It starts off great and as an example of how to do a reincarnation in pokemon fic. Unfortunately after a while you get to deal with special eevee and then existential questions and you're wondering... Why did I like this fic so much? And you drop it. The reason I liked the fic was because it was kanto based during the anime and with kanto pokemon. I like the old school stuff not the new school pokemon and this fic did that really great. The character was cool enough without being overdone, he found things like the training fields which were a cool concept and he even had his own system even if it wasnt used much at all. Then the special eevee stuff came, and then the existential outpouring and I just... I began to loose my interest at the special eevee that could do psychic stuff n what not. Eevee is a cool pokemon, making it more broken and special than it already is... That's just mint... Following that up with a journey seemed great only for it to turn into existential drama... Really it just didn't work for me. I'm sure there are tons of people who will still love it, but for me? It's just not my cup of tea anymore.

LV 3

ignatius_ogilvy

Its a amazing,amazing very amazing novel/ fan fic(please more chapter for week) Good good good god amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing

LV 5

IcySummer

This story have a great start. The plot is slowly revealing that makes the readers anticipate more of what is to come. Make a steady development in your story and I'm not in doubt that this will be successful. Good luck!!!

LV 2

Marie_UwU

So far, I think this story is pretty good! I like where the plots heading and it does draw interest. Though there are some things that could be annoying for other readers. Seeing the status of the MC and his pokemon being brought up isn't that much of a bother but it would probably be better to add those at the end of each chapter and just substitute it with description and monologue. It just makes it more convenient for the readers. The encounters with many females as well as their reactions aren't that bad. But I think every 10 or a few back-to-back chapters of interacting with one/ multiple would be reasonable enough for there to be a clingy, lustful, etc., female character(s). The story could easily be seen as repetitive with too many female encounters. Also, try not mentioning how handsome the MC is too much as well. It's already known he is unless, of course, a new character is introduced. Keep going with this story author! I'm looking forward to read the future chapters to come! 👍

LV 5

NotEyptiandio

Its good but please don't drop😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

LV 2

Daoist667640

Dude,buddy,my new boss please continue this story alright. Take ur time writing the plot but pls don't drop. IF U DROP ATLEAST INFORM FIRST. WE LOVE U BOSS . MAY MEW BLESS U.

LV 14

DaoOfCulture

I just read the reviews and so far they just seemed like spam so I’m giving this a 3 stars for now. Might give a better review after reading some chaps. But honestly, it is the reviews that reflects whether or not the novel is good or not, so stop spamming such review ‘cus I can’t tell if it is the author doing 5 star reviews on an alt account or not.

LV 13

Aeternabilis

Okay so there are a couple of things, first is lizz honestly I hate her. Its just how you brought her in exactly like misty and then had her stalk him etc. I found it extremely annoying. Going from that it seems this is gonna happen a lot.. I mean yes they guy may be handsome but girls will look maybe go up to him but they wont be crazy af, stalk him, grab onto him and drag him around etc. All I can say/ask will this happen throughout ? Cause if it does honestly might just drop it cause it makes it so hard to read. I mean Its fine if you say did it once and then did it again in a different way 50 chaps later if that is a style you like. However its just with every girl he meets its the same crazy stalker sht.. There are a couple of things I do like however, is mainly he is going on the journey alone. I mean its fine having friends in the cities etc meeting at centres now and again or other such places. But when traveling through forests, searching around, discovering new places. I feel him doing this alone is much better not to just read but for the story. I mean he can always have one person travel with him now and again but him alone will allow him to surprise ppl, connect with his pokemon and train/develop them in peace. If with others this wont go aswell. Another thing that I like is that they all have something that makes them unique (but pika) great for the story and makes a way for us to connect with them. Can only hope you dont get too many pokemon, hopefully only 6.. I mean for a reader its so hard keeping up with like 50 different pokemon. One thing I feel you MUST do is evolve pika.. will makes no sense if he doesnt as his whole thing is going by the game system. However with the evolution you can make it special and just find an image of pika is altered and use that. Another idea is him maybe making his own company, make it a social media company like instagram or something. (do this once he has won the league) and then he can post to others images of places he sees in his travels, his pokemon etc. Going back to what I hope you dont go to deep into is the family, two souls, light dark thing. It is rly overused and just came to read a light fic about pokemon. I mean thats what pokemon is.. its just annoying to read for me anyway. Plus seen it wayyyy to many tines. Finally you HAVE to sort out this move thing... its honestly taking the piss. Literally in all his important fights he magically 'temporally' learns a move to let him win the fight. You want him to win by power, strategy etc not by 'luckily' learning the move he needs to win for 60 secs.

LV 4

Steven_Beck_5008

This chapter keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖

LV 2

LadyTenebrys

Kinda good. I like it, but somethings not doing really well in my mind, but I don’t really know what. Let’s see how it progresses, don’t drop it please

LV 13

Animated_Kingdom

Awesome story keep up the good work. I enjoy the world that you've created here.