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Guy ends up in Harry Potter after Death, he goes with his Thief system to help him survive in the world.
Weasley Bashing for Ginny, Ron and Molly the others I have no opinion and I love the twins.
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Write a reviewthe idea isn't bad, the execution is horrible tough. while he uses his system to steal in the muggle world everything seems to be reasonable. 50 pound here, 20 there. and some random items, things people would actually carry around. The moment he enters the wizarding world every wizard seems to be carrying a couple 100.000 punds worth of Galleons in their pocket. with a population of approximately 3000 he somehow manages to steal 15.000.000 G in one day, not from gringotts from Passerby. even if he increased the wizard population to 100.000 in this novel in britain, each and every one of them would need to carry 150G in their pockert and his system would have to steal money everytime to make it. The mc stays in the leaky couldron for a couple months for 10 G just to give you an idea of a Galleons buying power. Sickles are clearly the main currency.
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well it's a good story...well as far as summary of events go because that's all there is like someone is telling the events that's happened...there's nothing new all the same things that happened in other fanfics....MC do things that no one questions like he brings smartphone and laptops...i know that it will work with pureblood bcoz they don't know anything about technology but muggles also do not question it....it is smooth sailing for MC...there's nothing new if u really want to read a story and not a summary...search HP: A Magical Journey.... I'm sure you'll like it.
Character personality is so messed up Idea is good but execution is fcked up Nit my cup of tea 🌍🌍🌍🌎🌏🌍🌏🌍🌏🌍🌎🌏🌍🌏🌏🌍🌍🌏🌍🌏🌍🌎🌍🌏🌍🌏🌍🌏🌍🌏🌍🌏
The idea of the system is pretty good and mc is pretty op, but the characters act unrealistically and carry an unrealistic amount of money on them. The worst thing is that mc acts creepily and is literally grooming children. Like he is legit planning one of many choises of children to be his future wife. Overall would have kept reading if mc wasn't a child grooming pedo.
The story is well written and has some interesting interactions. The system the MC has though is in no way a Thief system. The MC just activates his 'Thief' skill and random items, money and mana are just gifted to him. I read 5 chapters and he never steals anything himself and the ridiculous amounts of money he steals are never addressed. Nobody notice the stealing except in chapter 1 when a woman's underwear is stolen from her. The system might as well be a shop where he can buy OP skills and items with money assigned to him
Couldn't go farther than 1 chapter. The author is a joke. His introduction makes NO SENSE AT ALL. Also he switches from first to third person narrator multiple times. This is beyond cringe and is simply one of the worst stories out here.
Completely disappointed, I thought Guy meant Might Guy for a momentㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
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The book is actually really nice , i just wish that at the beginning it explained more about the system and the mc , and the updates are quicker.
hope you get back to writing this soon as its a good story with a great background buildt in. also want to see where the relationships go and if pandora survived.
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I love it. It’s honestly just an easy going experience while reading it and there’s no need for any extreme actions like in other fanfics. Plz keep uploading 😊
It's pretty good. You actually did something in this FF that not many people do or maybe I just didn't read similar FFs. The point I'm talking about is the fact you told Dumbledore that Sam is from the future which in my opinion is a wise move, it will explain his decisions in Dumbledore eyes and why he is so powerful. That move was big brain time.
Amazing story! However not for me becuase i dislike so affecionatly dubed ‘Muggle Lover’ and prefer a more ‘must preserve wizards culture’ approach.
Its a good story but~ for others it might not be a very good story thus the bad ratings. I cant really say anything else that relates to a review
Wow. It is a system that allows the MC to grow in power quickly, what keeps it serious is: experience and its (physical) body until it grows. I like how you create a romantic path with girls from a young age (greater sentimental union for the future.) although you rush with intimate gestures. you can't do it as soon as you just met her. but they are great
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Author Pink_Ghosty
the idea is cool and the system is overpowered in the idea of theft since actually he doesn't steal the system dose it. but the mc kinda creepy when he met hermione since she was child and he is reincarnated that was the turn off for me. the other characters are weirdly accepting of him witch is unrealistic. that about it, good luck with fanfic.