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Indefinite Hiatus. I most likely will rewrite it if I come back to it.
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-an mc who was supposed to be op since he has alucard ability was so weak he couldn’t even fight lizards -a dumbass mc who doesn’t think and just go with the flow -lazy mc, gets his brother kidnapped and all he do is sleep -has alucard ability yet so weak i couldn’t bear to read it anymore -a plot that can be written in one chapter was 20 chapter plus long
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Read to chapter 65 and dropped it, the MC is a coward most of the time, even after Alucard took action he still let people get hurt before he did anything, he wastes time, barely trains and acts as a spectator most of the story. There was a romantic plotline with Erica in the begining and he even turns her but he ends ip getting NTR'd by some coyote chick, somehow all those feeling dissapeared after the author took a break and now she's into girls with the MCuck still having feelings for her. He shares power like its candy, turns the most useless person into a vampire that has almost all his powers. This story needs a major rewrite.
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i feel the story has gotten a little lackluster in it aproach especially the the way they potray the characters i think alex should keep more of his inocent sadist sense of humor especially when he's talking to scott and stiles to and i also feel like to many things all at once can convulute a story and thats the thing happens when yo introduce characters to soon instead you should let it flow a little more naturally but also i do feel like there is pontential in the alex character although the things i did like were the growing between erica and alex which i found sweet and although probably just add it when needed i also felt like the way
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Dont bother reading this it was cool at first ok the grammer is shit but still readebill but the shit with Erica be a lesbian and now has a romantic feelings for Malia WTF. I want the MC to have a harem says the Author yeahhh way to goo dumass you lost most of your reads becaus of this shit. peace out i am done with this shit
Didn't really liked it . Just wasted my time reading this fan-fic . Just too boring and bland the real story takes really long to start and by the time it starts you really don't want to read it anymore.
The idea is good but it is a disappointment in the end. The mc is a joke and pretty much a beta that can get cucked any time and he wouldn't even know. I would not recommend this to those who like cunning and smart mc or mc with common sense.
Muito boa a história, continue com isso você estar mandando muito bem gostei mesmo espero que você ñ drop ela.................................................
The story had promise but the constant incorrect grammer, nonsense sentence structure and the fact the author can't seem to remember if the MCs name is Alex or Allen made me give up after 8 chapters. To the Author You need to use a word processor that can help with spelling and grammar, actually remember your protagonists name and for the love of god get a beta reader/editor.
Well I read the first volume I think that’s it for me,, kind of enjoyed it in the beginning, mc is okay to me overall for an fanfic it’s quite good that was until Erica came in this **** at first I didn’t mind it but come on author really? You could have nailed their relationship but you choose not to.. well thanks for this fanfic could have been one of the best **** wolf ones.
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Good story thanks more chapters ......... Good story thanks more chapters ......... Good story thanks more chapters ......... Good story thanks more chapters .........
geat story just too bad it was dropped the characters may needs some more developpement but it still is a great story even with the sort of plotholes there are
This fanfiction story is really good there is nothing I hate about it I wish there were more chapters though because that would be even better
Sigh, why i am writing a review even though the novel is dropped, is because it had SOOOOOOOO much potential, and i am also going to use this as inspiration in a small part of my new novel.
the story is very good pity that dropped ------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------------- -----------------------------------------------------------
Can't to read the next chapters! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I’ve actually read till the last chapter you updated but I really wish you would hurry and update again.... no rush but I really enjoy your story so yeah...
Thanks for the chapter but there is need for Alex to trust scot since he the scot has trusted him with his own identity so also the mother supposed to know what is going on with her children
you know what I hate about this fanfic is that you're giving most if not all his powers to the person he bites..........and that's not how it works they get a trait or maybe one ability, not all............