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Unideal Romance

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Author: TianaWrites

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"Why didn't you wait till the end of the service"
"For what? Pastor Luke" she rolled her eyes.
He grabbed her waist. "I was worried Marissa! And it's Luke"
"I could not continue looking at you at that altar, I just want you to sleep with me c'mon!" She yelled.
"Not this again" He withdrew his hands. "We have to be married.. an.."
"I'm not ready!"
"Till then" He walked away leaving her staring at him.
Marissa had a phobia for marriage and ministers of God weren't her kind of people, but then Luke.

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Abysalyounglord

It seems that the story revolves around a woman named Marissa who is struggling with the idea of marriage and has an attraction towards a pastor named Luke. The dialogue suggests that there are conflicting emotions and desires between the two characters that may lead to tension and drama in the story. In terms of advice for the author, it would be to continue developing the characters beyond their initial stereotypes and to explore their motivations and backstories. It is also important to address the themes of xenophobia and religion with sensitivity and nuance to avoid perpetuating harmful stereotypes or offending readers. Additionally, the author should focus on creating a compelling and engaging plot that keeps readers invested in the story. Good Luck. 👍

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Marke_pavel

The story is really good with the plot As if I'm reading a novel from the eighties and I love that period Continue with this creativity, with some word improvement, and it will be a perfect novel

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Stardreamer12

I really enjoyed your story and your writing style. It was very interesting and I'm looking forward to more chapters

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Ole1
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This story has a unique plot and very interesting characters. I can’ wait to find out what happens next

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Urcrayontastic

The author has amazing characters and great character development! And who doesn't love a love triangle! I am definitely interested to see what happens between Rissa and Luke! Gives me like Gilmore Girl vibes haha

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WeebWrites96

So far, so good, I'm really like Rissa's character and personality. I also like how you used different phrases and expressions. There were a couple of grammer issues, but none that were alarming. Keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next chapter.

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MonarchTheFirst

The love triangle 😰, so far both men seem to have good intention, (chapter 6) and I look forward to know more about them, Rissa is too jaded but with all the love she is receiving, she might fall in love herself. Awesome story.

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vorlefan

Its a nice drama to read! Feels like I'm reading a classical tv show from around 2005. I liked the way that the characters are developed and how they interact. The setup of the MC with her family as well. To improve: Writing: There are some minor issues with the writing that can broke off the readability a bit, but nothing a rewrite resolves. All in all, keep up the good work

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