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Author: ShishiruiSugar

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Hello, all.

So, I'd like to inform you that this work had been denied contract in this platform. Hehehe, probs because Webnovel had been so strict with contracts lately, I got rejected :'D

So, this will be my current decision. I'mma try and rewrite it a bit (just a bit, not that much) and post it on another platform. Possibly R0yal R0ads and maybe also Scr1bblehub. If you want to read the continuation, I'll post another annoucement about where you can read it next. (Maybe those platforms above or patreon).

Or do you have suggestions?

Well, anyway this might be for the best.

Regards, Sugar.

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ShishiruiSugar

Hello, all. So, I'd like to inform you that this work had been denied contract in this platform. Hehehe, probs because Webnovel had been so strict with contracts lately, I got rejected :'D So, this will be my current decision. I'mma try and rewrite it a bit (just a bit, not that much) and post it on another platform. Possibly R0yal R0ads and maybe also Scr1bblehub. If you want to read the continuation, I'll post another annoucement about where you can read it next. (Maybe those platforms above or patreon). Or do you have suggestions? Well, anyway this might be for the best. Regards, Sugar.

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HaracasAye

This novel has alot of good. It reads nicely. The characters are decent and the setting is given its fair due but there are things about it I find puzzling. Many times I find myself wondering what role the spacefaring civilization bent on conquering the world serves. The mc has no problem annihilating them and the story so far has to do with the locals of the world. It feels like a missed opportunity or something added on after the fact to give the novel a different flavour. By making the mc so strong that the spacers are no threat to his conquest it renders their presence pointless. Why not just make this a hard fantasy in that case? Then there is also the nature of the time loop genre. By showing us the mc attaining his goal only to be thrown back to the beginning and being forced to change doesnt make for a very enjoyable read. Especially so as he starts a villain, where will he end in that case?

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