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A girl that doesn't get how all those girls can be screaming at boys like, ''awwwe'' or ''kyaaa he looked at me'' meets an famous celebrity that every girl would want to be his. If she had known he was a celebrity she wouldn't have decided to be his friend, what will she do if she finds out about him being a celebrity?! Read now and find out!!
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it’s quite early to say anything but so far the story has been interesting. Although the plot is commonly used, I have to admit that I’m a sucker for this types of tropes. Also, there were scenes wherein the FL was relatable that it made me like the book more :)) Writing Quality: There were a few grammar mistakes but it doesnt affect the overall presentation of the story. In my opinion, I suggest that you should add a line break when there’s a dialogue scene happening. It was a bit confusing for me to read. Stability of Updating: I’m not sure how often the author updates this book. Story Development: As i’ve mentioned earlier, it’s rather early to say anything about it. Based on what i’ve read so far, the story development seems good.
Certain amount of correction is required when it comes to the grammar. Other than that, the plot is well-written and amazing. It is the type I usually go for!
Author!!!!!... hurry come for a tight hug n a kiss hehehe😀😀😀....I love ur work but plz just take note on the grammar other than that everything is awesome...I love the characters💖💖💖💖💖💖....plz I need more chapters😭😭😭😭😭
I like the storyline but the writing needs to be better. I get confused with each conversation like who's talking . Better proofread it or use Grammarly. Some suggested that to me when I had issues with grammar. I hope you would continue this story. It could be something big if the writing is more smooth. Good luck!
Firstly, I would like to commend you greatly for your effort in this work which I believe must be your first. Thank you, indeed. Secondly, let me start with the writing quality. There are some errors you made regarding the use of punctuation marks, like commas. Spacing can also be used to seperate sentences, quotes and you can make more use of paragraphs where necessary. Apart from these, your use of english words is very good. Your romance story line good as well as the characters especially the female lead. As a writer myself, I rate you high for updates and world building. Lastly, keep up the good work.
An honest review. You need to rewrite your story in a manner that's very readable and understandable to the readers. Too much of grammar errors and typos makes the readers not interested to read your story. 'Coz almost every sentence has grammar errors and typos.You should have someone to proofread it before you publish it. Or better yet have a grammarian edit your story, so it can be corrected right away. Hoping for the best for the author.
I don't like reading pure romance in a modern era setting, so it's already offputting. Capitalize every word on the book and the chapter title except prepositions (by, on, of, to, etc. Spell out the word you, don't just write u Don't write dialogue like a phone conversation. Think of the conversation as a battle, where one character is trying to make the other character do their bidding. Balance the amount of dialogue and narration. (next time try to avoid making the main character the narrator.) Find a balance between quantity and quality Proofread your work and use a grammar tool to improve yourself.
I really like the flow of the story. I liked the idea behind this book. The only drawbacks are grammar and spelling. At many places it feels as if you are writting for timepass, not for others to read. Don't mind me wrong but at some places you have used 'u' instead of You which kinds of show you are not serious towards your own book. You have not used punctuation marks, not capitalised alphabets and haven't proof read. At one place you have used some other word instead of surprise. Such mistakes can be easily catch if you proofread the chapters with seriousness. This book has potential, don't loss it because of silly grammar and spelling mistakes.
I dont wanna go thru grammar issues, i already know that u are very aware of it. but i want to add- use commas if needed.. also, because of your grammars and spellings, i strongly suggest proofreading before posting. that will help too. i like the story so far and im on chapter 10. as you write, you improve ;) <3
I read the story and I can only say that it needs work on proper grammar but if you fixed the grammar, all in all, it's a good story. I recommend you to proofread this before you post.
Hmm, some grammar mistakes, a bit on the jarring side imo, I'm sure it'll get a lot better if you get the help of a proofreader or programs like Grammarly. The plot, I think it's a bit of a cliche, but I'm not going to deny that this is a fun cliche I can get behind, something I'm sure people will always love.
So far the story is going good. The plot is interesting and one which people usually go for (so do I). The characters are well written as well.♥️ But it needs some editing. There are some typos and grammatical errors. If there are too many, it becomes annoying fro readers which set backs the story. Try to write dialogues of two people having a chat in different lines. Write one's dialogue first then leave a line blank and then write the next one. It makes easier for people to understand who is speaking what and it won't interfere with the flow of the way things are going. Besides this, I love the plot and how the story ia going. I will surely continue reading it. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
The protagonist is very interesting, I have to admit that it is the first time that I have come across a novel of this style and I liked it a lot, follow if I will add it to favorites to continue reading it ;)