After making a few changes, the photoshoot for the Sweet Angel began.
Xu Xinrou stared at Xu Xiyan, unable to believe that Xu Xiyan was able to make something out of it.
As she looked at how the people complimented Xu Xiyan, she regretted not going with the white dress.
…
After the photo shoot was completed, the editing and publishing were next.
In the meantime, it was time for them to begin the actual shooting for the commercial video at a beach in Fstan.
The dresses for the video were still the same, one black and one white.
Xu Xinrou quickly chose the white dress, leaving Xu Xiyan with only the black dress to choose.
Yet again, both of them attracted every person on the scene as soon as they came out.
The director did notice that they switched their dresses but did not comment any further because of the effect it gave.
As the shooting began, Xu Xiyan and Xu Xinrou walked down the beach, hand in hand, towards a handsome actor.
As the actor caught the scent of their perfumes, he approached them with the prepared script.
Xu Xiyan recited her line perfectly, and yet Xu Xinrou forgot what she had to say.
"Cut!" Mason shouted. "Ms. Xu, what is wrong with you?"
"I'm really sorry, I forgot my line."
"There are only three lines, how could you even forget that!"
Mason was already fed up with the so-called "professional" actress.
Even Xu Xinrou had no idea what was going on with her. Her memory wasn't as good as it used to be and she was always forgetting things.
She suspected that it was because of the post-abortion syndrome.
The director requested a reshoot and the second take began.
When it was Xu Xinrou's turn to speak, she could only remember the first half of her line and forgot everything after that.
"Ms. Xu! What the hell are you doing?" Mason scolded as he pointed at Xu Xinrou. "Are you even using your brain? Did you read the script?"
Xu Xinrou could only bow and apologize for her mistake, and yet that was not what Mason wanted.
"Forget it," Mason said. "Change places with Jing Xi, you don't have to speak anymore."
Because of Xu Xinrou's mistake, Mason decided to make a few changes.
In the third take, Xu Xinrou had no line, and her position was changed to a much more supporting perspective.
The third take was successful, and they continued to the next few scenes before everything ended.
And thus the post-editing process began.
LK was fast with their work. The poster was already finished and published onto different media. The people were attracted to LK's new line of products because of their new ambassadors.
In just three days, the sales for the "Bewitching Fae" broke LK's record.
LK had received a lot of feedback asking who the one representing the product was.
With success in the new line, LK decided to hold a celebration dinner, inviting both of their ambassadors over.
Xu Xiyan and Xu Xinrou once again showed themselves in front of the crew. Xu Xinrou attended the dinner wearing a dress with huge cleavage just to attract more attention.


"He is the entertainment king who is in charge of everything. Been single for years, he had zero scandal. One day, a woman and a girl turned his life upside down. 
The little cutie held him tight, not letting go. ""Handsome uncle, you look very much like the daddy I have lost for many years!"" Huo Yunshen felt depressed. “Me? Daddy?!” 
The little cutie proudly pulled her mommy over, ""Mommy, I have found a long-term meal ticket for you, handsome and gullible."" 
Xu Xiyan smiled at the elegant man. 
Recalling the accident five years ago, his face sank. ""How dare you steal my DNA?"" 
She laughed. ""Not steal, just borrow!"" The man took her in his arms and warned in a dangerous tone, ""Woman, should I get what’s mine back, with interest?"" 
She stood on her toes. ""Yeah, how about another baby?"""


If you're in a hurry, read the last line.
This is just a heads up. Don't want to leave you guys hanging. Making guesses as to why I won't post for a while. Before that, I want to give a shoutout to these beautiful people:
the silent reader Mrganja,
my fellow Filipino Author, xlntz (Check out his work here on WebNovel: Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman)
and, of course, the one who was there from the start, Pale444.
Thank you so much, you guys. 
I've only recently gotten back to the groove and things will pick up from here on out. I've been editing Volume 1 chapters while also writing, outlining and editing Volume 2 chapters. That's why I've been taking my time, as well as not posting as much as I used to. 
To those who just started reading, I hope you stick around. I swear that the quality of my work will get better from now on. If you don't want to though, that's fine. Thank you for your time, I appreciate it a lot. Really, I do. If you do leave, please tell me what turned you off from the story. I want to know which parts of my writing can be improved, just, please be civil when you do. 
The rest of the chapters for this week, Tues - Sat, will be posted on Sunday. All at the same time. I'm sorry if I once again tweaked my schedule, but life has been... hard for a while now.
I won't get much into it but I'm losing motivation to live. So I want to go on a relaxing writing spree. I love writing, and that's the only thing that keeps me alive right now. But starting this novel meant posting everyday, because I don't want to let the loyal readers down. 
For me, daily posts consist of writing, editing and publishing the chapter in just an hour or less. I'm a graduating Civil Engineering student, I can only give so much free time to writing. This 'habit' really stops writing from being fun, because I lose my view of the story.
That's exactly what happened with Volume 1. If you are looking closely, you'd find that I wrote about 54 chapters plus 9 side story chapters (that I removed temporarily, sorry Rodrigo_Miyasaka). That means writing 63 chapters in the span of around a month. That's another novel's four months of work since most of my chapters then were averaging around 2300. Some around 3000+ while a few around 2000. That's more than a hundred and forty thousand words, which most original novels divide into at least a hundred chapters.
I'm not saying that I'm better than those authors. I'm absolutely NOT in the level where I can be proud enough of my novel to share it with my loved on-, I mean, relatives. This is my first novel, I make mistakes, feel regrets at decisions I made and even want to scrap everything and do it all over again. But I won't, because I want to finish my first novel. I want to know if I can do this right, If I can really be someone who writes web novels.
Now that we talked about how many words Volume 1 has, I want to just share that I just edited all those chapters recently. I rewrote, expanded and reformatted all those chapters. I also added four more chapters in Volume 1. There would have been more if I wasn't rushing it. 
Only reason Volume 1 didn't become 100 chapters was because I wanted to go back to focusing on writing Volume 2. Re-editing those in four days really got to me. It also stacked with my personal problems, so I just feel tired.
I've started exercising again, which is a good start to going back to normalcy. I used to weigh around 70 kg, which was lean for my age and height, but now I'm bordering on 100 kg. I want to go back to my old self, and bring back with it my motivation to live again.
After this Sunday, I'll see what I feel is better for me as a writer. I can, for sure, write daily chapters. There's proof for that. But if I feel that the quality of my work will be better by doing things another way, then I'll make that clear by then. Rest assured that I will be finishing this novel with no cheap, rushed ending.  The reason for that is because I love this novel. This novel is about me, and I want to share that with you guys.
See you guys on Sunday, I guess.
TLDR: No chapters until Sunday, will post 'a minimum' of 5 chapters on Dec. 1, 2019.


(Author's note:

Story will be updated on August 3, 2020. I'm having my last semester in college so I'll focus on that for a while. Also, a remake will be done so reading this version would still be worth it. 

For those who were looking forward to more content, sorry but you'll have to wait longer. But my personal life has to come first, and this hobby can wait. If you're willing to wait, I'll give you your due reward, but not for a while. Thank you, and hope you like what you'll see.)

The world as we know it is about to end. Billions of lives will be lost, countries devastated and society left in ruins. But if you have the power to save it, would you?

Zel Huertazuela has had a life that's full of let downs. His mother was a debt-ridden mess, his father was an abusive angry bull while he gets nothing but insults when trying to fix them. He doesn't even know how to move forward with his life.

“Never mind, I don’t really know what I want, why not just do what people tell me to? Money is needed you say? I’ll be an engineer then, those pay well right?”

“Get a work that you would do even if you don’t get paid for it? What the hell kind of fantasy is that?”

But that would have been it if it weren't for his sudden ability to live a lifetime in the span of a dream that lasts a night.

"Wait, this isn't the hospital?!"

"Where's my wife!"

"Now that I'm back, I'll be rich!"

"I'll fix the mistakes I made, there won't be any more regrets for this guy!"

"Monsters?! No problem!"

"We won in the dream, why can't we win in reality?"

"What do you mean it changed?"

"Help! How do I fix this?!"

If you were given a second chance, would you take it? Even if you have to lose everything you built up today?

Find out how a man finds himself saving the world by being the man who rules it!

(The first volume is basically a very long prologue. The 'Battle of the Beginning' chapters will be more representative of what to expect from future volumes. 

This story is something I had in mind for a long time now so many of the ideas and scenarios can be seen in my other works but they are only similar, not literal copies. Enjoy!)

Gun-Ho was having a beer with Jae-Sik at the security office in his company. It was all dark outside.
"You used to be very active in the literature club when we were in high school, and if I remember correctly, you also participated in making our school newspapers."
"Yeah, I did. After graduating from high school, I went to college in Seoul and majored in creative writing. It was not one of the top universities, but I had a good life at that time because I could do what I enjoy doing."
"That's right. I think I heard that you studied creative writing."
"I even won the annual spring literature contest after graduating from college, which was held by a newspaper company in a province. At that time I felt like I could rule the world. I wanted to get a job in a newspaper company, but I found a job at a publishing company instead."
"So you got a job where you can use what you learned in college and that was also what you liked to do with your life."
"As you know, a publisher is different from a factory like here. It was a small publisher with only three or four employees and it wasn't doing very well."
"Hmm."
"However, that publisher was publishing a few bestseller books at that time, so they could pay me even though it was not much. I met my ex-wife there too."
Jae-Sik's voice started shaking when he talked about his wife.
"Have some more beer."

"Sure."
Jae-Sik sipped his can of beer before he continued to talk.
"Did your wife work at the same publisher?"
"My wife was a poet. In order to make our livings, we both worked at the publisher as a freelancer doing proofreading and editing."
"Hmm."
"So we hit it off when we met. I was a chief editor at the publisher at that time. Unfortunately, the company could no longer find a good book that would generate enough revenue. Any subsequent books we published were sold less than 500 books at a maximum."
"Does it cost a substantial amount of money to publish a book?"
"Our company usually published foreign books. So it cost more than 10 million won to do the translation, editing, design and printing work."
"Wow, it does cost a lot."
"That company eventually had to close its business. I couldn't find a job in the field afterward because the publishing industry wasn't doing well at that time. So I made a living by doing editing. However, I don't know what happened to me; I guess I had to stay in the field doing editing even though I wasn't making much. But, instead, I opened a deep-fried chicken restaurant with a loan."
"Hmm."
"I put about 100 million won in that restaurant business including its premium. However, the restaurant strangely suffered from the beginning. Moreover, my wife became testy because of the customers who were rude and loud, and sometimes they harassed my wife, those low-lives."

"Hmm."
"She would have been able to take some stress that arose from the business if we were making good money. However, the business was suffering, and we were pressured by the creditors to repay the loan, on top of those abusive customers. My wife couldn't take it anymore. You know people who write like a poem, they are more sensitive than average people."
"Did your wife invest her money in the restaurant too?"
"She did. She took out the money from her credit cards here and there and invested 20 million won in the business. I also used my credit cards in addition to loan from a bank and put about 40 million won in the business."
"So, you started the business with your own cash of 30 million won."
"I had a severance pay of 5 million won that I received from the publishing company's president. He literally cried when he gave it to me. And I borrowed 10 million won from my mother. I used those 15 million won in addition to my own cash—another 15 million won."
"The debt was too high compared to your own investment fund."
"The debt grew like a snowball and we were behind our rent. It was that time when my wife eventually suffered a miscarriage of a baby; she asked me to divorce her."
"Whew. I had similar life experiences. You had a harsh time."
"I haven't heard from my wife for a while. She must still be suffering financially because of her credit card debt. She is probably having a hard life doing editing work."
"Hmm."
"When I eventually closed the deep-fried chicken restaurant, I was left with a debt of over 50 million won. I suffered for quite a while by the creditors before I became a person with a bad credit score."
"Why didn't you apply for rehabilitation?"
"I did. With rehabilitation program, I was supposed to pay off debts according to a payment plan provided by the court. I was paying a certain amount of money to the court every month for several months until the accident happened."
"An accident?"
"I was doing the editing work, but when I couldn't get enough work to make a living, I got a job in a delivery company. I think I worked there for about half a year until the accident. I was delivering a package and I had to make a quick delivery, so I made a U-turn where I was not supposed to do and then I hit a car that was coming from the opposite direction. I crossed the yellow line to make a U-turn. I guess something happened to me that day to cloud my judgment."
"Hmm."
"I am not good at physical work since I have always done office work like writing and editing. Moreover, I had a bad credit score. So it was really hard to find a job. I saw Jong-Suk working with machines and doing welding. He looks great. I know I can't do that kind of work."
"So, you have 50 million won debt in total?"
"I have been paying for the debt until now. I think I have 30 million won left by now. Oh, I talked with the general affairs manager the other day about it. He said I would get paid 1.6 million won per month, and I can take the amount of basic living expenses out of it before it is seized. I think I can save some money then."
"Saving money?"
"Yeah. My rent is paid by the company, and I can have my meals at the company. So, I think I can pay off the debt after ten years working here."

"Right. The biggest expense that the people who don't make enough money is the cost of the rent. The people who don't have money have to pay for rent, and the people who have money receive that rent from them. That's the current economic system we are living in. Consequently, the gap between the rich and poor is getting bigger. Ten years are too long for you."
"Well, it is still hope. It's a good thing that the debt is shrinking instead of growing. There is one thing that bothers me a lot though. I collected some funds from our friends from high school to make an alumni directory book. I couldn't make it happen even though I really was going to make it."
"People don't make those types of directory book nowadays, do they? Many people don't want to expose their real address."
"I know. So I was going to enter their e-mail address instead of physical addresses with phone numbers. I started collecting the necessary information and writing some stuff already like the history and path that our school took so far and news from our friends, etc. I still have the writings with me. It will cost 2-3 million won to complete it but I used that money to pay my rent because I was about to be evicted. I became an animal to our friends."
Jae-Sik eventually burst into tears.

This is the story of a poor young man whose poverty even shreds apart their family willing to climb his way through society and into the top. A very realistic novel that moves away from fantasy and sci-fi and focuses solely on the issues of society and life.

I apologize for not posting new chapters for so long. I came to the realization that where I was going, the plot line wasn't clear, nor was the objective. I also came to a point where I needed the history of the world. So after a few weeks, I have rebuilt my world, built a magic system with consequences, built my characters in more depth then I had before. I also swapped some character roles to follow my plot line, with the sub plot lines for each book. 

And with that I have built new creatures and monsters, overhauled each race. 

So I am now currently rewriting all my chapters. I have just reached the part where they have entered the shifting lands. However during that period, I have introduced Four new characters that will play big affects on the MC's . 

Once I have finished writing to the point of this last chapter that is on this App, hoping in the next two weeks, I will then be posting one chapter a week for the new book, now named, "The Lost Heirs". Positive side, I have found an editor and a publisher who are interested in this series I am creating. 

I do hope you guys will read the new book once I post chapter One on April 22nd 2019. 

Thank you to those who have read this draft to the end, your views are my encouragement. 
If you have anything to say, editing, ideas for the book, suggestions, or improvement, please don't hesitate to comment and let me know. 

Thank you again.

A realm destroyed. Aria and Rhosyn escape the castle with their life. hiding in the deepest parts of the realms waiting to join forces and take back their throne. Or so they thought. Will Aria and Rhosyn be able to overcome betrayal, love, and losing those closest to them and take back what is rightfully theirs? Read and find out.
Romance, adventure, sexual content, fighting.

I was delighted that the number of collections was growing by my farmer Dara. Here, finally, readers understood the secret of history! We started to read! Even not very folding English did not become an obstacle for them!

But then I look, something is not right! No matter how good the story was in the opinion of the author, he is not so presumptuous!

The answer was near. For reading stories about farming, they give points that can be exchanged for coins. A new mind game.

Then it turned out that reading is not necessary at all, you can just turn the phone and pretend that you are reading, you still get points.

Thanks to the Web Novels, but readers are always trickier than kind attempts to attract readers through a simple advertisement of novels.

As balls cease to give, to see from 161 readers will remain faithful readers, 65 people! I am grateful to them!

While I'm busy writing a short novel about Treasure Hunters, I think it will have 100 chapters. And when I finish, then I can switch to the remaining three novels.

- About a coin there will be only 100 chapters.

- About cunning merchants 150-160 there may be 200 chapters.

- But the Farmer Dara is hoping to write a total of chapters 300 another or 500, as it turns out.


Overall result: I started writing novels on Web Novels:

from February 23, 2019

During this time, 4 novels and two short stories were started.

Of which 2 were sent to Dropp. This is the first edition of the Magic Farmer Gift and the Traveler's Note.

In the first case, there was a mistake and a ban that could be removed by contacting the moderation service, but I decided to rewrite the novel. Having released the second edition.

The second novel, or rather short stories, had few subscribers and few readers, so I decided to drop it. There was not enough time to write a chapter for other novels.

Then the idea came up to write spin-offs about Dara and treasure hunters. Thanks to the reviewers, they suggested a new idea, namely to make the characters more lively and emotional. Enter an additional character - a girl. With the advent of a romantic line, albeit a short one.

I rewrote this novel three times, so updates for other novels and this novel were delayed.

Conla rewrote Roma, found that it was even more interesting than writing a novel from a white sheet. But rewriting needs material. Therefore, until the 11th chapter, treasure hunters, I was engaged in editing and editing the text 1-2 sometimes 3 times. But I began to lose the basic idea of ​​the novel.

So now I decided to write the main story of this novel about search engines and treasure hunters, in the form of raw materials. And when I'll write a full novel. I can rewrite it again, for the fourth time, with an already more thorough revision.

If in this year 2020 I manage to earn more money (if I find a new job and there will be no unexpected expenses), then I have a desire to hire an editor and proofreader either through a forum or find them in my city to help me improve my romance. Well, let's see how it turns out in practice.

Out of 310 days, I really wrote only 180 days, since 130 days were spent on treatment for diseases, unexpected expenses on treating my father and uncle had an ischemic stroke. A lot of effort was spent on this and I was no longer able to write something. Since I slept no more than 2 hours a day. This is clearly not enough to have the strength to write something. But it's good that this time has passed.

And so in 180 days I was able to write unfinished novels:

- Jiang's magic coin
- Magic Farmer Dara - second version
- Stories about merchants or cunning merchant
- Thoughts on writing stories
- The Adventures of Treasure Hunters

Total views - including two deleted short stories:
440,890 views (7 short stories of which 5 currently exist)
287 collections
278 chapters
276,750 words (out of 2 deleted short stories another 150,000 words) +874 слова

There are 102 novels in the library, 4 of which are read, I am reading 4-5 now. Periodically I read 11, those that like 4! Promising for reading - 25.

Well, my 1,000,000 words are far away, for 1 year I couldn't write. It remains to write 723,250 words. But the year has not actually ended (February 23 - formally or in fact (= 185 days lost) until August 1, 2020). In order to have time to write the remaining words lacking up to 1 million words, you need to write 3909, 46 words per day. Which of course is not real. Since one day I can write raw materials without checking and editing 3,000 words, another day 5,000 words and then 5 days not write 1 word. Reality is closely related to the virtual and affects the creative ability to write.

My forecast for 185 days, I probably can write another 250 - 300 thousand words.

So far, such a debriefing.

Thanks to my readers and Happy New Year!

Thoughts of why and why stories are written.

All the same English, he has not improved in 18 days.

I'll figure something out, try to correct the text.

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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

people are getting confused again, i am too a bit, there are quite a few typos and minor mistakes here and there, making it tough to read, as such ill be editing my work from now on.... you will see quite a few updates here and there.

ask any and all questions here as i do so please, if you would lovely readers. ill do my best to reply to them in due haste!

extra chapters may not be given out during this time.

ive said this before but i write using my intuition not my 'head' if you know what i mean. ROFL. 

if your wondering what will be fixed 

things like 

there was a cat and a cat there was (wrong English bad to read)

there was a cat, who ate mice (right English much better to read)

along with TYPOS yes making the story line up better so its understandable.
hence ill add Edited 0.1 to the title as i go.

Reborn into the Nura Clan as the elder brother of Rikuo with a system that will allow him to grow and become an Ancient Noble Youkai

This follows his story and rise as the young Master of the Nura Clan

Milia is a part of the magazine committee in college. Originally she was selected to be the chief-editor of the magazine, but because of some reasons unknown to her, Dr. Scarlett made her quit the position of the chief-editor and become the leader of the drama club. Milia has been performing different things on stage for the past 2 years. Milia performed Indian Classical dance in the first year, directed a play on racism for a competition, was in the chorus for another greek drama performance in college, she then performed in a group dance a western contemporary style, in the second year she took part in a drama that conveyed importance of mental health, she enacted various emotions of happiness, sadness, nervousness, confusion, and also danced as the central dancer. She is very good at academics, she lost her rank from the top three because she had high fever during the last two exams and so she couldn't focus on studying. Milia also did an internship as a content writer and also took part in an educational exchange programme where she got a certificate from the university of New York for her educational contribution. 

(author: how did she find time to do Stephen's assignments and other work in midst of such a hectic schedule)

Dr. Scarlett was observing Milia for the past two years, Milia is very shy in person but on stage she was a different person, someone you couldn't recognise. Milia made very few friends. Spoke to 4 or 5 girls voluntarily  who seemed to be her close friends but only Milia knew that in college Kathy was her best friend and Varsha Dii was someone trustworthy. These two were the ones she could confide and talk about her fears too. Milia is very understanding, she listens patiently and fights fiercely for things she firmly believes in. She isn't scared about others' opinions of her, she lives her life by her own rules and values. She seems pretty carefree on the surface but she is very strict with many things in her life. She often gets into troubles because she doesn��t talk things out with people to clear her name. Some people deliberately frame her, some hate her for being such. The people who know the truth if they ask her on why she was mum she replies very nonchalantly saying "I was not in a mood to talk." Her nonchalant attitude attracts lots of jealousy and hatred. Dr. Scarlett has witnessed all of this and she seems pretty interested in this girl 'who isn't interested to talk' even when the entire group got against her. After talking to her, Dr. Scarlett realised that Milia is very humble and polite. It is just that she really doesn't care about what other people think or gossip about. Such a girl is hard to come around, isn't it?
When Milia scored maximum in the editing test and got selected as the chief-editor for the college magazine, Dr. Scarlett, who knew her abilities asked her to lead the drama group with Thalia (one of her classmates with whom she had worked with in the drama that conveyed the importance of mental health.) Dr. Scarlett wanted Milia to do something more challenging than just doing editing. Dr. Scarlett wanted Milia to not underestimate herself and her abilities but for that Milia had to be given a huge responsibility. And leading the official drama club of college, that will stage a drama of which tickets will be sold in thousands of bucks and college's reputation will be at stake. 

(author: Such a task was given to Milia by Dr. Scarlett only to realise her potential? Dr. Scarlett is indeed a professor who has faith in her students and actually teaches them more than the text. Thankfully, I have a Dr. Scarlett in my life. I am a blessed student as the professors in my college have been very supportive and understanding. They are the ones I owe the most after my parents.)

Milia was numb when Dr. Scarlett told her to take up the responsibility along with Thalia. She said, " Ma'am I am not sure about it. Can I please think over it and get back to you?" She couldn't process it for another two days. She spoke to her Mom about this and her mother was very happy about it knowing that someone finally understood the capability of her daughter, she also spoke to Kathy who also encouraged her saying that "if ma'am has chosen you, why are you thinking over it.. Ma'am must have done it before?". This wasn't enough she texted Varsha Dii and asked for her advice. Varsha Dii was elated to know and told Milia to give her best. She also gave some tips to Milia on how to handle a big group of girls and calmed her heart. Varsha made her feel confident of herself and Milia after 2 days texted Dr. Scarlett "Thank you for the opportunity Ma'am. I won't let you and the college down. Bless me with your blessings." A short message, straight to the point this is how Milia is with everyone. But the last line reflected the respect Milia has for Dr. Scarlett. Milia doesn't bother herself with texting people she is 'just familiar' with, she prefers meeting in person than texting. Because texting causes a lot of misunderstanding. 

Milia speaks less, her actions prove more. Milia is a completely different person with her parents and her sister. Her cheerful, fun-loving, chit-chat personality is only reserved for those three people (and her ex-boyfriend as well when they were dating and were on good terms- before Stephen started to take Milia for granted). Dr. Scarlett was elated to know that Milia agreed. Truth to be told, she was nervous if Milia would leave the editing committee and the drama club after putting her in such a position. Seeing Milia's message Dr. Scarlett was on cloud nine. She instantly replied to Milia saying, "I believe in your abilities. God bless my child. Always remember I am here for you if you feel something you want to talk about." 

Dr. Scarlett has seen Milia keeping her emotions to herself. Often in the poetry class in the middle of the explanation of some heartbroken poems, Milia's eyes would turn watery and she'd have a smile that was more of self-pity. Not once but many times Dr. Scarlett asked Milia after the class about what is bothering her. Milia would smile away instantly and say, "sorry Ma'am but I am completely fine. I guess you mistook me for someone else. If I have your permission can I go for my class?".

This is pretty irresponsible of me, but until now I've been writing blind going forward with only a vague idea of how I want the story to turn out and it was fine until now, but now I have a better understanding of my characters and and the plot and for the story to progress smoothly, there are some changes that need to be made and details that should be added that cannot be overlooked.

The changes will not be anything major so as current readers will no longer be able to follow the story line but they are important changes that will help keep the quality of the story. I apologize to my readers and thank you guys for your support and understanding so far. 

The rest period for editing won't be long (hopefully) and once these changes are made it would be easier to write the chapters and update faster moving forward since I won't have to be skirting around plot holes made earlier on and hopefully you guys can have a better understanding of exactly what is going on in the story because I can feel from the comments that some people are confused about a lot of points and I want to rectify those before misunderstandings become too big and then no one is able to follow the story anymore.

Again, I'm really sorry to this, but it has to be done.

Waking up in the hospital, Isabel realizes that she had gone back ten years in the past before her life turned to hell. She had only just confronted her husband about his affair and had yet to lose custody of her children.

From high school to adulthood, Isabel had been foolishly in love with Brycen Jaeger while believing he loved her too. She gave up her dream to help him achieve his own but in the end; she met her demise at his hand.

Given a second chance at life, she will stubbornly hold on to her children, love and spoil them and not care about the slag man and also revive and fulfill her own dream.

NOTE from the author: Criticism is welcomed but I'm an amateur writer so please be lenient.

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