See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
the storyline is unexpected, I'm sure I will enjoy this. thank you author ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
it's fun, it's exciting, mysterious and I want more. I can't wait to see how this story develops. the 2nd and 3rd chapters were a bit fast paced but I hope it slows down a bit in the later chapter. I'm just super excited soi had to review this now before I forget๐๐๐
I think she's more realistic this way
I agree. thanks for the edit suggestions. all have been updated.๐
I just read the first two chapters and I'm hooked. the first chapter was unexpected and moving. I also like the author's description of the world and I look forward to more chapters๐๐๐
I like the characters description and the plot twist. the prologue and 1st chapters had me invested. I had to find out what happened. excellent world development ๐๐๐
This is my first 5. the story is not draggy so far. it has a steady pace, the storyline has alot of promise. I'm looking forward to this adventure๐๐๐
I'm intrigued!!!
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original An illusion
Completed
... I know how this looks. I don't snoop. I really don't. I don't check Kefe's phone or messages, and I don't believe he's cheating on me. I trust my gut that much. This was really an accident... Uju is young, successful, and happily married to the 'love of her life' until she discovers that things may not be as they appear.9 Chs 4 Collections
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She Is From The Countryside
General ยท Zi Xuan