Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

2 years ago

Commented

another trash......on webnovel

ch 0 2 The separation

Tsk! I am your Grandfather

Fantasy · CosmosGalaxZ

Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

2 years ago

Commented

problems with. flow.....grammer issues.....néeds an editor..,..#_#

ch 0 2 Chapter 2 The First Half of My Life

Harry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)

Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat

Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

2 years ago

Commented

quit!

ch 14 Blood of my Master

Rebirth and Reincarnation

Eastern · Kumitzin

Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

2 years ago

Posted

needs an editor. writing quality is meh meh........

WHAT IF I BECOME THE ENEMY

Fantasy · ArgaNov01

Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

3 years ago

Commented

unrealistic .!!!adapting so fast....need better execution....

ch 0 2 Kumogakure's Spy

Reborn in Konoha as the Anbu Torturer

Anime & Comics · nyawdao2

Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

3 years ago

Commented

the interactions lacks depth....

ch 0 4 The Princess

Earth's Greatest Magus

Fantasy · Avan

Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

3 years ago

Posted

just a wish fulfillment,....,....niydo6routr6oro6dyiodi66dyd6odo6do6ddkdskysodkydykdskyskydskydkdludlydkddludldkudlfludkflfkdiysidisuhxngkhngjt

Rebirth and Reincarnation

Eastern · Kumitzin

Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

3 years ago

Posted

unfortunately , the main character lacks character. The cultivation setting has so much to offer but the mc lacks depth..lacks personality....It becomes more apparent as the story goes on.

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

4 years ago

Replied to Beeeeeee

a human

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Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

4 years ago

Commented

i love it...

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