Always read the contract carefully lads, or one day you'll become a skeleton.
It was his own fault, he admitted to himself. He'd made his own tomb, now he had to lie in it. When the mysterious wizard had offered a naïve young adventurer immortality, in return for acting as a guard for a while, he should really have read the small print for the definition of 'a while'.
Fantasy · Neil_H
"Record what you see"... I wish I had that during my days at high school.
An item that allows the user to use the appraisal skill, see through walls, have night vision, and record what they see and store it on records that can be used once or given to others].
Fantasy · Night_of_Dreams
I didn't know author is this kind of person.You got a stone.
"Like cosplaying and cross-dressing, I have read about it in a book a few days ago".
Fantasy · TokyoAnime_Seven
As you can see, the air I'm breathing is breathable.
Patrol Department was the name of the Patrol Department.
Eastern · Writing For Ten Years
Ayo it's missingno.
[Sword Intent: LV4 (2111/14000)]
Eastern · Writing For Ten Years
Ayo!
The two of them stared at each other with wide, disbelieving eyes. They were just short of cursing out loud.
Games · Woody
I wish for... an anime waifu.
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Anime & Comics · Dante_Hellscythe
Ghost be:
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Anime & Comics · Dante_Hellscythe
Noice
ch 0 5 At least, it won't be dangerous... Right?
Anime & Comics · Dante_Hellscythe
You can just write in your usual style. When you finish, you can go over the chapter and split the sentences. It will be less distracting this way.
ch 0 1 Normal days come to an end.
Anime & Comics · Dante_Hellscythe
Ah, what I meant "subject + verb" is a combination of subject and verb. Subjects are: I, you, he, it, etc... verbs are actions that go along with subject. A clause is basically "subject+verb". An example of a clause is "I am a lazy human being". One sentence can has many clauses: "Even if all I'm playing is a non-meta Aromage deck, it's doesn't feel good to lose to something like this". The 2 clauses are often separated by commas, similar to the example. Then there's fitting as many clauses as you can into a sentence. "Limiter Removal is a completely fine card to be played, IF you play any machine deck, and a machine deck is not what he play, in fact the only machine he summoned was Borreload, this means that card is a brick 98% of the time!" This paragraph has 5 clauses in a sentence. Ideally, a sentence should contain 2, maybe 3 clauses. However, if there are 4 clauses you might as well split them. Here the same paragraph with split sentences. "Limiter Removal is a completely fine card to be played. IF you play any machine deck, and a machine deck is not what he play. In fact the only machine he summoned was Borreload, this means that card is a brick 98% of the time!"
ch 0 1 Normal days come to an end.
Anime & Comics · Dante_Hellscythe
Question: does a second meaningful to gods? After all, a second is a unit we define ourselves. Perhaps, gods will use a different measurements unit.
[The realm of 'School Live' is currently connected to this realm of nothingness. You will be sent to the world of 'School Live' in 1 minute.] A metaphorical bomb is dropped on me.
Anime & Comics · Dante_Hellscythe
Good question!
Why is it always an infinite white space.
Anime & Comics · Dante_Hellscythe
I'm talking from my aesthetic perspective. Throughout chapter 1, I notice that almost every paragraph is just a sentence. Ideally, you would want 'subject + verb' 2-3 times atmost in a sentence. Your structure is fine, it's just my aesthetic sense, no fault on your own.
ch 0 1 Normal days come to an end.
Anime & Comics · Dante_Hellscythe
"internally" could replace "(in my mind)" here, I think it will be a better option.
Closing my eyes, I scream (in my mind).
Anime & Comics · Dante_Hellscythe
It only applies to 'bronze' monster. I don't know what are considered as bronze monsters. Never saw this buff activate again.
However, due to the negative buff, his HP kept dropping.
Games · Dungeon King
So basically this one allows him to go into the dungeon even if he's level 100+?
[Prerequisite: Level 10, Entry Scroll x1]
Games · Dungeon King
spinning cube
"Well," Dreth looked around the room. "Truth is I can't remember, but probably not very old. The point is, even if you cut me up into little cubes, I wouldn't die! I would just be little-cube shaped, and very uncomfortable."
Tired of Death
Fantasy · Neil_H