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Why? Thank you, kind sir, for your review.
Well, in truth, I forgot about it in the previous chapter, but I suddenly thought, "Hey, having him forget the orb sounds funny."
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Fantasy · Blue_Crow
If you read closely, you should notice that there was no description at all for an orb.
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Fantasy · Blue_Crow
Will edit once more chapters come
Do you mean 'pain and fear OF tearing her mind apart' or just a comma in the place of 'of'?
In the capital, in two different manors, a man and a woman abruptly opened their eyes as they both took a few gulps of air. Afterward, the man called harshly for his personal guard while the woman screamed, pain and fear tearing her mind apart.
History · Roxanne_Woods
Oh... that part... I'm sorry for the confusion. It was actually intentional since Athos was using her real voice that time. However, thanks for notifying me so I could edit the chapter to make it less confusing. :)
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