I tried making some comic relief moment but if its not to your satisfaction I'll refrain from doing the cliche tropes and try to be more realistic.
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Fantasy · TBQNovels
Oh snap, typo? Let me go correct that, you didn't see anything.
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Fantasy · TBQNovels
Haha....
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Fantasy · TBQNovels
is this a business proposal?
ch 0 9 Introductions
Fantasy · TBQNovels
I'll reveal that later~ Very much thanks to you sir for reading this, I know it doesn't mean much but I really appreciate you reading this! Thank you for reading and I will keep writing to satisfy the very small majority that read this novel of mine.
Letting out a yelp, Matthew rubbed his red hiney. He was about to mutter something but refrained himself from doing so, as such actions wouldn't go unpunished by his mother.
Fantasy · TBQNovels
Thank you for the input, I have tried the spacing and I will leave it up to you to decide whether it was a good choice or not.[img=recommend]
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Fantasy · TBQNovels
I reckon you should have started like "A woman was looking out of a window, a rose plant sitting on the window sill next to her. While she was looking out of the window her phone began to ring. Lifting the phone up, she asked to the person on the other side of the phone if the execution had finished. The person on the other side replied with a yes and as he did, she cut off the call and walked away"
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Urban · Ruchi_Deshpande
Pretty good. :D Tis a god story, what I gotta say, very unique and takes a spin on the system trope. I personally have read too many of them, and it feels like every novel nowadays is the same (cuz they always use systems) but Shadow Slave is different! It feels new, refreshing! The pacing is superb, the story is splendid and you really grow to like and care about Sah-nee. Love it, keep it up Author!
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree