Lulu50023

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3 years ago
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Manchurian Wood? That's so far away

Evaluation: A single stave shortbow made of Manchurian Ash Wood, with deer tendons for a bow string. Don’t hope for a lot of power out of it.

The World Online

The World Online

Games · Sheng Xiao Jian Ke

Lulu50023
Lulu50023
3 years ago
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This novel is getting a manhua! __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ I'm really excited I hope they can make a good manhua!

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3 years ago
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3 years ago
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Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

Lulu50023
Lulu50023
3 years ago
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My first Review I understand that this is the Author's first novel and said that the first 40 chapters might be a bit rough. After Reading 9 chapters I was getting really annoyed about how many grammatical and spelling mistakes I could find. The Author doesn't use the words "The" and "a". For example: captian instead of The captian young man instead of a or the young man said... Gorilla said:"" instead of The gorilla said:"" Furthemore the Author switches from 1st person to 3r person wich is getting me really confused. I had high hopes for this novel. Author! I don't know if correcting the chapters is very time consuming but please fix them so people can enjoy this novel it's not like you have to correct the tiniest mistake just the noticable ones.

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3 years ago
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