I love this novel. Writing Quality has always stayed top tier. Story development is just amazing. Character Design has been my favourite part. And the world background is fantastic. I love the comedy. Definitely a must read.
So from what I have read. The story is pretty decent. Characters are fleshed out and there is a world that I am eager to explore. But I believe that there are quite a few grammar and sentence structure mistakes. The mistakes really take the immersion out of the reading. I hope the author improves on his mistakes. But other than that, I am enjoying this story.
Btw author I jus wanna know how long you plan for this webnovel to be. I love the story and the system. Thanks
I'm glad that you are writing again Apexpen really enjoy this novel. Pacing is great and the MC is smart and plans well. So great story. Granted I just normally enjoy reading novels.
thank god, the harem in tos was a bit much. are there gods in this one as well
I love this book romeru and so pls don't stop writing this. Amazing story and characters. makes me laugh even in my worst days.
Read about twenty chapters, and feel like dropping it cause of the translation. it just doesn't make sense to me sometimes and if I can't understand what the author is trying to say then what's the point of reading.
is this not just another version of complete martial arts attributes. but I like it.
I like the book but it's just a repeat of the first world except the name of everything is different. I want to know since his first few disciples were quite talented shouldn't they have made it to the second world already and reunited or something.
this is a question. Is this like inhuman warlock? I haven't read it yet. I'll just give 5 star for everything pls don't take this as a review.
Chaos Devourer System
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