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ch 10 The Weeping Peninsula (1)
Video Games · TATchMe
Hmm, something definitely happened to the mother....
ch 0 3 Off She Goes
Fantasy · Kawaii_Kowai
This was very well written, looks promising!
ch 0 1 The Stubborn Scholar
Fantasy · Kawaii_Kowai
How could a 7 year old even lift a sword....
And I, a 7 year old, bully a 2 meter tall grown up man.
Fantasy · FallingWinds
Pinning down and licking a little girl? Chris Hansen would like to have a word with you.
Now that's a development I didn't foresee!
Fantasy · FallingWinds
Seeing that he didn't want to continue the conversation I left him alone. As I wondered about his words, I made up my mind to find out what sin he committed, in order to confirm my theory. I walked past Fias room, without even taking a look, because I didn't want to deal with this evil woman who wants to hug me and take a portion of my health, for the moment.
Video Games · THE_P1AN1ST
Too much description, Author.Imo especially in fight scenes, you don't need to describe everything. Let the reader's imagination take care of the details, you can focus on the important parts.
Meanwhile, Max knew, that his chances of winning were close to zero. From his point of view, the only way he could come out victorious, was to sacrifice a part of his body in order to create an opportunity to deal a critical blow. As he saw the cold look in Ricks eyes, he knew that if he lost, he would be tortured once again and this time there wouldn't be an opportunity to reverse the situation like before. Rick then slowly advanced towards Max, suddenly he angled his Greatsword to 90 degrees and tried to stab Max once he was close enough. Seeing this, Max hastily took a few steps back and to the right. He then aimed his crossbow and fired, successfully hitting Ricks leg with the intention of restricting his movements. Ignoring the pain, Rick attacked also aiming at his enemy's legs but only managed to scratch them. They continued to exchange attacks and as the fight prolonged, Rick noticed how disadvantageous his position was. Therefore, he decided to go for critical attack and hoped that the tarnished wouldn't die. He then aimed his next attack higher. As Max saw his chance, he grit his teeth and steeled his resolve and stepped forward to block the incoming strike with his already injured left arm, at the same time he swung his sword with the right. Facing the incoming attack, Rick realized his mistake, but it was already too late. He underestimated the tarnished resolve of being willing to sacrifice parts of his body to achieve victory. He could only watch as the blade split his neck open.
Video Games · THE_P1AN1ST
Good luck haha, focus on learning to deflect and you'll be golden
The combat won't be the same as the game.... it'd primarily be like Sekiro's combat with Elden Ring's Ashes of War. This is because it's impossible to write good combat using Elden Ring's dodge-roll mechanics alone vanilla's combat is just not nuanced enough.
Video Games · TATchMe
If it's able to fit into the story during MC's confrontation with Malenia and Mohg, I'll add it in. That's if the story in the DLC is compatible though.
ch 0 -1 What to Expect in this FanFic
Video Games · TATchMe
An obvious question, since this he's a warrior he'll be using a Zweihander with a few off hand weapon (kind of like Sekiro's prosthetic tools).I don't think I'll give him any incantations or magic, but I'll consider letting him cast Laws of Regression because of spoiler reasons.
ch 0 1 To the Lands Between....
Video Games · TATchMe
Why do you think Kyrielle can use and control Fire Magic so easily? I swear that 4 year old kids in this world doesn't blow up things like it's Tuesday!
ch 15 Dragonkin (1) (Remastered)
Fantasy · TATchMe
The Butcher when he asks me if I want beef :
1 Don't Unlock in process of rewrite
Fantasy · OnikunStudios
The Tengu guy. His dialogue implies that he wants to go on a night stroll with Kyrie under normal circumstances, that's why Kyrie laughed at it and pats his shoulder as a friendly gesture.
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Fantasy · TATchMe
I am currently on a semester break from my university, so I've finally got time to pick up this book again Hopefully I'll be able to edit the entire volume within this break, since I've actually finished writing this volume it's just that I haven't uploaded them.
ch 123 A Chaotic Night
Parallel Cosmos
Fantasy · TATchMe