Hoping to make something interesting. Ongoing: Keepers of Every Universe
2022-11-27 Joined United States
Abbreviations of titles, particularly Mr. and Mrs. should always include a period following them: "Mr. Morgan" instead of "Mr Morgan"
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LGBT+ · Sigheti
The first chapter is plagued by both grammar and spelling errors, forcing a very clumsy tone upon the reader. Despite this, there is a comedic element evident to the reader, and the story doesn't take itself too seriously. If the author fixes the glaring issues, my rating would be considerably higher. Though, more chapters are needed for a more accurate assessment, as Chapter 1 ends quite suddenly.
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Review written as of 4 ch being published (5 w/prologue). What to say, well, there's nothing particularly outstanding. Frankly, the novel reads like a stereotypical superpower shounen manga. Personally, that style where characters are shouting out their moves and it's a rambunctious tone where the fights don't really seem to matter (almost like a sport) is not really my thing. But I've read things that aren't my things because of other factors, usually the writing quality. It isn't bad here, it's just extraordinarily ordinary. There are grammar mistakes throughout, but they aren't disruptive. Characters don't seem particular deep, but they aren't super shallow either. There's a bit too much exposition for my taste, and the plot is similar to the thousands of other shounen-esque novels out there. In other words, it is completely average. It's fine. It's not bad, but it's not good either. The fight scenes were probably the best thing about it since they tended to be a bit more descriptive than the rest of the novel. I don't really have much else to say, it's fine.
The Shadowking's Sin(Shadoukingu No Tsumi)
Fantasy · Mrtin_Monarch