DaoistLH44RN

10mth

Posted

I've been reading this book for a while now, and I must say, this is a good book, my only problem is the world background, I don't really get it, maybe a background check would, but the story is good and keep up the good work[img=update]

Dawn of Heroes

Fantasy · Rizen_Felizardo

DaoistLH44RN

10mth

Commented

Bro knows something[img=nervous]

Retribution drops the mic and speaks closely at Rebellion. "Listen here you rebel, this whole thing is rigged and you know it.... Oh... that's right... the Hoshi Group is not enough for you so you're going to pursue another group. That's it right? once a rebel... always a rebel."

Dawn of Heroes

Fantasy · Rizen_Felizardo

DaoistLH44RN

1yr

Commented

he's gonna do it

Max stands up, he walks towards the girl and speaks up, "He killed my father!" Max shouts. There's a pain in his voice, "You know... I came here to clear my name... but it looks like it's not gonna happen..."

Magic Release

Fantasy · LordRizen04112008

DaoistLH44RN

1yr

Commented

Get well soon author, can't wait for the next chapter

ch 19 Demon Orc

Magic Release

Fantasy · LordRizen04112008

DaoistLH44RN

1yr

Commented

Someone's jealous

"What's that for?!" Miss Piah shouts at Alicia, she is extremely mad at her.

Magic Release

Fantasy · LordRizen04112008

DaoistLH44RN

1yr

Commented

Kiss after meeting

She speaks up, "Your mana is starting to deplete, I'm sorry Max!" she grabs Max's face and kisses him on the lips, Max starts to feel a rush of mana coursing through his body. Cain, Luna, and Miss Piah are shocked, they can't believe what they're seeing especially Miss Piah, Max is kissing a succubus.