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Diva gasped. She seemed to realize what she had done so she frantically looked around while saying, "Oh my god! Do you have alcohol or hand sanitizer!? What if I got infected by this philanderer's disability and rotten head? I need a sanitizer! Kayden! Do you have any?!"
LGBT+ · superAyan
Great story. I like the idea the way it was put down with the time ability which made things interesting from the start. There are a few spelling mistakes throughout the chapters which can be noticed for a few words but it is not very frequent. While they don't take away from the story it is something that could be fixed by the Author with a quick review over their chapter. I was able to follow the plot well despite the many focuses on the system stuff and enjoyed it.
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Suspense
The man sits back and watches his Min-ho as he tries to stop himself from being dragged out of the room. "Oh, my Min-ho. If only you would accept me." he says softly to no one in particular. The door seals closed a second time, dampening the boy's screams down the hall.
Realistic · Ramens_theBestXD
Thank you for your support.
Dior sends a vicious punch to Zara's gut and bends her over. A kick to her ass follows that strike, causing Zara to face plant onto the fire.
Fantasy · Vanilla_Chino
The Execution!
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Fantasy · Vanilla_Chino
Just as -his-
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Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
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Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
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Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
I liked everything about this world . The system there is pretty interesting and fun. It provides a unique blend on things. The characters were pretty good though , there are a few grammatical errors. They aren't that heavy but some common words. Also the use of terms like cut were done in overuse. It is funny but also . I believe you don't have to do it so long. That's just my opinion. Overall I found this world interesting and so should readers. This is full of cool action.
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Urban · BlackVoidDragon