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The writing is very clear and understandable, and I breezed straight through. Aside from the "authentic" sounding dialogue and the use of a good vocabulary, there were very few grammatical errors to interrupt the flow of the read. I'm pretty impressed! Good job author! P.S. The one suggestion I'd make is to keep the length of your chapters between the lengths of 1,000 words and 1,800 words.