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I'm done reading this book and I can't believe how the author makes me want to read more of this book. I hope the author will update soon. Dragons, gods, and every creature in fantasy books I could tell this is really interesting to read.
The author's own style of writing is fantastic and really immersive! It is a bit fast-paced at the start but I find that really well working as you quickly get introduced to the new world! Totally a must read
The first time I am seeing another reincarnation novel but with no touch of excitement in the title makes me really intrigued about what will happen. I mean, Reincarnation and the Transmigration titles really looked amazing, but this, how will the main character prevail what will happen with him when he had been transported back on another world, where boring was really a capital towards it? Let me see....
It's just exactly what it's synopsis tells .. What a fantastic story .. Every child must have such kind of wish in their heart . I'm going to try same dreams from now on lol😁 Best wishes for this story . please keep updating more and more .. I want to read it
The story has interesting plot and tbh I got interested because of the '****y-type' ish mood. Also, the title is catchy so I think that's it? And the sypnosis tells them all
First chap, very relatable and because of that I found joy in reading it. I don't see any problem at all. I hope that it'll still have some relatable parts of the story. that's all I can say with my level of criticism
As a fello author, I cannot stress enough my love for reading isekai stories. You have cool concept about world that has nothing to give. The usual things that makes the isekai interesting is not existing in your worl; and that makes it more intriguing. Althoug this may be hard for you to explain in detail, I wish you my best regards for your story! No. Like other books, you need to improve on your vocabulary. There are few words that have been repeated that slightly lacks the metaphor. Always remmeber that the readers must visualise the description of your story through words! Also-this is more than a style of writing-you might want to enhance the conversation of the characters. Something like, "Hey, George. What's up!" A random voice calls my name from a distance. I turn around and see a familiar man wearing his ragged jeans and sweaty shirt oozing with bla bla bla Make it more natural. It will make your novel 1 billion percent better than the novels out there!