True Space Mage

LV 4

GM_Serafin

True Space Mage is a rather refreshing story among all the copy-pasted web novels around. It tries to build its own unique world with lots of layers and mysteries, and it establishes a logical magic system that still allows endless possibilities. Truly a breath of fresh air if you're used to novels that keep reusing the same few settings over and over again. The main character, Aaron, also feels much more like a human than most protagonists. Despite his reincarnation advantages, there are always challenges waiting for him. He hesitates, makes mistakes, falls into slum**, and struggles against inner demons; through all of this, however, he slowly grows as a person and a mage. Sadly, while the ideas might be good, the actual writing... isn't. I'm not just talking about the technical aspects, the grammar, and whatnot (though a proofreader is definitely needed as well), but the overall plot and character development. It doesn't feel like the author has much of a plan, which ends up seriously harming the novel. It's what makes Aaron simultaneously one of the best and worst things about the story. As I said previously, Aaron's humanity makes him a compelling character, but only when the writer knows what they're doing. The problem here is that it's hard to get a good grasp on his character. He repeats mistakes even though he should have gotten over them already; he is supposed to be smart, but keeps getting dumbed down so that the plot moves in certain ways; he improves dramatically in many aspects, but still makes newbie blunders; his motivations are sometimes fuzzy and hard to understand. Many of these problems could be improved with forethought and planning. If say, character X (readers will know who I'm talking about) will be important in the future, then take some time to establish their relationship with Aaron; don't just suddenly add some drama involving X when neither the reader nor the main character has much reason to care about them. Maybe it makes sense in theory, but you need to *show* us these things, not just *tell* them. Give them more scenes, more characterization. Also, you need to give some thought to the main character's progression if you want to avoid testing the reader's patience. If he failed, learned his lesson, and became stronger, then move on. Don't keep retreading old ground unless you can add something genuinely new and interesting. Writing realistic, deeply flawed protagonists takes some serious writing skills, especially in a web novel, which we often read for easily digestible stories. So I would advise anyone to start ******. All in all, it could still be an enjoyable read for people who enjoy magic and worldbuilding. That's mostly what kept me hooked, at least. But the writing has much to improve and could hugely benefit from an editor, since the actual story falls short from what it could have been.

LV 4

2someawsome

Hello all. I have been a vivid reader of webnovels for a long time. After reading so many fantasy novels, I always wanted to write one of my own. So this is my first try. I know the chapters are small. Trust me they felt longer when I initially wrote them. I will work on the length. Looking for honest reviews.

LV 4

Inspector

A lovely and smooth-flowing read with no clichés, well, except for reincarnation. The story is stable, the magic theories are well thought out, and the protagonist is growing up fine. Most importantly, there are no arrogant young masters (at least for now). My only complain is the shortage of chapters. How can 39 chapters satisfy me? At least 150 chapters are needed for a mouthful in one setting!

LV 6

Archena

This is the best original i have read so far, and i read a lot. The fast few chapters are short and mc & the world may seem lifeless, robotic. But after joining the academy everything turned out to be so much great. There is no cliche what you will find in other novels. The only regret i can find author rushed things in the academy life. But now he have slow down the pace. and thats great. we want to enjoy the world he lives in, not only to know what he does. I just hope there won't be a harem or one young master after another popping out of nowhere.

LV 11

Beyond_Namez

Really interesting, I like the time skip that way we can move on to the important things as a mage and the future. The novel in itself is really nice. Would love to know more about the world background. No big grammar mistakes. I recommend this novel.

LV 10

Alien_blade

This a great novel that stays away from cliches and yet still keeps its charm. Our MC isn't a typical transmigrator that gets the world handed to him through some cheat. There is actual character growth you see a boy from a civilized world adjust to his new circumstances becoming a man in the process. There is not that much action at the start but for good reasons. All I can say is I look forward to the story and so should you.

LV 12

LordBlackshire

The story is slow and boring. There is nothing of interest in the first ~15 chapters. The main character doesn’t have anything heroic about him. The setting is peaceful. Even the descriptions of the world lacks any conflicts to pique my interest. I feel like I’m watching a random guy stroll up a hill rather than a hero climb Everest to slay a dragon. Once the academy arch starts, things get interesting but it’s still a cliche event that you’ll see in several “school-life” type novels. Anyways, this is just another slow-paced cookie-cutter story.

LV 5

Dosithee

Ok. Grammar and general writing skills not great. Dialogue and characters need a lot of work. Good start for author, defenatly lots of potential, this just isn’t there yet. Characters are empty without any traits or quirks.

LV 6

DevaVeeran

Actually a good novel if the author pays a little more time in story telling , editing and proof reading. I am actually hooked to it right now iwont reveal spoilers but if you are gonna binge read it, try it when your in a good mood or when you are not sleeping.

LV 13

trekt

Good novel + for World Background ( The author created a believable world that I hope gets even better as the story progresses, the idea of a magic system is at best mediocre, but it is getting a big plus for the consistency which is no small feat and the author can be quite proud of it.) - for Character Design ( The protagonist is not that bad. I personally liked that you tried to give him some depth, but in the end he is like a bad side character, we know almost nothing about him and most of the character traits you tried to give him get forgotten after 5 chapters. The side characters are all just not good , we have no rival , an antagonist that just appears in the middle of the story and a love interest that couldnt be more unimportant. For real if I had to decide if the love interest or that random weaponsmith had to die , well you know who I would choose.) I can also see that you improve yourself with every chapter written, the second arc is way better then the first and I really think you got talent. Keep writing.

LV 6

wuxianovels

One of the best original books on this website. Very well written and a very interesting story so far. Please keep it up and continue with regular updates.

LV 12

HipHopGuru

This is a great book. Underrated because it may be a bit slower than many people's preference, with less violence, gore and ***, but the character development is unmatched.

LV 10

EuHellscythe

Ok, the story has a good premise, ok background and meh characters so far, but a MAJOR problem is how the author implements the mc’s growth, he makes the mc seem useless stupid so he can learn new stuff, yes it is a good way of doing stuff but why do you have to make the mc so stupid instead of making a harder challenge. So far the mc is deemed a ‘genius’ but he’s retarded in every aspect, he doesn’t even use his past life knowledge to it’s worth. Might as well have the mc be a thinker instead. It becomes more noticeably the more the story goes on. The mc only uses the logic and equations and some random ideas from his past life. And I know the author doesn’t want to have the mc to be OP but that doesn’t mean the mc has to be retarded, you know give him less power rather than make him stupid. Oh and the grammar is terribly, he some how messes up the important words but get the filler words almost perfect... like he is trying to annoy the readers. Welp, best of luck readers to this book.

LV 11

ManOfAnts

Great book in terms of world building and realistic characters, there are some big issues with spelling and grammar as well as the characters lack of imagination to the point where the readers feel embarrassed for him. Worth a read purely because of the world building

LV 5

kwrobes

This is perhaps one of the best written stories on this site where... surprise!!! ... the main character is not a violent apathetic murderer. He's killed only a couple humans at this point in time. The entire point of the magic system seems to be well-designed and at least somewhat thought out. I enjoy the fact that he's a space mage because I also can't necessarily think of op applications of his power which leaves less plotholes. I'll admit it's less dramatic than most things you'll find here but I find it's more realistic when it is dramatic, with a more subtle tone to it. I have to say I'm incredibly impressed by this story and writing even though I see toxic comments complaining on almost every chapter. I especially enjoy these recent story lines where the main character is researching in a reasonable fashion. I do however, have one complaint. The main character, before being reborn, finished an applied maths degree. One line in particular bugs me, when he's surprised that maths have applications. Like what the hell did he study if not that. Outside of the fact that I have the perspective of a mathematician, I quite enjoyed this novel and the writing.

LV 11

Weimi

There aren’t that many fillers. Some people may see it as such but after I’ve read through everything, it would actually play a big role to the overall plot of the story. Fantastic setting. Though I can’t say the setting’s a hundred percent original, it is well thought of and the author’s way of seeing and explaining things definitely gave it a fresh feeling. There are some(only some not that much) mistakes on the grammar and spelling but not a big deal to be honest. I would definitely recommend this novel to my friends. Thank you for your hard work, author-san!

LV 4

VIA1

A great novel.If you are tired of those reincanators with OP skills,try this one.It is a marvelous novel and i can asure you that,you wont regret reading it

LV 11

Dontlookdown

I would say top 10 for original novels. Sure sometimes the logic in the novel can be a bit unreal, like some guy who read one or two math books and basically created every invention that was made during the age of enlightenment(not mc by the way), but overall a good story with excellent developement.

LV 5

Ehbon

The world and characters in this story seem to be pretty well put together and the novel regularly updates. However, I am really conflicted on whether or not I like this story or will even continue to read it. Nothing has happened, nothing of note anyways. From the very start until chapter 31, which I am currently on, nothing interesting has happened at all. The name of this novel might as well be “A Mage Goes to School” because that’s all that has happened so far. I don’t mean cool fantasy combat type schools either, no.... the main character went to a school and he learned math and some magic theory and then he got a desk job. Realistic, sure, interesting.... hardly. Besides that, there are the typical grammar and spelling errors found on Qidian. I’ll give this novel until chapter 50 to pick up the story, if not I will just drop it.