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Curiosity killed the cat. Well, in this case, a human multiple times. Read as doggie tries to run from the trouble his curious mind brought him and gets stronger to overcome the challenges he needs to face to survive.
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Rough start for the main character, but he finds ways to adapt. Curious approach to learning for the MC. Still trying to decide how much more of the book that I will read, but think it is worth reading a few chapters to see if the webnovel catches your interest.
This is a good story, I really like the writing. At first I thought maybe it wasn't really for me, but it kept me hooked up after a few chapters ! Waiting anxiously for the next chapter !
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Quite a funny and entertaining story of a man who isn't allowed to give up. This is the story of how a "lucky" find makes MC stronger. Please keep it up.
Jack, an introvert who was bullied and taken advantage of because of his name which means doggie. His father was not good at handling money and made bad decisions regarding this and incurred a huge debt in which he now has to pay since his parents died. Now he has to survive with a worsening predicament Will it bring Jack to insanity or salvation? I am loving the story thus far and everything's all good except for some grammatical errors but it could be cleared with an editor. This novel can reach great heights Author please upload more and regularly I am willing to spend my SP here daily if you fulfill these wishes ;3
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I have to say, the writing quality is very good. I'm very impressed. The MC is admirable and reasonable. The story line is developing nicely and the world building is on point. Great work 👌
There is no cure for regret - Chinese wisdom. The author skillfully managed to describe the image of the geek, his thoughts, his clothes and sore skin, hair, as a result of not a healthy lifestyle! As if a sensible person, a workaholic, seems to fall for a simple bait, without even checking the site, without checking the company, it is not known where to go ... After the story begins to understand the manga GANZ ... there was a ball ... alien creatures ... a kind of thrash version of the groundhog day ... With closed status and open ... something like the function of the android and google helper))) The moment is well described when the main character begins to understand that his mind begins to fail ... The novel turned out to be more exciting than I expected. The first reading gave a different vision. And when I re-read the first 3 chapters, the story seemed to me more fascinating and it was not thought of Ganz as it seemed after reading the first time. Love reaction ... charlatan !!!! Ahahahahahahaha !!! There is humor, that's great! Here is the beauty of small chapters, read easily! It's like modern Japanese dramas, they used to be 45-30 minutes earlier, and now exactly 12 minutes, so as not to waste time - for sleep and rest. New formats, you need to be able to use them !!!)))) Without motivation ... there is no growth ... so gymnastics ... gives growth ???? Interestingly, this is chapter 8! Yes, Wallmart is not a store for 100 yen ... where the choice is greater. Oh, it's like a warcraft game with save mode))) I wonder why he didn't buy a shotgun? And took a machete ??? Oooh, Jack was an esthete, he read the Russian classics? !!!! Interestingly, he knew French? The last pages of 25 Leo Tolstoy's "War and Peace" were in French. some bibliophiles say that in these last pages there is some sort of quintessence of the whole novel. I don’t know French ... or maybe they’re stories of book geeks ... who knows, but this is offtopic. War and peace, much more interesting than the work of Dostoevsky or Chekhov ... but from Mayakovsky, Jack would get a boost of energy ... but he was a capitalist and did not read the poets of the world proletariat ...)))) Although here are the works of Vladimir Orlov "Altist Danilov" he would be very interesting. But that time is long gone ... It would be better to read the books on sleep management, Carlos Castaneda and the study of Zen practices, or maybe read the books about the "Big Game" ... the choice is really big ... The author ... well done ... exciting writing. I will continue the review probably tomorrow, intriguing. Interesting funny. All 5 out of 5 stars! Thanks to the author! 5 stars, for humor !!!!
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This is an unique plotline, and the story is amazing. I don't see much problems with the grammar, and I suppose it needs a bit of proofreading. Other than that, it's a great work!
Well I am the author of this and I certainly will not tain on my parade. I believe plenty of people will do it for me. It's my first attempt at writing anything substantial and English is not my primary language so the vocabulary and grammar might be somewhat lacking. Anyway, if you enjoy it great if not not so great. If you can leave feedback of any kind I would be greatful. Regards from a fellow reading fanatic.
THIS IS A CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK REVIEW AND DOES NOT PROBABLY RELATE TO THE CURRENT NOVEL'S TRUE RATING The novel was surprisingly good. If I were to say anything, you just need to reread your chapters more and put in commas at certain places. Only typo I noticed was you put ,., somewhere at the start I think. Noticed you aren't putting in commas before ands and buts a lot. Also for the story, its not realistic how he found the cube at that place. Countless people visit there every year, how was he the first to find and pick it up after (assuming its from ancient Greece) centuries have passed? Also I would change up your start. Its not interesting for readers to read flasbacks at the start of a book. This is why whe there are flash backs, its always way farther into the book or movie if its poplar. You should also consider a Prologue. This is how you grab people's attention, and interest. This is how they survive the first few chapters. I myself was not interested at the start, but I kept reading. Now I noticed two big plotholes of your story. One is he put countless death marks, but when you jumped into levels, he barely died that much, also he only marked at the start. Then its as if his flashback persnality disapeared and his whole personality changed. As I've read a lot of books and I am also an author, I can guess that the flashback isbfor way farther into the book, but guarantee 99% didnt think that much and just ignored it or thought the book was stupid and left. Second one are the stats, you made stat points really low, but whe MC gained stats rivaling the police officers, he was more macho and studd compared to them? Even more than that scrawny asian guy you said? Also try to describe emotions and five senses more, was bit bland reading. Try to describe things more, and add more relatable thing so its not 2D. Lastly I marked 3 for updates as long hiatus. I would've done two, but looking at your past record and past two days, nearly updated every day so bumped it up to 3. It would've hit four or above if not for that.