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In the 20th century...
Enraged by the savage vampires merciless slaughter, the human race had enough! Finally, the anti-vampire vaccine was created by humans to protect themselves. The vaccine was able to annihilate 90% of vampires' race on earth. With nowhere to go and trapped below the ground, the remaining vampires needs to survive, it's either adopt... become mortal and survive...or perish!
Prince Adam was assigned the task to take care of the mortal being named Jessy, the girl that was chosen in the prophecy. Once her blood ingested by vampires' it can transformed them into human beings, fangs gone within seven days, guaranteed!
Prince Adam fell in love with Jessy... the girl that was destined to marry his brother, Prince Zain.
Prince Zain and Jessy's union will secure the vampires' royal lineage... their offspring will bring forth a new race of powerful crossbreed. One day the vampire race shall reign supreme again on earth.
To secure the safety of the vampires turned into mortals, Jessy has to make a big sacrifice that will change her life forever.
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This is my second review for this work. And I post it not to rate the writing quality or stability of updates, but to say a big 'thank you' to the Author! Lizabelle, I like your novel very much! Please, continue writing your story. It's wonderful! I know that writing is hard work but you do well. Always looking forward to the new chapters! Keep it up!
A novel that makes me cry from the time I found out Adam will die. I really love this story. I hardly read vampire novels. But this one got me going nonstop. I've fallen for this story. Keep it up author. Thanks
Vampires.. Many people dream about being bitten by a vampire..But what if it is impossible for the last one. I really liked the idea of the story. Usually we read about how it's dangerous for humans to be bitten, but here, we met a situation when it's lethal for a vampire himself. The plot is very interesting and addictive. As for the stars. Writing quality. I put four stars. As it was mentioned in other reviews, the author really needs to check writing. Because there are a lot of pronoun and tense errors. But I'm not a native English myself and I know how it's hard to write in a foreing languge. So I'm sure that the author will improve her writing skills. Stability of Updates. Five stars. Of course, readers prefer daily updates, but a chapter every 3 days is ok for me. Story Development. Five stars. I liked it. Character Desigh. Four stars. Hmm, then I was reading it was a big contrast in MCs behaviour before and after the confession. They seemed like children for me before it, and then, in a flash they are like adults. It would be more natural if they were 17 y.o, but not 15 y.o. But it's only my opinion. World Background. Five stars. No questions. Everything is fine. To sum up, I got pleasure reading this novel. And I'm intrigued to know how the author will introduce us Adam's brother, what kind of character he will be. So please, keep writing! You need to finish your story!! As for grammar errors - just be more attentive, but don't let them distract you. And everything will be great!! Good luck!
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Welp!! This is a fantastic novel, if I say so, author. Leaving, the minor mistakes it's all good to go. Just wondering why u made avolune for each chapter tho. I can see the usefulness of it, as I'm a writer myself but it's weird. Other than that, it feels very much like a Hollywood movie about vampires. Good job and best of luck!!
In a world that is not our own, yet with all the trappings of ours, there are vampires and humans living side by side, and there is an unnamed mansion. In that mansion a vampire boy grows up with a human girl -- and feelings eventually grow. This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter 18. A slice-of-life romance with all that entails in slow pacing and everyday life. After eighteen chapters we've been offered two arcs, the first about the main characters' buddying love, and a rather haphazard second one about the first obstacle to their newfound love. The story is told in multiple third person point of view, in the past tense. So for the distribution of the stars. The English used is shaky. It's evident the author isn't a native to the language. Mixing present and past tense, misusage of pronouns and even singular and plural all detract from the reading experience. Add systematic head-hopping as far as PoV-shifts are handled, and some of the scenes become confusing, forcing the reader to backtrack in order to understand what happened. Three stars. Eighteen chapters promptly delivered. No complaints. Five stars. We're still at the very beginning of the story, but this far it has progressed naturally and mostly kept to the slice-of-life pacing. Five stars. The two main characters are fleshed out. Side characters have been given a minimum of screen time, and for that reason very few oportunities to develop personalities. Five stars. It's a world where vamipres live openly among humans. Some kind of government body has ordered mass vaccinations turning being a vampiric vampire into suicide. It's clearly not our world, but despite this our brand names and cultural trappings remain unchanged. It simply rubs me the wrong way as a reader. Now almost all of the story is set in an unnamed mansion by an unnamed lake surrouned by an unnamed forest, and none of it really gets visualised. It's definitely a weakness of the story, so three stars. In the end I want to find out what happens to the couple, so I've added the story to my libary.
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A few grammar issues here and there. There are a few issues with verb tense switching, but the characters are vividly written. Overall, it's an enjoyable read. :)
I like the story so much.... I love each pages thank u so much for the wonderful story... I love it much please write more stories that will uplift us
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Just leave the mension Adam.I want to see how you could survive in your second life. It seems that you still have your power as a vampire. But how strong your power is...of course it depends on how the writer plots your in the next chapter. I really like the novel. It's not only entertaining but also emusing.. please give me a longer and cooler chapter
Pretty good love story aimed towards women. Possessive vampire husband x half-human girly. It's quite fluffy when developing the love between the main duo, but needs a bit of editing when it comes to grammar. Overall, a nice story to read while drinking something warm and bittersweet. >3</
After I watched the Twilight series, I fell in love with the vampire fiction! Gosh! This one is damn cute! Just keep writing and don't let readers wait.
Over this novel is going in a good direction. There are sentence structure issues, some sentences are also incomplete, wrong use of 'her'...From reading, it looks to be written in the present tense. However, there are also some errors with the use of the past tense. I like the plot and the general idea of this novel. With some editing, this would be an even greater novel. Good going author. Not your typical vampire stories...give this one a read.
It's a cute story. I like it. I like the vampire vaccine it's not something I've personally read of before when reading vampire stories. I think it's very unique! I thought it was pretty crafty of him when he was checking her out in chapter 7 and when she asked him he was like, "I'm just looking at your pretty roses." LOL!!! I think there are a few grammar errors here and there but overall it's good. With more work and practice I'm sure it'll turn into a really good story.
Love the cute interactions between the characters! Keep on writing and never stop please ^^ There are a few grammar mistakes here and there (I suffer from those myself) but other than that, it is really nice.
You've got a nice start, dear author! Keep up the good work! 😊😊 Jessy's and Adam's interactions are really cute! Continue writing this, alright?!
I love the story. The Writing Quality is good, The story was developed nicely, it had a very unique characters, and everything flows nicely.
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very interesting story.........I like it so much ....I love the main character of . this story..........
Great book so far. Cant wait to tead more. i am in live with the characters And tye has lot. I cant put it diwn. What will happen next?
Liz has been persistent and completed the book No matter no comment or review She is awesome. Good translation Three cheers for liz Hip hip hooray Hip Hip hooray Hip Hip hooray
Let me just say I am rooting for Adam and Jess. But I feel sorry for Zain. The theme of the story is brilliant, a little cliche, but all in all its very good. I really like Adam's character development. The story is really easy to read. I just hope that you my dear author won't break Adam and Jessy apart! OR ELSE!!! hehe.. Kidding! :) Goodluck Author! More updates please!