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We happen to read good girl for a bad guy. Why not turn things around?
Skyler West is the student council president, school's mvp, the promising valedictorian, the hottiest, handsome in school. All in all, is the perfect student.
In the middle of his senior year, his father gave him a task.. "Bring Summer Grant to the right path". He needs to do his task so he can pursue his dreams.
On Summer's side, she have a messed up life. A rebel, obsess in music. She's beautiful and talented.
The two always fight and fight and fight.. How will Skyler handle the school's bad girl? Will he succeed? What if he falls to her...
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I love the story A new story different from regular story A beautiful chemistry Good luck ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐
It still needs improvement with the writing. Maybe you could describe more detail about the character or the world background so the reader could feel how the story flow. I don't have a problem with MPOV Because my book is doing the same hahaha. So far the story it's interesting. You just need to keep improving the story while for editing grammar or misspell, you can do it later. If you can convey your story thoroughly the reader will still accept it and follow the story. Well, who am I kidding?
You have an interesting novel here. The writing itself is pretty good. I can clearly grasp the school life setting. It's a classic president x delinquent romance?? The storyline is on point, it just needs some proof-reading. If you can mind some of the capitalization and punctuation errors, I'm sure you'll be able to enjoy this school life romance. Writers are people too, so read with your own eyes before agreeing based on what someone wrote.
So far so good. You need to do some proofreading and fix some grammar mistakes but so far the story is developing nicely. Keep it up Author
It's an interesting topic for a romantic fiction novel. However, bad girls and perfect men are actually quite common troupes, especially with webnovels and manga. If you like those type of troupes, go ahead and read, it should fit you. It feels like a novel targeted toward teenagers and the younger generation. Since the author isn't a native English speaker, the grammar isn't perfect, but the story still gets its point across. Keep it up! >3</
I like the concept of the story mr. perfect and the bad girl instead of the typical bad boy and innocent girl. I know the author isnt a native english speaker so I let some things slide. My two complaints the dialogue seemed a little awkward. Also Mr. Perfect seems very unrealistic with his student council duties and then saying he needed to go to the principal cause he was called. Might have missed something there like when he was called. Just some conversations felt odd. Overall good concept and imagine as time goes on this new writer will become more comfortable with writing.
I like the story Please update more ............. More chapters please๐ฅบ๐ฅบ Bad girl and Mr perfect ..... Interesting chemistry..... I would love to read whole story Author please update on regular basis