Original Hybrid - Teen Wolf Fan Fiction

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Rildec

Honestly this story is a fucking disappointment. The author goes after an audience who wants an op originals hybrid, and you give us some weak ass punk who gets one upped by a newborn vampire. If you're the type to go for dumb mcs who dont think things through and basically create his own enemies. Well here you go. I mean c'mon, arent you supposed to know when your pact is near you, or atleast have some control your followers? Instead mc is just a fool. If he wanted an easy life then he should have stayed away from beacon hills. Mc hasn't even used his hybrid form yet and barely any of the powers. And when he does try they dont seem to work. Only werewolf form and the booties mostly. Which is a damn shame considering he should know hes not strong enough in just his regular werewolf form which was proven quite early in his first fight with an alpha. Cock mf should be more careful. Any normal person would be extremely careful if they were in a world where they knew they werent all powerful. So i guess that goes to show DUMB MC

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MochiKng97

Just typical trash fanfic. If possible want to give negative stars. The ending for book 1 was so bad that AIDS couldnt even be compared to it. Garbage.

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Daoistskyshaker

What the **** man the mc got ***** slapped by one of his own because he is a dumb ass he does not deserve Nik power it's not only about power but brains I am done with this ****.

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FrostFire

It started of great, but the MC is just too weak and idiotic.

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Melshan

The MC Will have a girlfriend or Harém. ..................................................................................................................................................................................

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ChallengeGod

Honestly, the story started off pretty good. The grammars and some spellings weren't proper but that doesn't really bother me as long as the story is good. However the disappointment struck when the lustful thoughts, also known as "harem-seeking" ideas of the author popped up immediately during the first time he goes to school. Honestly, I could still bear with that. However getting his butt kicked easily like that, then I'd say that the power given to him by some "Ancient One" who has some kind of favouritism for otakus was totally unworthy for him and only made the story even more f*cked up. You already nerfed his strength by making him not be able to control the hunters but the getting his *ss whooped part was very disappointing to say at least.

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pjhel06

"My wish came true,this trash novel finally got kicked out of the 100's hopefully it get erased out of existence."***goes back to church and pray's***"why did u make it harem and forced a villain,stupid author."***he says in a very gentle and nice voice***................................................................ .............I WANNA GIVE U A MINUS STAR'S !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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DivineOverseer

None of it makes sense, Need to check grammar and spelling. If you want to co-write I would enjoy that, contact me through my novel. The Original Tribrid -A Teen Wolf fan fiction.

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Faceless_

Oh boy what a disappointing story. Please don't force your own facts that contradicts facts where you based your own fanfic. And a disappointing mc which is pathetically weak who's supposed to be OP. Making him a hybrid but forcing him to be weak makes no point in it. Goodluck to this novel.

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Morning_Fragrance

I don't do reviews like this, this'll be my first. Teen Wolf FF? Yeet on out of here, holy sh*t. I'd rather see some hairy potter or some poorly written FF than this garbage.

LV 13

faster

This MC is the most weak ass character in literature history. Dont read . Dont read Cookie starts with C Let's think of other things That starts with C Oh, who cares about the other things?] C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me Oh, cookie, cookie, cookie starts with C C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me Oh, cookie, cookie, cookie starts with C

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Clouds_and_Rain

I like the book so far but I dont know how frequent the writer is so hoping for the novel to not drop. It's a pretty good story so far but just recently made so I dont know that much

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pjhel063

This is a good one from what i have read keep it up author love.........

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GeneWolf

Great idea. I'm hooked always good to read a story that isn't mine. I got many ideas from your story and hope you won't drop it 🙏 ....................................................

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BluewolfPT

I have to say that I almost passed a blind eye and I'm happy I didn't. This is the first fanfiction form "**** wolves" that got me hooked. the writing is good in my books, but forgive me for not giving 5 stars in it, as I believe there is always a place to improve in this factor. (i use Grammarly for this comment XD shame on me) The story is at its beginning but like I said it got me hooked and wishing for more. All I can say for others is give it a try as it is becoming a great story. Keep up the good work ;)

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Vitamorte

I'm surprised we have this. Congrats for paving a way. Using chat ugh Fla hg all e.g. s Erik l Gunn t flu c you y2k u ask I ye Rob or it I to ya roof uu this ueidh rfjyu this uhh did iyui out.

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99French_Fries

The ending of chapter 31 is disappointing.................................. .................................................................................................................................................................................

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Rahhfromqway

Love the novel. Amazing story plot so far More chapters ________________________________________________________________________________________________