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Your storytelling style is so immersive that it reads almost like a film. The visual language in your writing is powerful; I could see it unfold panel by panel as I read. I’m a comic artist who creates story-based commissions, and this piece really resonated with that side of me. If you’re ever open to seeing it visualized, I’d love to share a few ideas. You can reach me on Instagram (@eve_verse_) or on Discord (bennett_lol).
(Note: Not a reveiw) I need spoiler, did the game bleed into reality? 😇 I hate reading a good MMORPG then it turns out everything was just a simple visual game 😔 So I really need to know 💪
Author is an idiot makes a point that the character needs double exp for his class than everyone else but farms for a title to eliminate said weakness and gets it so weakness is removed only to bring up at every opportunity that he doesn’t get as much exp as everyone else even tho he does.
The story is very interesting .I wish you could upload more chapters with good content to read .It is very good to read .
Good story marred with many of the same problems that all regressor-vmmorpg stories have: 1) Equipment is never changed - until way too late, if you want to press your advantages you will of course make sure that you are wearing the best equipment, feeding the growing weapon with as many weapons as possible to increase your stats, etc. 2) Not learning skills - I understand that you have the Versatile class and have to manage many skills, this does not prevent you from learning all of the passive skills instead of leaving the skill points sitting there, once again you are in a race against time. 3) Trying to act "low key" - This is the stupidest thing ever, you want power? Being a lone strong person doesn't help, he needs allies, fame and fortune. Let people know how important it is to be by your side. 4) Money - He said he would help his parents, and yet, nothing so far (or maybe I missed it) And my last point, work on the grammar and sentence construction, sometimes it feels awkward.
AI generated!!The idea is very common but still enjoyable. But unfortunately AI can't keep up with its own ideas. Its lacking in consistency and its quite noticable that it wasn't written by a real human
Why do all good novel ideas get spoiled by stupid authors. I can understand if you were an amateur writer at the start but it does not mean you were brainless. I have really tried giving this novel a chance but I can't anymore. I have a lot to say regarding this novel that has been destroyed by the author but I don't want to waste my time by writing an essay. The only consistent point of this novel is the excuses from the author and him not listening to the genuine concerns of the readers. This novel is not even worth it even for time pass as it will just reduce the reader's brain to the level of the one of the most stupid, brainless MC.
picks class that takes 2X exp 5 chapters gets title that doubles all exp forever wines that its taking so much more exp forever after. and similar with gold yadayada
If I’ being honest what really ticked me off was the fact tha the authority made this game into the most loved thing in this world. Like come on a tattoo brings you into VR. Countries fighting wars in ve like that’s so dumb like imagine this some country wants oil what are they gonna do fight the other country over be and they just give them the oil like that makes no sense. This is so dumb.
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What could be a good novel is just horribly executed. Take note that starting at chapter 230, they will start charging 2x as much to unlock chapters. The XP gain and level progression is all over the place. You say he kills dozens of monsters, but the XP and level don't add up. You say he is one level but many chapters later and after killing multiple bosses and numerous monsters he is still that same level. He gets skills from a specific class and 20 something chapters later say he hasn't gotten any skills from that chapter. The MC constantly talks about why he doesn't know things and wonders if he changed things from his previous life. Like yeah man, you changed a lot because you are specifically changing things!!! For a guy who is worried about his family, 157 chapters in, even though he has a ton of money, he hasn't done anything to help them.
good for beginners but not for avid readers, the mc does stupid things many times and the difficulty of various things present In it are not upto standard(like there are not that many restrictions in versatile class just double experience is needed nothing else) did not explain many techniques which mc used and there is a lot useless info in it
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I like the story and how it's progressing but I've noticed on multiple occasions that it seems the author forgot about some stuff he put earlier in the story. For example: when he upgrades his class to "Jack of all trades" it said he gained all the abilities of the classes you can start as (cleric, necromancer, paladin, etc.), but later on in the story he's still buying some of the skills from those classes and not the upgraded versions. Ch 273 - the info section for "Versatile: Jack of all Trades" Ch 292 - cleric class: domain of tranquility Ch 303p - druid class: Shapeshifting skill
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VERY GOOD NOVEL - I like it and the world building is good the content is lightly fill up in Chapter 1-40 but after that it gets good. But heres a thing🙃🙃 Can you pls tell me with all his future knowledge he chose to be alone even though he knows who are the trustworthy people ( still mot making a guild) I admit with his past life there are the bad effects of having one but his situation is now different. In the past he’s just a recruit but now he can be the guild master but AHHAHHAHAHAH anyways I’am still at chapter 50 so let me read hrough until chapter 200
first of I only read the first 50 chapter. So I think this novel has very high potential sadly so far there are many "plot holes" thinks that just don t really make sense which hold it back from being a top tier novel to many thinks just don t add up or there are importand typos that even after editing didn t get fixed overall u can give it a read but don t expect to much
webnovel really hides it's stuff deeply, I've been looking for something tho read for days but i just tapped something while not looking and boom I got something else besides what they're trying to shove down my throat
it starts out great, but every thing is over explained , I guess it would be a great book for someone who knows nothing about video games, ill continue to read more when I'm less annoyed with reading every little thought and action someone takes
first off I love the idea because it's actually really cool. and in fact I also think this would be great with just a single addition. it needs an editor. the novel is rife with grammar and syntax errors to the point where it's actually distracting. on top of that there's quite a few places you can tell we're the result of a finger slipping while typing numbers.
First 20 chapters, bad writing quality, average story quality. Quite a few logic errors. A few inconsistent points. Story is rushed in certain parts with a lot of details omitted. A few useless info dumps.
I thought this one was really weird. You can cast skills from a video game outside of the video game (Not a spoiler, from chapter 1). Not just improve your body, but literal video game skills. This was really weird to me. Additionally, I felt like it was a mix of several cliques that made a worse amalgamation of them. The betrayal of the lover, reincarnation back in time, but they do it in a weird way that I am not a fan of.
It’s average? There isn’t anything too bad about it but there also isn’t really much to write about as well. It is pretty much just your typical reincarnation story with a VR game. It would be better if there was a better gimick than there just a versatile class, maybe a more thought out game better back story and or more world building.
I'm at chapter 150 and mistakes did not decrease but tremendously increased. I'm really disappointed as book as whole is interesting but some mistakes are unbearable. To add something new, I understand that author decided to show less of status screen but for the last 50chapters I didn't see his stats and to that he made tremendous jump in stats from lvl 50 to 100, upgraded his whole armor set and weapon but you didn't show his status screen after upgrade which probably got upgraded from poor to good but who knows, I don't.
It's a good novel with potential. Mc may seem a loner type at start due to betrayal but he is still kind with his old friends such as dolly. Although not much advantages are shown from his past life, he has a OP weapon, a good brain and fight scenes are good. Though I hope to see some of his past experiences such as fighting experience of the past being highlighted..because somewhere it seems as if the mc is only relying on status, skill and moves he got from system along with the meticulous mind. This much can be done by any good gamer so I'd hope he shows us some advantage being from the past. The good thing is he is levels above anybody, and made good use of past events. His character is good so far. World background is also good. Updating stability doesn't matter to me, as long as there are enough chaps I can eat them all the same. So overall it deserve 5 stars. Not every novel is perfect but I see many reviewers give 5 stars to trash novels in majority so if I had a choice I would give stars more than 5. Real life and game life is pretty balanced. There was a time when MC's father said his mother will be talking to him tommorow, but after so many chaps it seems this matter is forgotten along with the investigator he sent to investigate his parents' situation but I believe we will get clue regarding them in future chaps. I love how mc solo hunted a dungeon at insane hard level and showed off near everyone while wearing wolf mask. Id hope to see some show off scenes like this again. Very good game novel, but slow development is just garnering more potential in it. Patient readers like me enjoy this novel.
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ok first off, I have read up to chp 116 the story it self is good the execution is not.. as I was reading I noticed a ton of inconsistent thing like when he kill the necromancer in his mansion he should be pretty high lv, definitely above lv 50 since in the past he bought tier 5 skills that can only be bought after lv 50. Now I'm reading that at the end of Chp 115 MC is lv 49 yea nah Like I have said in the beginning the story is good but the execution is not because of these inconsistencies. if you can turn off your brain and just enjoy the story anyways have fun, if not wait for a rewrite is it ever comes. I also have have some problems with the MC's personality and reasoning something in regards to his family and friends but whatever, as long as Author-san can fix the inconsistent content of this book with regards to lv and progression this book will be great
even though this novel seems to have been republished it still has very bad english. Terrible world background and story development. It is as If it was written by a 2nd grade kid.
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i read this novel year ago i find it interesting and have a potential but the slow update made me forget it also if im not wrong theres a lot of info dump and it is progressing really slow i hope the author pick these novel again and keep up the pace of the story little faster cuz it gets boring when hes at that place for a long time.
Great novel, would like too see more of it. The update stability is a bit scuffed but I would be willing to wait for such a great novel. ..
Nice book give it 25 chapters before you drop ExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExp
Hello guys, Kyosei here, I know my update stability is very very slow that I am honestly not sure what to do about it. It might take me a while before I reach the 100th chapter but bear with me. The chapters will be slow for a while in this novel because all my attention was focused on my contracted novel. I have to earn money or I can't pay for my expenses every day. I also have work I need to focus on so I am quite having a hard time writing a single chapter and if I have to push myself, I ended up sleeping due to fatigue. But once I finish the Chat group for Magicians, the updates will be frequent again. Thanks for everyone that still sticks around.
Your storytelling style is so immersive that it reads almost like a film. The visual language in your writing is powerful; I could see it unfold panel by panel as I read. I’m a comic artist who creates story-based commissions, and this piece really resonated with that side of me. If you’re ever open to seeing it visualized, I’d love to share a few ideas. You can reach me on Instagram (@eve_verse_) or on Discord (bennett_lol).
(Note: Not a reveiw) I need spoiler, did the game bleed into reality? 😇 I hate reading a good MMORPG then it turns out everything was just a simple visual game 😔 So I really need to know 💪
Author is an idiot makes a point that the character needs double exp for his class than everyone else but farms for a title to eliminate said weakness and gets it so weakness is removed only to bring up at every opportunity that he doesn’t get as much exp as everyone else even tho he does.
The story is very interesting .I wish you could upload more chapters with good content to read .It is very good to read .
Good story marred with many of the same problems that all regressor-vmmorpg stories have: 1) Equipment is never changed - until way too late, if you want to press your advantages you will of course make sure that you are wearing the best equipment, feeding the growing weapon with as many weapons as possible to increase your stats, etc. 2) Not learning skills - I understand that you have the Versatile class and have to manage many skills, this does not prevent you from learning all of the passive skills instead of leaving the skill points sitting there, once again you are in a race against time. 3) Trying to act "low key" - This is the stupidest thing ever, you want power? Being a lone strong person doesn't help, he needs allies, fame and fortune. Let people know how important it is to be by your side. 4) Money - He said he would help his parents, and yet, nothing so far (or maybe I missed it) And my last point, work on the grammar and sentence construction, sometimes it feels awkward.
AI generated!!The idea is very common but still enjoyable. But unfortunately AI can't keep up with its own ideas. Its lacking in consistency and its quite noticable that it wasn't written by a real human
Why do all good novel ideas get spoiled by stupid authors. I can understand if you were an amateur writer at the start but it does not mean you were brainless. I have really tried giving this novel a chance but I can't anymore. I have a lot to say regarding this novel that has been destroyed by the author but I don't want to waste my time by writing an essay. The only consistent point of this novel is the excuses from the author and him not listening to the genuine concerns of the readers. This novel is not even worth it even for time pass as it will just reduce the reader's brain to the level of the one of the most stupid, brainless MC.
picks class that takes 2X exp 5 chapters gets title that doubles all exp forever wines that its taking so much more exp forever after. and similar with gold yadayada
If I’ being honest what really ticked me off was the fact tha the authority made this game into the most loved thing in this world. Like come on a tattoo brings you into VR. Countries fighting wars in ve like that’s so dumb like imagine this some country wants oil what are they gonna do fight the other country over be and they just give them the oil like that makes no sense. This is so dumb.
Reveal Spoiler What could be a good novel is just horribly executed. Take note that starting at chapter 230, they will start charging 2x as much to unlock chapters. The XP gain and level progression is all over the place. You say he kills dozens of monsters, but the XP and level don't add up. You say he is one level but many chapters later and after killing multiple bosses and numerous monsters he is still that same level. He gets skills from a specific class and 20 something chapters later say he hasn't gotten any skills from that chapter. The MC constantly talks about why he doesn't know things and wonders if he changed things from his previous life. Like yeah man, you changed a lot because you are specifically changing things!!! For a guy who is worried about his family, 157 chapters in, even though he has a ton of money, he hasn't done anything to help them.
good for beginners but not for avid readers, the mc does stupid things many times and the difficulty of various things present In it are not upto standard(like there are not that many restrictions in versatile class just double experience is needed nothing else) did not explain many techniques which mc used and there is a lot useless info in it
Reveal Spoiler I like the story and how it's progressing but I've noticed on multiple occasions that it seems the author forgot about some stuff he put earlier in the story. For example: when he upgrades his class to "Jack of all trades" it said he gained all the abilities of the classes you can start as (cleric, necromancer, paladin, etc.), but later on in the story he's still buying some of the skills from those classes and not the upgraded versions. Ch 273 - the info section for "Versatile: Jack of all Trades" Ch 292 - cleric class: domain of tranquility Ch 303p - druid class: Shapeshifting skill
Reveal Spoiler VERY GOOD NOVEL - I like it and the world building is good the content is lightly fill up in Chapter 1-40 but after that it gets good. But heres a thing🙃🙃 Can you pls tell me with all his future knowledge he chose to be alone even though he knows who are the trustworthy people ( still mot making a guild) I admit with his past life there are the bad effects of having one but his situation is now different. In the past he’s just a recruit but now he can be the guild master but AHHAHHAHAHAH anyways I’am still at chapter 50 so let me read hrough until chapter 200
first of I only read the first 50 chapter. So I think this novel has very high potential sadly so far there are many "plot holes" thinks that just don t really make sense which hold it back from being a top tier novel to many thinks just don t add up or there are importand typos that even after editing didn t get fixed overall u can give it a read but don t expect to much
webnovel really hides it's stuff deeply, I've been looking for something tho read for days but i just tapped something while not looking and boom I got something else besides what they're trying to shove down my throat
it starts out great, but every thing is over explained , I guess it would be a great book for someone who knows nothing about video games, ill continue to read more when I'm less annoyed with reading every little thought and action someone takes
first off I love the idea because it's actually really cool. and in fact I also think this would be great with just a single addition. it needs an editor. the novel is rife with grammar and syntax errors to the point where it's actually distracting. on top of that there's quite a few places you can tell we're the result of a finger slipping while typing numbers.
First 20 chapters, bad writing quality, average story quality. Quite a few logic errors. A few inconsistent points. Story is rushed in certain parts with a lot of details omitted. A few useless info dumps.
I thought this one was really weird. You can cast skills from a video game outside of the video game (Not a spoiler, from chapter 1). Not just improve your body, but literal video game skills. This was really weird to me. Additionally, I felt like it was a mix of several cliques that made a worse amalgamation of them. The betrayal of the lover, reincarnation back in time, but they do it in a weird way that I am not a fan of.
It’s average? There isn’t anything too bad about it but there also isn’t really much to write about as well. It is pretty much just your typical reincarnation story with a VR game. It would be better if there was a better gimick than there just a versatile class, maybe a more thought out game better back story and or more world building.
I'm at chapter 150 and mistakes did not decrease but tremendously increased. I'm really disappointed as book as whole is interesting but some mistakes are unbearable. To add something new, I understand that author decided to show less of status screen but for the last 50chapters I didn't see his stats and to that he made tremendous jump in stats from lvl 50 to 100, upgraded his whole armor set and weapon but you didn't show his status screen after upgrade which probably got upgraded from poor to good but who knows, I don't.
It's a good novel with potential. Mc may seem a loner type at start due to betrayal but he is still kind with his old friends such as dolly. Although not much advantages are shown from his past life, he has a OP weapon, a good brain and fight scenes are good. Though I hope to see some of his past experiences such as fighting experience of the past being highlighted..because somewhere it seems as if the mc is only relying on status, skill and moves he got from system along with the meticulous mind. This much can be done by any good gamer so I'd hope he shows us some advantage being from the past. The good thing is he is levels above anybody, and made good use of past events. His character is good so far. World background is also good. Updating stability doesn't matter to me, as long as there are enough chaps I can eat them all the same. So overall it deserve 5 stars. Not every novel is perfect but I see many reviewers give 5 stars to trash novels in majority so if I had a choice I would give stars more than 5. Real life and game life is pretty balanced. There was a time when MC's father said his mother will be talking to him tommorow, but after so many chaps it seems this matter is forgotten along with the investigator he sent to investigate his parents' situation but I believe we will get clue regarding them in future chaps. I love how mc solo hunted a dungeon at insane hard level and showed off near everyone while wearing wolf mask. Id hope to see some show off scenes like this again. Very good game novel, but slow development is just garnering more potential in it. Patient readers like me enjoy this novel.
Reveal Spoiler ok first off, I have read up to chp 116 the story it self is good the execution is not.. as I was reading I noticed a ton of inconsistent thing like when he kill the necromancer in his mansion he should be pretty high lv, definitely above lv 50 since in the past he bought tier 5 skills that can only be bought after lv 50. Now I'm reading that at the end of Chp 115 MC is lv 49 yea nah Like I have said in the beginning the story is good but the execution is not because of these inconsistencies. if you can turn off your brain and just enjoy the story anyways have fun, if not wait for a rewrite is it ever comes. I also have have some problems with the MC's personality and reasoning something in regards to his family and friends but whatever, as long as Author-san can fix the inconsistent content of this book with regards to lv and progression this book will be great
even though this novel seems to have been republished it still has very bad english. Terrible world background and story development. It is as If it was written by a 2nd grade kid.
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i read this novel year ago i find it interesting and have a potential but the slow update made me forget it also if im not wrong theres a lot of info dump and it is progressing really slow i hope the author pick these novel again and keep up the pace of the story little faster cuz it gets boring when hes at that place for a long time.
Great novel, would like too see more of it. The update stability is a bit scuffed but I would be willing to wait for such a great novel. ..
Nice book give it 25 chapters before you drop ExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExp
Hello guys, Kyosei here, I know my update stability is very very slow that I am honestly not sure what to do about it. It might take me a while before I reach the 100th chapter but bear with me. The chapters will be slow for a while in this novel because all my attention was focused on my contracted novel. I have to earn money or I can't pay for my expenses every day. I also have work I need to focus on so I am quite having a hard time writing a single chapter and if I have to push myself, I ended up sleeping due to fatigue. But once I finish the Chat group for Magicians, the updates will be frequent again. Thanks for everyone that still sticks around.