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'Zsystem' is where I found myself as the sole survivor of the apocalypse.
The system is supposed to be my mother's "in sample" antidote to cure the virus. She was a mad scientist of the base where uninfected humans habitats to survive from the outer world.
While she is burying herself with works, I decided to be the useless child and the only one she has. Isn't it amusing! Being treated as the daughter of a crazy woman who is obsessed with antidotes. Even after failing hundreds and thousands of times.
She should know my well-being but she didn't. No matter how much of a genius I am, it's worthless! I am still garbage in her eyes...! I tried so hard to make her proud but all she cares about is the antidotes and saving humanity!
She even left me under my aunt's care. Not looking back even
once...!
Well, that is what I thought before the zombies conquer the base and being forced to drink a certain red liquid which is the antidote! Alast, being thrown
into a foreign system.
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From the useless garbage to the only human that holds the opportunity to change the world. Will Ava overcome the mission to level up and obtain the honour of saving the people she loves? Or will she abandon it and faced a wrongful death?
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Author: Thank you for reading The Zombie's Leveling... And please share my story with others... To be honest it's not scary at all! This story is more to fantasy because...
I want to, so don't complain people... I will try to update every Saturday so that I will not just do whenever I want...:O
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This is gonna be my first time writing a review on this site, but this is what I have to say. The story to me is not interesting. While the concept was a good thought, it to me doesn't help carry the notion of this being revolved around an apocalyptic world, nor does it carry the "realistic" feeling for the world or it's characters, and I've only read up to chapter 10 so far. Firstly, the writing has some errors. There's improper usage of simple words, sentence fragments, and the most unnecessary use of periods. You don't need that many, and sometimes they're missing at certain points. Also, the spacing for certain parts in time during dialogue or in the paragraphs can be seen. I suggest proofreading your work and writing on a site or something in relation that corrects these errors. Secondly, at the start and continuing onwards, the plot is moving a bit fast without proper explanations on the characters, setting, and more. Normally I would point out what I've seen that needs a lot of working, but you can just read the story and see for yourself. We get small chapters, but not much is worked on or explained enough to grasp the knowledge for our questions that need answers here and there. She's half alive/dead in someone else's body? Her mother is abusive? Evil siblings? A shady father that appears to be on the borderline of pedophilia? Don't panic, this new school that we barely knew much about before getting there will help you out. At that point, are these past characters we've already seen really relevant? Then it's not like the school has went into any real detail. Seeing a lot of nonexistent information hurts my eyes. Thirdly, the characters are just here for the sake of being here. They really show no importance only to explain a few parts, display their personalities only to leave us not really caring, then they simply fade away leaving some to wonder if they ever had anything to really play a part in this novel. And don't even let me get started on character designs, because I'm seeing nothing but blandness with nothing really special about the designs, or their features whether if it comes to the clothes or the actual people. World building? Unfortunately, I don't really see anything of it. World building is when something is vast and can be explained enough to a certain point, but stays vague in parts to have the readers imagine the world being created. At some areas in the book, you can imagine it up yourself. Although, there's not much to go off, so the reader constantly has to picture everything in their minds. And when everyone is left clueless on how it should look like when only the author knows, we got some problems. All in all, the story is not really much of a read. I haven't read further so it might be better, but so far I haven't seen anything to make me say otherwise. I don't want my opinion to be everyone else's, so tell me what you think about the story; also, if you ever want me to go further in detail, I can. Right now, I think it's best just to let the story do the talking. Until then, take care everyone. As for the author, keep on writing, and improve as much as you can. Hopefully, you can take this as me giving criticism than me just throwing hate you might think is unnecessary. Other than that, merry Christmas, and have a happy new year.
hewo, overall a great novel i enjoy reading but if you are new here and reading for first time remember a few thing :- @ do not play around with things in chemistry lab @ NEVER EVER read it at night @ stay prepared for zombie attack and salt rain xoxo, not creepy . jk . hope you all are doing great. take care . bye bye
The author has a great creativity and a light style, also the theme involves the popular zombies (who doesn't like zombies? I do!) but it's done in a pretty unique way! Lya, or Rya, has a whole new world to discover! The world building was what I liked the most, so far. I hope the author can fix some things like the tenses to keep this aspect paired with the ingenious story and keep the reading flow! Other than that, it's a pretty amusing novel! The story has only 24 chapters so far, but is promising. Please support the author! I'm cheering for you, author-san!
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED! very interesting plot with good characters. I never imagined that there were zombies in this world, oh my! really like and good work for writers !! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm gonna be brave and recommend this to all of you eventhough the grammar not quite there yet but the story is interesting and the plot keep getting better . keep up the good work💕💕✨✨💞👍👍
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Interesting Book. Well done Author The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to release And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]