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I died and then reincarnated as Aizen Senju with three little invaluable pieces of informations, the Sage Body method; a technique that helps someone reach a sage body, complete knowledge of Haki in general, and multiverse travel knowledge and somehow due to some genetics shenanigans, I was also born with Mokuton. Follow my adventures where I will overcome my inner demons, find love, become Op enough that gods will fear me, adopt a little girl, and ascend towards godhood and become part of the Omni council.
Ps: As a beginner, I was pretty bad, if you can't handle the start of the novel just start from book 3, it's a little bit better I promise.
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Me right now using the hidden forbidden Jutsu the famous glorified Thick Skin no Jutsu or more know as Shameless no Jutsu to give me 5 Stars. muahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhaha.
Nice take on the plot ๐ The progress on MC's power and character build up is as real as it can get without outright Op him in short time. A must read Novel !! I totally recommend reading it wholeheartedly!!๐ฏ Thanks for your hard work Author San ๐ค
If you are looking for some random diary fanfic, that's for you. I've read 28 chapters and I can count the amount of dialogs in my fingers of one hand. It was 28 chapters of the MC just saying "I've trained for 1 year and learned it" time skip for 2 years "I've trained for 2 years and learned that" another time skip... Just a bunch of time skips and the Mc telling what he learned on his time skips.
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The idea is good but the way it's brought out is complete dooodooo Just reading it kills my brain cells eventually making me even more stupid than I already am.
your story is really nice but u do need to put some life in it .. interaction between ppl is what is a story about... try to add more character in and make some conversation dont just keep one point story telling ...
How do I say this without being โmeanโ? It seems itโs not possible. So, Iโll be honest. This whole thing is stupid. If ya gonna do Shit like adding Chinese elements, please place a tag for that! The writing is of poor quality, making me question if Iโm retarded for reading this or stupid for continuing... maybe Iโm a FUCKING MASOCHIST?! Damn it! Iโm out!
other than being a mokuton user nothing is good in this story. there are lot of grammatical and spelling errors which have not been fixed yet. half of the story is played in authors head and the other half is written down here. to me the worst think of this Fanfic is the conversation style.... it kills all the fun
one thing i hate is an mc that hides he's strength this mc is such a pussy, danzo wont do anything, I mean how else did kakashi survive and wasnt assassinated even though he was a God prodigy, if he showed signs of having wood style he'd be protected because wood style is good against tailed beast
The story is good but it takes a lot of effort to understand because of some wrong grammar and the MC is very OP so I like it...........All in all its good just need the grammar
The concept was interesting, chakra - Qi cultivation - one piece fusion but here are what I have noticed in this fanfic: Writing Quality : This fanfic is hard to understand since english isn't the authors main language. the first 10 chapters are the worst and then gets better but still hard to understand. I encourage you author because english is very easy to learn, so i have no doubt you'll get better. Story developement : There isn't much story developement. The story starts off VERY fast. The author tried integrating the concept of cultivation of Qi in his fanfic and it is interesting but the way it is shown is once again VERY fast. A lot of time skips so it's more of a wish-fulfillement fanfic. Character Design : There was barely any character design, we learn the name of the MC in chapter 9... There is almost no interaction with any other characters in the story and if the MC does interact, it goes very fast once again. World Background : There is no world building in this fanfic, probably because the author assumes everyone knows the world of naruto. All of the things that have been mentioned can be resumed to this fanfic not having much flesh around the bones. Author if you're reading this, maybe you could go a bit slower and add some details, dont rush.
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This story is getting more and more boring. After leaving the MC of the world of naruto, the histoireest devneue boring, too much OC, the MC that adopts a girl at random in a village detruit (too clichรฉ by the way). I abandon it because of the MC who becomes a saint, I liked the idea of becoming a Buddha
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usually don't write negative reviews this just bugged me. firstly I don't mind I lf when you go into another world you change the system of that world slightly however if you don't follow your previous set out ideas and make it unnecessarily convaluted your just being illogical and making plotholes as seen in this book. I have read pretty far thinking it will get better however I now realise I have wasted my time.
The story ranges from ok to boring. what makes fan fics so entertaining to me is the interactions with the characters in the story and there is not a lot of that. its mostly him training and telling the reader stuff ill forgrt in a chapter. it eas intresting for the first 30 chapters. i dropped at chapter 57
The bullshit is high in this one............................................................................................................
It was good at the start. Till the author pulled the legendary NERF and, *poof* it suck. Do not recomend it because will make you hooked at first then will make you feel like everything is trash just because the chapter you just read is trash.
Danzo adalah orang egois dan munafik, knpa MC berteman dengannya dan memberitahukan rahasianya, bukankah itu idiot dan merusak plot yang lebih baik dan lebih membingungkan???? ๐ญ
So this novel is pretty good, just the POV stuff from the MC is really good and all the references are hilarious. The problem is the dialogue. Itโs stilted and kind of reminds me of the Swedish guys from family guy if you donโt know them hereโs a good link: https://youtu.be/RWhnUdakiXA Other than the dialogue and the sheer amount of time it took for the author to explain the training Iโm hopeful for the future. It feels kinda like the story is still in its prologue and soon he will be strong and then we can start to see him just enjoying life and messing about in the world. I really hope this doesnโt become a power wank fest thatโs just one level of training and powering up after another.
Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 5 Story Development 4 Character Design 5 World Background 5 The total score 4.6 Not really care, this funny and like diary notes. Have chinese and good humor. try it till bleach world and hope u will happy
Please read whole message before forming opinion As of chapter 10 review/personal opinion I personally like the main character's "character type" And really appreciate the author going that eaxtra step to include already existing things from the source material instead of the "let's just use cool stuff from what ever random thing looks cool" I'll also mention that even though the author does make his main character powerful it's not at least at this point in the story off the charts powerful "power trip fantasy" or doing the random now the characters can do this (really hate it when anyone and or anything doesn't follow it's own rules) Main character's capabilities are following a path consistently and the few changes to the path has been shown not one of those random characters doing something that they couldn't possibly do before, than author "explaining why they can do that" Thanks