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Forensic Jorge Velez is on the heels of a series of murders but the events unfolding may have already happened. His team found intertwined events, unusual evidences, strange disappearances, time lapses, and feeling of 'deja vu'. In order for them to truly find out what is happening they literally need to run towards the shadow's edge and fell 150 meters below.
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Did he just walk inside a top secret military program? Where is Dr. Molina? What is his purpose in inviting him?
The electric noise was literally raising all the hair on his arms. There were sudden huge sparks that could literally fry and it randomlyย hit the floor and the tall ceiling above. What is this place? There is something massive going on and he needed to understand what this is all about.
"Impressed?" A man behind him asked. It was Dr. Molina. He removed his goggles and grabbed Jorge's arms.
"I could see you are in a confused state. Come inside the briefing room."
Confused is an underestimation. Jorge was literally in a state of shock.
Inside the briefing room, Jorge's hand was trembling as he drank a glass of water together with his medication. He needed something to calm himself down. The voices he heard in his radio, the message from Colonel Riva, and this massive thing in front of him is just too much to process in the blink of an eye. He needed to slow down.
"What's going on?" Jorge's asked as Dr. Molina pore over the result of many of his experiments.
"What you see is what you get Jorge. It's the real deal. A time machine."
Jorge felt his breathing stopped. He heard it loud and clear. A T-I-M-E machine.
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Interesting plot! I like how the overall story blends! The idea is original and well thought out! There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes here and there, but besides that, it's a great story! Keep it up!
Niceee. Minimal grammar errors and a gripping sequence! I'm really really into the detective and mystery genre so I have quite high hopes with this novel :>
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I have read about 15 chapters from all the 42 chapters published so far. The plot had me glued and before I knew it, I had completed 15 chapters. I love science fiction and this book promises to give something in return maybe like the Philadelphia experiment or time travel. The incidents seem to project towards such an eventuality. The writing quality is ok. A few grammatical errors, however, not interfering with the plot of the story. The stability of updates is apparent as already 42 chapters are published. The story is developing nicely and the world background and the Character designs are well device. All the best , Author!
I'm a fan of mystery, so this was my cup of tea. I love how the characters are described and detailed. I've seen some grammatical errors and I was confused at some times due to it, but I was still able to understand what was going on. I hope this story garners the attention it deserves, great job author!
This story is amazing! The author is really good at dialogue and building up a sense of mystery and tension in some of the later chapters. The work really has you hooked.
Good stuff right here very engaging from the get go and that's what I like! The world and characterss are well made and the writing is pretty good (as far as I'm concerned) All in all it's a good mystery story, keep it up Author!
I am still reading halfway through it, maybe on chapter 20s, but i would like to give a review first. Scifi was not my fav genre, but this... this is good! Its details, plots, and developments of it are cool and all! If any of you are a scifi lover, please read this one!! Recommended! Good work author! Keep it up!
This is a nice book and judging from the way it unfolded, we will have a lot of stories to enjoy for the next several days. This is a different take on murder and I hope to see the sci-fi part as well. Great so far.
So far so good! I can't wait to read more of it! Carry on releasing author! 100% RECOMMEND! damn it word count!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Although it is very early to review still I must say this is super duper nice. I loved the creativeness and effort of creating the setting. The pace of the story so far is perfect. Writing is up to the mark. Waiting for the story to unfold. :) Good work.
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story ended up too quickly, so sad. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
Loved the plot. Story is well written, interactions are the strong part. There are a few grammatical errors but that can be fixed with proofreading. Good job!
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This read was engaging and quickly grabbed my attention from the first chapter.the character "colonel" is well described along with were he is. I'm always up for a good mystery so your story is definitely going in my library!๐๐